初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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长城,一个中国人都知道的名字,一个扎根在中国人民心中的名字,一个刻在灵魂深处的名字。
长城,始建于春秋战国时期,历时20xx多年,总长度5千万米以上。它像一条矫健的巨龙,越群山,经绝壁,穿草原,跨沙漠,起伏在崇山峻岭之巅。古今中外,凡到过长城的人无不惊叹它的磅礴的气势。据说,长城是在太空中唯一可以看到的人类文明的产物。根据历史文献记载,曾有20多个诸侯王国和封建王朝修筑过长城。我想,若要把各个时代修筑的长城加起来,那可是个天文数字啊!
长城,现在我国新疆、甘肃、宁夏、陕西、山西、内蒙古、河北、北京、天津、辽宁、吉林、黑龙江、河南、山东、湖南、湖北等省、市、自治区都有发现有古长城、烽火台的遗迹,仅明代长城从渤海湾头的山海关,起经华北的燕山、太行山和云中山,越过西北的黄土高原和贺兰山,到新疆和甘肃的嘉峪关,也有一万多里。长城铁一般的身躯,矗立在花岗岩般的宝座之上,伟踞东方,岿然不动。
万立丰在诗中写到:“不上长城非好汉,岂辞坡陡梯坏。山河表里灿斑斑。千秋遗胜迹,万国发惊叹。大隧车穿南贯北,翩跹风舞龙蟠,建成高速坦途宽。秋高气爽,四野有奇观。”
长城,修筑的历史悠久,工程胸围浩大,是世界七大奇迹之一。它是一座稀世珍宝,是艺术非凡的文物古迹。它象征着中华民族坚不可摧永存于世的意志和力量,是中华民族的骄傲,也是整个人类的骄傲。
长城,在历史的长河中,不经意间阅历了无数悲欢离合,威武雄壮的场面——孟姜女哭倒长城;王昭君出塞;苏武牧羊;汉高祖白登之围;成吉思汗征服亚欧大陆……
长城,承载着太多的情感,如今如同冰川般慢慢消残,若断了线的珍珠项链,散播在中华大地上。如果,继续将爱与恨倾泻在它身上,让金钱的***冲击在它身上,或许,长城会如亚斯兰蒂般只留存于传说中,只扎根在后人朦胧的心中。
上个星期四中午,我们班就开始停课了,到今天我们班还在停课。
这个周一早上,我和弟弟一起去爸爸厂里玩(因为我弟弟的班也在停课)。
星期一,没有停课很多小朋友都要去上学,而我和弟弟却都到爸爸厂里玩,这让厂里好多大人很意外。
黄伯伯率先问我们两个,“你们今天怎么不上学啊?今天可是星期一啊。”我们就回答黄伯伯,“因为我们班停课,我们呆在家里没事情干,就过来了。”“哦,原来如此。”黄伯伯恍然大悟。接着我们跑去妈妈办公室。
进了妈妈的.办公室,第一眼就见到了小静姐姐,小静姐姐见到我和弟弟来了,大吃一惊,“你们两个今天怎么没有上学啊?”我们又是同样的回答:“因为我们两个的班都停课,我们就和爸爸妈妈一起到厂里来了。”“哦,明白了。”
我和弟弟来到楼梯那边玩,不知不觉那个平时有位被我们称之为“西瓜”的人站在了我们的身后,我们转过来对“西瓜”笑了一下,西瓜就问我们,“你们今天怎么没有去上学啊!?”我们异口同声地回答“西瓜”,“我们两个人的班停课!”“哦,知道了。”
我和小弟弟又在走廊上遇见了金叔叔,他也问了同样的问题,“你们两个今天怎么没有去上课啊?”我悄悄对小弟弟说:“小弟弟,我们已经说过n次同样的话了,这次我们不回答了,直接逃吧!”小弟弟点点头,就赶快逃了。
每见到一个大人,他(她)总会问:“你们两个今天怎么没有去上学?”实在是太烦了,每个人都要问一回,我们回答很累啊!早知道今天就不去爸爸厂里玩了。
在我记忆的仓库里,储藏了许许多多的名言警句,它们像一盏盏指路灯,照亮我前进的方向,其中对我影响最大的是莎士比亚说过的一句话,那就是——抛弃时间的人,时间也会抛弃他。
记得那一天晚上,我像以往一样,吃完饭后,不由自主地去看电视。可不知怎么回事,那天晚上的.动画片特别多,特别精彩,一集连着一集,我看着看着,随着时间的流逝,已超过平时规定的15分钟了,动画片太吸引我了。我像中了毒一样,无法像以前那样关掉电视,自觉地回屋做作业。脑海中,一个一身漆黑地天使支持着我说:“算了吧,好不容易碰到这么好看的电视节目,多看一会儿吧,反正就这么一次”而另一个一身洁白的天使也在提醒我说:“多看一秒也不行,小学生要有时间观念,学会控制自己。”“好不容易爸爸妈妈不在家,多看一会儿吧,没人会发现的。”第一个声音亮出了自己的观点。“可是,现在已经进入总复习阶段,电视看多了会影响学习的,快去写作业吧!”我被这两种声音搞得头昏脑胀。
