妈妈终于出门了,我顿时乐开了花。虽说妈妈叫我在回家前做好作业,但现在才十二点钟而已,妈妈回家还早得很呢。我连忙跑去打开电脑,玩起了电脑游戏。我玩了大约半个小时,我心里开始矛盾起来,万一妈妈有特殊情况提早回家,那我不就惨了吗?犹豫之中,我还是选择了做作业。于是,我放下手中的鼠标,拿起笔开始写起了字帖,正当我写到一半的'时候,电脑里传出了一片响声,原来是有人在QQ上呼我。我放下手中的笔,一下子又沉入了电脑游戏中,早将妈妈的话抛到九宵云外了。在玩游戏的每一分钟似乎都比往日过得要快了多。没想到,我一玩就玩了两个多小时,时间已经是两点多了。我连忙拿起笔写起了字帖,过了一会,终于完成了字帖的任务,只剩下了一篇作文了。我刚刚要开始写作文时,电脑好象跟我过不去似的,从电脑又传出一片响声。原来是一部我心仪已久的电视连续剧开播通知,没办法我又一次投入了电脑的“怀抱”之中。没想到我电视剧一看就看到了四点多。正当我要去写作文时,已经是”亡羊补牢,为时以晚”了,妈妈已经回家了,我只好乖乖地向妈妈交代了一切,我象一只听话的小羊,妈妈看见我这样,真不知道怎么惩罚我,只好狠狠地骂了我一顿。
虽然今天我被妈妈骂了一顿,但是今天过得可真是“爽”啊!不过我想还是不要再有这样的事情了。
首先我要去新华书店买书,我已经是那里的常客了。什么类型的书我都爱看,只要有趣味的书我就会废寝忘食。这个周末我决定去买高尔基自传体三部曲之一的《童年》,另外两本《在人间》和《我的大学》,等我看完之后再逐一将它们收归我的囊中,嘻嘻!
如果不去买书的话我就去市民广场溜旱冰。那地方宽阔平整,绿树成荫,空气清新,我可以在那样优美的环境里尽情的溜,而且那里教溜冰的'老师已经认识我这个热爱溜旱冰的小朋友了,他们经常会给我一些好的建议,对我学习花样溜冰很有帮助。我已经开始想像,我穿上溜冰鞋,戴上头盔、护膝、护肘、手套、臀垫、护腕,哗真是全身披甲上阵,先是来个单足蹬冰,双足向前滑行,完了再来个单足向前滑行,然后是双足向前弧线滑行、前交叉步滑行、向后双足滑行……哦!我已是迫不及待了,真想马上就开始我的“冰上之旅”啊!
再或者我去我朋友家玩,我们一起玩孔明锁。孔明锁,也叫八卦锁,相传由三国时期的孔明发明而得名。这种三维的拼插玩具,外观看是严丝合缝的十字立方体,动动脑筋可拆解,但想装上可不是那么容易的。可因为它有一定的难度,所以我们才喜欢玩。哦!孔明锁,此刻开始我想念你了!
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
这个暑假我去了南京旅游,参加了全国青少年百集成语微电影拍摄,参加了小记者协会暑期公益特训营,每周还坚持上了美术、书法、拉丁舞培训班,读了老师指定的10本课外书,过得很忙碌、很精彩、很开心。
6月28日,我和爸爸、妈妈还有奶奶一起去南京旅游,主要是去参观雨花台烈士纪念馆,接受了爱国主义思想教育。让我懂得了这么美好的新中国生活是革命烈士用鲜血和生命换来的,我一定要珍惜现在这样好的生活,好好学习,做一名新时代优秀的学生。我写的《参观雨花台烈士陵园有感》文章发表在7月8日的浔阳晚报《小荷尖尖》栏目。
7月7日,我参加了全国青少年百集成语微电影九江站的拍摄,我拍的成语故事是《爱屋及乌》,意思是爱这个房子也爱房子上的乌鸦。妈妈告诉我比如她爱我,也爱我的优点、缺点、爱我所有的一切意思。我在戏中演的是纣王的亲戚箕子,一个高个子男孩演纣王,胖点的男孩子演比干,我们台词背得熟,所以拍的很快,导演夸我们三个很棒呢。
7月11日,妈妈陪我去九江日报社参加了小记者协会组织的“新闻写作”培训班,讲课的洪老师是一个白头发慈祥的老人,他教我们消息、通讯的.写作方法。要记住5W+1H,和语文老师讲的写作文“什么人、什么地点、什么事情、什么景物、做得怎么样、心情如何”有点差不多。不过洪老师说新闻都是要写最真实发生的事情。小记者们都非常认真的听他讲课,并作了详细的笔记。下课后,我搂着洪老师和他聊天,说我好喜欢听他讲写作课噢!我从他后面围着他的脖子,洪老师就背起我来,觉得他真像爷爷一样亲切呢。
7月15日,有播音主持的老师发短信妈妈,通知我8月份去九江小学参加“少儿口才和播音主持”特训营,好期待噢。妈妈把我的“自我介绍”视频发给口才老师,他给我三个大拇指点赞呢。我一定要好好学习口才,好好表现。因为我最喜欢上台表演了,还喜欢认识很多新朋友。
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