中考英语作文怎么改【一】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
中考英语作文怎么改【二】
整体教学是一种教学思想，不应单纯地被看为一种教学方法。整体教学思想是现代外语教育教学研究的重大成果，是社会发展和中学教育教学的目标对于外语教学的需要。外语教学和教研人员都应该认识到：整体教学是现代外语教育教学理论和实践研究的成果所确定的。现代外语教育教学理论和实践研究得出为众多外语教学流派所公认的结论有3条：
（1）部分之和不等于整体。
语言是个活的机体，不能切割成一块一块地去学。学习了某种语言一条条、一项项的知识，绝不等于掌握了语言整体。
（2）语言知识不等于语言运用。
语音、语法、词汇等只属于语言的结构体系。语音、语法、词汇等是语言运用的准备，但不等于语言运用。
（3）语言教学的目的应该是语言运用，而不是语言知识的掌握。
中考英语作文怎么改【三】
提高教师自身素质是实施素质教育的关键。教师在教学中，年复一年，届复一届地传授着同样的内容，很容易形成固定的思维模式，许多知识也会逐渐遗忘。作为“授业”和“解惑”者的教师，应该是一个自觉的终身学习者，在学习实践中不断发展创新。如果教师能把自己的学识与所教的内容融会贯通，课堂教学活动就会变得生动而有趣，学生易于理解，乐于接受，轻松自然地获取新的知识。中考英语作文怎么改【四】
教师使用课堂用语是为了提高学生的英语口语理解和表达能力，对于知识点和书面表达的掌握程度则要通过作业来练习和检验。教师多使用作业评语可以提高学生的书面理解和表达能力。课堂用语转眼即逝，而作业评语却能长久保存。在课堂上教师面对的是全班学生，在有限的课堂时间内不可能逐一对学生进行评价。而教师在批改作业时所面对的是每一位学生的作业，便于因材施教，个别指导。可以说，评语可弥补课堂教学的不足，是师生对话的一种方式。学生阅读作业评语是对语言的实际运用。因为教师在评语中所使用的语言是有实际内容的，即对某个学生及其作业的具体情况所进行的分析或评价，所以很容易被学生理解、接受或效仿。
作业评语所使用的语言应该与学生的语言水平相当。教师可以利用学生已学的单词、短语、句型、时态、语态、语气或篇章结构等，也可以用即将接触的语言。这不仅可以评价作业，而且能帮助学生巩固和运用语言
中考英语作文怎么改【五】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
中考英语作文怎么改【六】
在我们的现实生活中，也有很多像这样的事，我认为，孙阳的做法是不对的，因为他不惜欺骗自己的爸爸，让自己的小屁股受罪，另外还有最重要的一点就是：小孩子撒谎是不对的，如果养成习惯的话，对他一生的成长都是有影响的。所以我在这里劝他：请你以后不要再撒谎了，要做一个诚实的好孩子。可是，我觉得他爸爸的做法也是有所不对的，因为小孩子犯错误是很常见的事，不能以“武力”去压制他，而是用那些温柔的话去教导他，这样才能把孙阳这棵“长歪的小树”给扶正，但愿这位爸爸可以这样做，最后，我衷心地祝愿他们父子俩都能改正错误，爸爸能成为好爸爸，儿子能成为好儿子！
中考英语作文怎么改【七】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