就当我被这两个天使弄的心乱如麻时。忽然,我的脑海里闪现出莎士比亚说过的一句话:“抛弃时间的人,时间也会抛弃他。”我猛地一下回过神来,恍然大悟。是啊!现在我不正是那个把时间抛弃在动画片上的人吗?不行,我要得赶快做作业。我一看表,呀,我竟在这里白白浪费了40分钟,时间如流水,过得真快呀。
我急忙关掉电视,一头扎进作业的海洋。手中的笔在数学卷、作业本、作文本中来回穿梭着,把一张张空白的纸写满,把一道道题解开,终于把一项项作业做完了。虽然时间还是头也不回地向前迈着脚步,可我再也不休闲了,在知识的海洋里遨游,时间是多么充实。当我写完最后一个字时,我看了看手表我露出了满意的笑容。
时间是宝贵的,可有的人却不懂得珍惜;时间就像流水一样一去不复返,可有的人却不懂得把握;时间是短暂的,可有的人却不懂得利用……有的人把“还有时间”当做浪费青春和生命的借口,却从不知道“明日复明日,明日何其多。”生命是由无数个一分一秒组成的,我们要跟上时间的脚步,才不会被时间抛弃。莎士比亚这句名言真是蕴含了生命的意义。
我轻轻地伸了一下懒腰,晚风像一双温柔的手轻轻地抚摸着我。虽然刚才那件事没有在我平静的生活中掀起多大的波浪,莎士比亚这句名言却深深地印在我的脑海里时时给予我提醒,给予我影响。
生活在都市中的你,可曾注意过傍晚西边的一抹夕阳?那余晖,照亮了半边天,照亮了喧嚣的城市,也照亮了巍巍长城。入秋,我随表妹一行人来到慕田峪长城脚下,准备“勇攀长城做好汉”?登上长城,放眼望去,夏意残存,秋味渐浓,虽没有“万山红遍,层林尽染”的感觉,但也已有一种霜草萋萋、秋虫切切的景象。抬头向西边望去,一轮红日正徐徐落下,圆圆的,红彤彤的。在它的背后,天呈现出七种颜色,向远方延伸,在天与林的尽头交融,消失。顺着长城往北走,万绿丛巾隐隐约约有着“二月花”,在夕阳的映照下显得格外鲜红、格外醒目,好像周围的绿树只为等待它的降临而牛。一丝微风拂过脸颊,送来秋的气息。万物开始泛黄泛红,准备迎接那银装素裹的考验,待到冰雪融化后,一株株新鲜的生命义将萌发出来,冉为大地披上新装。走上烽火台,向远处眺望,看到几处农田里还有人在辛勤地忙碌。收获的喜悦向四周洋溢着,
飘荡在夕阳的余晖里。义停留了许久,见天色又暗了一些,我们开始下山了。在下山的路上,看到一棵棵松树挺拔地矗立在那里,年复一年地仰望着长城,仰望着长城落日。偶然抬头,忽见树顶上,一只肥硕的松树拖着它那蓬松的大尾巴在树枝间来回地跳跃,似乎在忙着准备它过冬的食物,为再见到那生机勃勃的春天储蓄着生的力量。树干上,一只小虫正在作蛹,它也在为变成美丽的蝴蝶,为了去点缀那经冬之后的.绚丽春天而努力着。行进到半山腰时,我回头凝望那夕阳映照下与天色相辉映的长城,是那么的巍峨壮丽。我忍不住举起手中的相机,“咔嚓”一声将这如诗如画的长城与落日留在了我的\'相机内,留存了我的脑海里。长城的落日是美丽的,长城的落日也是悲壮的。
Early morning,sun farther—in—law showed smiling face,small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries,seem to saying:“Beautiful,should get up!Should get up!!
Li Lixing,see sun farther—in—law came out,asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress,wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment,transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry,li Li looks up to look,a birdie is crying,seem to saying:“Li Li has breakfast quickly,I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly,carry small satchel on the back,go to school together with birdie。
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