如何减肥英语作文八十词左右【一】
暑假里我看了一部很感人的电影，名字叫《八十一枚金币》，这部电影主要讲了一天，留守儿童丫丫出去捡空瓶子卖钱，看见了一位卖废品的老爷爷，就把空瓶子给了这位老爷爷，老爷爷给了她一个金币，其实就是角钱的硬币，又对丫丫说："我的金币是有魔法的，它可以实现你的一个愿望，只要你天天给我瓶子，我天天给你金币。"听完老爷爷的话，丫丫便把事情告诉了奶奶，奶奶听了怕丫丫影响自己干活，就骗丫丫说："你要攒够八十一枚金币就可以心想事成了。"自此以后，丫丫每日都不辞辛苦的捡瓶子换金币，老爷爷也被丫丫的诚心感动了，日日守时的在路口等丫丫。经过丫丫的一番辛苦，终于攒够了八十一枚金币，在丫丫的虔诚祈祷和金币的"魔法"下，丫丫的妈妈回到了丫丫身边。
看了这部电影后，我双眼湿润了，我非常敬佩丫丫，她的诚信令我非常感动，为了赚金币，为了见到妈妈，她一天到晚都在不辞辛苦的捡瓶子，从不放弃，因为她坚信，攒够八十一枚金币，妈妈一定会回到她身边。丫丫的美好品质多么值得我们学习！
如何减肥英语作文八十词左右【二】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
如何减肥英语作文八十词左右【三】
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
如何减肥英语作文八十词左右【四】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
如何减肥英语作文八十词左右【五】
假期里我看了一部国产优秀影片《八十一枚金币》，主要讲的.是一个留守儿童丫丫非常渴望妈妈能回到自己的身边的故事。
影片里面的小女孩丫丫的妈妈出去打工了，让丫丫和奶奶住在了一起，早上起床看到妈妈都走了，丫丫就跑出去追妈妈，非常舍不得让妈妈走。后丫丫的奶奶给丫丫讲了一个故事：从前有一个长胡子老爷爷可以实现你的一个愿望，只要你收集81枚金币（角钱）就可以见到妈妈了。于是她就每天不停地在捡空饮料瓶换钱，有一次她为两个人带路，有一个人给丫丫和她的伙伴丫丫了10块，可丫丫不要钱，只要空瓶子，于是那两个人把空瓶子都给了丫丫,丫丫不要别人给的，要靠自己的努力捡的。她把捡空瓶子的钱让奶奶缝个小包装了起，她已经有了八十枚金币，她打算到城里捡空瓶子，可她捡了几个瓶子就被一个小男孩给抢走了，后她还把小包给弄掉了，有两个小女孩帮她找了回。最后丫丫终于攒够了金币，就站在村口等妈妈，可是丫丫的妈妈还是没有回。
看完电影后，我很佩服丫丫，她想妈妈早点回到身边，靠自己的努力去争取。我听爸爸讲在中国有许多的留守儿童，他们有的一年只能见到爸爸妈妈一次，我想到了自己每天都有父母陪着，还有什么不满足的？
如何减肥英语作文八十词左右【六】
您好！
我知道您担负着全校的英语课的教学任务，工作已经很忙了。但是为了让我们把英语学得更好，我想向您提几条建议，希望您能抽出一点儿时间看看我的这封信。
我非常喜欢英语。我觉得每个同学都应该好好学习英语。这也是以后我们更进一步学习的基础，为了让同学们对英语感兴趣，把英语学好，我有这样几点建议：
一、组织同学们搜集有关资料，共同讨论学习英语的重要性，让大家从思想上重视英语的学习。
二、利用节日、纪念日举办各种活动，来激发大家学习英语的热情。例如，组织大家排练英语节目，小短剧、歌曲、朗诵……既丰富了大家的`课余生活，又锻炼了大家的英语表达能力，还能提高学习英语的兴趣，这不是一举多得的好事吗？
