这是我最头疼的地方,我BEC的成绩里听力是WEAK:(而我在复习计划的前几天是听真题,做点分析,但做下来的效果很差,基本都是错20到15个,虽然天天在空闲的时候都挂着个MP3听真题和BBC,但真的进展很小。听力这玩意,确实不是一天两天的'事情,是长时间积累的结果。所以在最后8天,我改变了策略,我在这里下了听力机经,发现其实版本并不多(没我想像的多,我想起码100来个VERSION),而且每个SECTION的主题很少有重复的,这就为牢固的记忆提供了保障,雅思英语《很高兴,10天,7分》。所以我用了7天,每天4个小时来背机经,然后最后一天把全部看了一遍,然后运气特别好,在考试的时候正好遇到两个SECTION(考的时候我都快笑出来了),而且另外两个部分我都听的不错,虽然最后一篇很有几个没听清楚。
建议:短期复习的朋友,在最后一段时间去背机经是很有用处的,因为听力这东西一定要经过长时间的锻炼(虽然背机经是一个很痛苦的过程),既然没有足够的时间,那就背机经当抱佛脚吧。
此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力,由于第一人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白,个人不代表整体。
例:I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.
这样的例子让人犹如在看记叙文,和议论文很不搭调。
《预防青少年犯罪》是一部法律宣传教育片,5个典型的青少年现身说法,讲述了自己犯罪的原因和结果。看过之后,我深有感触,这实实在在地反映了中国青少年成长过程中导致犯罪的因素。
经过对比与总结,我发现几乎片中的5个青少年都是因为结交了不良人士造成的,他们的家庭环境不同,有出生在农村的,有出生在比较富裕的家庭,但无一例外,都是因为父母工作太忙,没有时间与孩子沟通,交谈,导致青少年们没有树立起正确的法律意识。因为法律意识的淡薄,才忽视了犯罪的严重后果,从而走上了歧途。在此我呼吁家长们多与孩子沟通,走进他们的内心,让他们健康成长。
我是一名小学生,没见过什么世面,但片中的大哥哥,却使我震撼。我心中不由得想:他们为什么要这样做?他们难道不知道这样的后果吗?这些范例,给我们敲响了警钟。我们应该遵守行为规范,时时刻刻提醒自己,要做一名遵纪守法的好公民,一个健康成长的好少年。
在我们身边,也有这样的人,小病不治变大病,小错不改变大错。我在一本书上看到过这样一句话:习惯决定命运。某些不经意的动作,因没及时改正,从而产生占小便宜的想法,久而久之,就触犯了法律。
人强则家兴,家兴则国富,人是根本,未来都由我们去发展。如果所有人像片中的大哥哥那样,国家就不能发展。当好人总比坏人多,我觉得,好好读书才能为国家贡献一份力量,为社会做出贡献。
这部片子,让我明白了很多,也让我懂了很多,我希望自己长大之后是建设祖国的栋梁,就好像伟人孙中山从小就立下“振兴中华”一样,我也要建设祖国,让那些需要帮助的人得到帮助,那些该受到法律制裁的坏人受到惩罚。
让我们一起健康成长,成为一个合格的好公民!
虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式:
for example,/for instance,(后加句子)
Such as/ like (后加词组)
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。
1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。
改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)
2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。
改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)
3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。
改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。
“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe
【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
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