Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
随着暑假的到来,越来越多的学生都选择了游泳,来作为自己暑假里的娱乐方式,这本是非常好的,可是,却有很多人,没有到正规的地方游泳,甚至去池塘,河流等危险的地方游泳。
目前全国每年有1。6万名中学生非正常死亡,溺水和交通事故死亡居前两名。
江河湖泊往往装出一副平静、温柔的样子,让人忽视了温柔的背后是多深的地狱。有多少人落入了这无底的漩涡、这可怕的魔爪。
身边,也许这些沉重的画面时常可见,就在我们身边,悲剧正在上演着。
当你看见朋友要私自去河里游泳时,你会阻拦吗?
当你看见有人在水中挣扎时,你会张皇失措吗?
当你在没有家长陪同,有炎热难耐时,你还会任性的往水中跳吗?
一些学生因为逞强好胜,不知水深,潜入水中,还做出各种各样的姿势,导致体力不支。碰到这种情况的学生,有的被救了,但另外的学生呢,则再也无法重新开始了。这难道是天意吗?难道活下来只能靠运气吗?
离去的学生或许很后悔,但再也来不及改正了,只留下在世的亲人悲痛不已;死里逃生的学生,带着侥幸心理,但恐怕再也不会有第二次了吧;对于那些从没有遇到过这件事的人,趁来得及,更加珍惜自己的生命。
溺水时可以避免的,只是学生缺乏“游泳安全”的意识以及防溺水知识。
身边的河流只便于用来欣赏,享受游泳的乐趣还是留给那些有和准备的人吧,他们总是预料到一些可能发生的事情,准备好应对的方法。
在不知水深的情况下,绝对不可以以身试险;在有障碍物或有漩涡的激流中,也不可以轻易下水。游泳之前一定要做好安全措施,如救生圈,必须要有懂水性的家长陪同,还要做一些准备活动,否则有可能会导致头晕、恶心、心慌等不适应的现象。若在水中大腿抽筋,应立即上岸,在无人时,也要学会自救的'方法:先吸一口气,仰浮在水上,用抽筋肢体对侧的手握住抽筋肢体的脚趾,并用力向身体方向拉,同时用同侧的手掌,压在抽筋肢体的膝盖上,帮助抽筋的腿伸直。
生活中世事难料,我们要好好把握自己的生命,对自己的生命负责,不能因为一时大意而让自己身处险境。看着身边一个个生命就这样在世界上消失,请记住这一个个教训。
预防溺水,珍爱生命,希望我们每个人都能够重视这些问题,不要为了一时的快乐,而让自己的生命陷入危险之中。
炎热的暑假马上就要到了,同学们都想找个凉快的地方去避暑,有的同学就想到水库或溪边去游泳,可是有的同学却不知道水到底有多深,就冒昧的下去游泳。但游泳是有一定的危险性,每年夏天,不知有多少人因为游泳而失去了鲜活的生命。所以告诫大家:没有成年人的陪护千万不要去游泳。
我曾经听外婆给我讲过这样一个故事:在他小的时候,家里很穷,没有电风扇更别提什么空调了,呆在家里嫌热,有一天中午,他就和小伙伴们一起趁家人午休的时间偷偷溜到河边玩耍,小朋友们看到清清的河水很高兴,就开始玩起了打水仗,玩了一会儿,他们就想去游泳,其中有个十一二岁的大哥哥带头先下了水,于是别的小朋友也跟着一个个下去游泳了,在水里你追我赶,玩的可开心了。可是有的小朋友根本就不会游泳,快天黑了,小朋友尽兴的回家了,到了吃晚饭的时间,隔壁邻居家的阿姨找不到自己家的女儿了,我心想坏了,是不是刚才在水塘游泳还没回来,于是我就和他们一起去找,刚到河边就看到了他的衣服还在岸边,可是左找右找就是看不到人影,大家都慌了,连忙找来各种工具进行打捞,几个小时过去了,最后终于在一处水流湍急的石缝边找到了,可是他已经停止了呼吸,永远的离开了我们。
这个故事给了我深刻的教训,在这里,我提醒大家:游泳一定要有家长看护,不会游泳的最好不要下水,即使游泳也应在有安全保障区的游泳区内进行,严禁在非游泳区内游泳。这样我们的生命才有安全保障。
为了防止溺水,我们应该做到:不宜在太凉太深的水库或鱼塘游泳,如感觉水温与体温相差较大,慢慢入水,渐渐适应,可以在水中玩游戏,但不能搞恶作剧。在露天游泳池遇到雷雨天气时,应立刻上岸,到安全的地方躲避,以免发生意外。
同学们一定要记住血的教训,防止溺水、珍爱生命。
A tiger is a kind of catamount animal. It looks like a cat, but much bigger than a cat. A tiger is very ferocious and it eats mainly meat. It has yellow and black streaks all over its body and it looks very beautiful. Its tail is long and strong and it can hit its quarry dying.
Tigers live in the thick forests and small animals in the forests are tigers' food.
During the past years, many forests have been cut down and the living conditions of the tigers are becoming worse and worse. There are fewer tigers left in the world now. Tigers are the animals of the world, and they should have their own living spaces. We must do our best to protect the tigers and their living environment.
生命无处不在。在川流不息的人群中,那一颗颗跳动的心灵,那一张张微笑的脸庞,是一个个鲜活的生命;在散发着智慧气息的森林里,沐浴着阳光茁壮成长的小树,祥和的参天古树,是一株株充满生机的生命;在那浩瀚无垠的大海里,无忧无虑畅游的小鱼,婀娜多姿的珊瑚,是无数灵动而美丽的生命。 当你看见一位母亲十月怀胎,婴儿呱呱落地时,你会知道,这将宣告着一个新的小生命的诞生!你是否会感叹,感叹生命的来之不易?可是,生命是宝贵的,生命是脆弱的!
今年的4月26日,在安徽省老畀河发生了一起学生溺水事件,5名小学生结伴到老畀河游玩,其中1名五年级女生在河边洗手时,不小心踩空滑落水中,其他同伴伸手去救落水学生,结果这5名同学相继坠入水中,溺水身亡。5条鲜活的生命瞬间就消失了,不仅给他们的家庭带来巨大悲痛,也为我们敲响了警钟。他们的生命就如初开的蓓蕾,前程无限,然而却被无情的河水所吞噬,难道不令人痛心吗?
也许有人觉得这些事情离我们很遥远,但我们身边也确确实实有过这样残酷的实例。据省教育厅去年的统计,溺水已成为广大中小学生尤其是农村小学生非正常死亡的主要原因。2010年永嘉县学生非正常死亡20人,其中溺水死亡的就达13人。
正因为有了这些惨痛的例子,我倡议全体同学做到“五不”承诺:1、不私自下水游泳;2、不擅自与同学结伴游泳;3、不在无家长或老师带领的情况下游泳;4、不到无安全设施、无救护人员的水域游泳;5、不到不熟悉的水域游泳。而在游泳之前,学习一些预防溺水的知识是不可或缺的。
人不能像野草那样,“春风吹又生”,人的生命只有一次,而且生命要靠自己掌握。身边处处有安全,我们平时就要做到“安全学习,安全生活”,杜绝危险的行为,让瓯北中心小学变成一个安全和谐的校园。
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