三、我建议其他各学科的老师也能掌握一些英语日常用语，师生见面，用英语打招呼，上课时，师生用英语互相问候。这样在学校里创设学英语用英语的环境，更有利于大家的学习。
我想，如果我们这样坚持下去，一定会有很大的收获的，英语水平也会有大幅度的提高。这样就会为我们以后中学的学习打下坚实的基础。我真心希望得到您的支持！
祝老师工作顺利！身体健康！
您的学生建勇
20**年3月5日
如何减肥英语作文八十词左右【七】
1936年10月，中国工农红军进行了举世闻名的长征。红军从江西瑞金出发，纵横11个省，长驱二万五千里，排除万难，胜利到达陕北。
时光飞逝，如今长征的胜利已经80周年了，在80周年前，那一支英勇的队伍在革命史上写上了光荣的一笔。它好似一副画卷画着气壮山河的英雄画面：在冰天雪地里，风似刀般割在英雄们的脸上，但他们却宛如一条巨龙，蠕动着、蜿蜒着它庞大的身躯，穿越着那二万五千里的路程。夜晚，伸手不见五指。草地上坑坑洼洼，沼泽连片，没有道路，没有人烟，一不小心，就有可能葬身泥潭。
长征中的艰险是我们在平和年代所不能想象的，英雄们顽强不屈，抵御自然灾害，长途漫漫和粮食短缺问题。前辈们穿着草鞋在雪地、在沼泽中一步步艰难地走来，走向了光明和胜利。我们要把他们身上坚持不懈地优良美德传承下去。当我们碰到困难的时候，应该想想这些在长征中的英雄是怎样克服困难，他们在那么艰难的时候都能挺过来了，我们这些小困难为什么就不能解决呢?
现在的学生认为中国的经济已经很发达了，所以在吃饭的时候，觉得这个菜不符合口味就不吃了，扔掉了。这是多么不应该的阿!有句说过：“谁只盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦”，每一粒粮食都是农民伯伯辛辛苦苦种出来的。或许这个还不够，那我们应该会想到在红军长征的时候，那些英雄们在面对粮食短缺的时候，竟然还用草皮，树皮来做粮食填饱肚子，而现在我们有足够的粮食却不好好珍惜。我们应该好好像那些红军叔叔们学习啊!
但在社会上也有像红军叔叔面对困难从不喊苦的人。就像造隧道的工人们，他们在一个温度达到40度以上的空间里面工作，而且在炎热的夏天，外面的温度已经够高的了，可以想象他们里面的温度会让人受不了。甚至有时他们在切割金属的时候与火接触，更是火上浇油。当他们的头上冒出如豆粒般的汗珠时，他们却从不喊苦，他们为了自己的事业和那份准备为中国贡献自己的力量的心，即使在如此艰难的环境下还坚持着自己的岗位，他们是伟大的，是无私的。
最近国家正在大力推进各项创新，开放和现代化建设是人民群众的事业，也只有人民群众的广泛参与才能取得成功，所以就不折不扣地走群众路线，真正做到“执政为民”。尊重群众的首创精神，将人民群众中蕴藏的积极性、主动性和创造性保护好、发挥好。国家***也继承了长征奋斗的精神，为我国人民考虑周到，艰苦奋斗是中华民族的传统美德，是我们党领导和团结人民进行革命、建设和改革的强大精神动力。保持和发扬艰苦奋斗的作风，才能进一步坚定理想信念。共产主义理想和社会主义信念，正是共产党人崇高的追求和强大的精神支柱。
我们进行的是社会主义现代化建设，是新的长征。走在新长征路上，我们应继承和发扬当年红军长征的精神，把长征这份宝贵的精神财富变成推动我们前进的巨大力量。红军长征的路是艰苦的、漫长的;新长征的路会更艰苦、更漫长。因此，我们回忆长征、纪念长征，就是要更好地继承和弘扬红军长征精神，把红军长征留给我们的宝贵精神财富一代一代传下去，万众一心、艰苦奋斗，争取社会主义现代化建设“新长征”的胜利。
两万五千里长征，不管时间流逝的多长，我们都会时刻紧记在心，将红军长征的优良美德传承下去。
