开学了,老师让我们说一说新学期的打算。
我是这样说的,我已经是二年级的学生了,新的学期,我要上课认真听讲,不做小动作,每天回家按时完成作业。
讲究卫生,不乱扔垃圾。作为组长的我,新学期更要严格要求自己,同时还要认真检查同学们的作业。新的学期,我要改掉我马虎的坏习惯。争取在学校做个好学生,在家做个好孩子。老师说我们一定要像说的那样去做。我想:我一定要说到做到!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
您好!
新的一学年又开始了,从此您的孩子将步入郡园,开始自己崭新的初中生活。此时,您的心情或许既兴奋又担心,但可以肯定的是,您一定会在今后的学习生活中给予自己的孩子最深切的关心与最美好的祝愿。
我是您小孩_______________所在班级XXX班的班主任兼数学老师,很高兴我有机会陪伴着他们一起成长、一起收获。刚刚送走了我的第一批学生,优异的中考成绩和市“先进班级”的荣誉见证着我们曾经的努力和付出;今天,我迎来了我的第二批学生,望着同样纯真清澈的眼睛,心中荡漾着为人师的.兴奋与喜悦,三年的工作经验让我褪去少许的青涩与慌张,多了一份沉着与坦然,我希望在未来的日子里,能得到各位家长的信任和支持,让我们携手努力,共同为孩子们打造一个和谐融洽的成长空间。
开学之初,家长要和孩子一起做开学的准备,让他们精力充沛、信心十足地进入新的学校,在此,给家长几点建议:
1.让孩子“倒时差”
放假时,许多孩子的生活秩序被打乱了,常常是看电视或上网到很晚,早上便贪睡不按时起床。这种状况如果不改变,孩子的心理就还在“放假”,开学后很难适应正常的学习生活。在开学前几天要调整好作息时间,杜绝睡懒觉和看电视无度的情况,家长要督促孩子按时起床、吃饭。
2.制定新学期目标
向孩子说明即将到来的初中学习的快乐,耐心倾听孩子对新学期的想法,并给予适时指导。新学期开学前,每个学生几乎都会给自己确立一个新目标,父母应充分利用孩子的这种行为,与他们共同商量新学期的目标。这个目标要切实可行,适合孩子的实际。
3.翻看新课本
家长可以与孩子一起翻看一下新课本,把开学初要学的东西浏览一下,做个简单地预习。
4.整理好学习用具
家长协助小孩将各科教材包好书皮,准备好笔记本、草稿本。配好相关常用的文具,如笔、橡皮、三角尺等。
从小学进入初中,每个孩子都会有着或长或短的不适应期,这都是正常的,我也相信在家长、老师的细心帮助照顾下能够适应新的学习生活。
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