今天,家里有客人来,妈妈想买些水果招待客人,可爸爸却不在,没人去买水果。
我想:这可是一个表现的好机会,于是我自告奋勇地说:“让我去买水果吧!”妈妈很怀疑地说:“你能行吗?”我信心十足地说:“当然了,我已经长大了,可以帮家里做事了。”妈妈点了点头,于是我拿过妈妈给的钱去买水果。 我来到楼下的水果店买水果,这家店的生意可好了,里面有许多的水果,有红利透青的苹果,有金灿灿的梨,玲珑的草莓,像灯笼似的桔子……各种各样的水果令我眼花缭乱,害得我都不知道要买些什么了。 经过几分钟的考虑,我决定买桔子,我紧张地问阿姨:“请问,桔子和苹果怎么卖?甜不甜?”“两元五一斤,包甜,你尝一个试试吧!”阿姨亲切地说。说完阿姨拿了一个桔子递给我。我拿了过来,心想:尝一下试试,免得上当了。我接过了桔子,剥开了皮,拿了一片放在口中一咬,酸中带甜,冰凉凉的,好吃极了!我又对阿姨说:“就买这个了。”阿姨拿出一个塑料袋,里面装的是又大又甜的桔子,然后把这些桔子称了一称,有两斤重的桔子共五元,最后我付了钱,开开心心地回家了。
到家后,妈妈见我把水果买来了,高兴地说:“恺楠,你长大了,懂得帮妈妈做事了,真是一个乖孩子。”我听了,比吃了蜜还甜。
今天,我的水彩笔快没水了,我要爸爸和我一起去超市买水彩笔,爸爸叫我自己去,并拿给我10元钱,我爽快地答应了。
临走时,爸爸再三吩咐我,过马路时一定要小心。我兴冲冲地来到路口,准备过马路。先观察四周有没有来往的车辆,一看,没有,我鼓足勇气,跨出第一步、第二步、第三步……
不知不觉到了中间的黄线上了,我再左看看,右看看,也没有车辆,急忙三步并成两步,走到对面,我终于过了马路。来到超市,琳琅满目的东西令我眼花缭乱,有毛茸茸的布熊、香甜可口的巧克力、时尚的服装……
我来到学习用品区,有中华铅笔、铅笔刀、笔记本、图画本。可就是找不到我要买的水彩笔。没办法,只好问服务员阿姨,服务员阿姨一边整理物品,一边告诉我:“水彩笔在左边那个柜中的最上方。”“哦!谢谢阿姨。”原来在最上方,怪不得我找不到。我来到那儿,够不着,我拈起脚尖,抓住一盒水彩,往下拉。拉下来的水彩笔是车子型的,封面是米老鼠在射箭,身边是米妮,我打开水彩笔的盒子,里面传出阵阵的芳香。
我对这盒水彩笔爱不释手,看看价钱:8元,就决定买下它了……
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
我把钱紧紧地攥在手里,走在小区的马路上,不时有一辆小汽车和电动车驶过,我吓得直往边靠。继续向前走,穿过操场就是商店了。
走进商店一看,琳琅满目的商品摆在货架上,有各式各样的文具,好吃的零食,冰柜里还有各种口味的冰淇淋,真诱人啊!真想拿一盒。但是,我想到了我是来买盐的.。我左找右找 ,还是不见盐的踪迹 ,在商店里转了好几圈,最后鼓足勇气问门口的收银员:“叔叔,请问盐在哪里?”收银员抬起头来,指了指右边的角落说:“在那里。”我向收银员指的地方走去,果然在货架的最下面一层找到了盐,我拿了两袋向收银台走去,叔叔拿着扫码器一扫便对我说:“一共4块。”我把盐和找的零钱拿在手里就开开心心地回家了,大老远就看见妈妈在门口等我,原来她在担心我呢!
今天,阳光明媚,天气晴朗,我从家里看到了朵朵白云飘浮在蔚蓝的天空中,我们家没芹菜和糖块儿了,妈妈在厨房喊到:“儿子,咱家没芹菜和糖了,你去超市给我们买点儿回来。”我随口答应了一句:“啊,好的。”我拿我妈给的零钱去了离我们最近的华润万家超市。过马路的时候,我看见来来往往的车辆在马路上穿梭着。我一看是绿灯,就安安心心的过了马路。
到了超市,我把钱装到了我的口袋儿里,就推了个车子,进了超市。到了超市里,我看见超市里的人是人山人海的,货物都整整齐齐的摆在货架上,叫人看得眼花缭乱。因为我妈常带我到这里来买东西,所以我很熟悉这里。我推着车子往电梯的方向走去,到了第二层,我就到了蔬菜区,我一时找不到芹菜,就想起妈妈对我说:“你如果你找不着你想要的东西,你就可以问售货员阿姨。”我随后就去找售货员阿姨,售货员阿姨给我说了我要的蔬菜去哪里,我很顺利地买到了我要的芹菜。我离开了蔬菜区,来到了副食区,我这次一眼就瞄到了我要的糖块儿,就推着车子飞快的跑到了那里,我拿了一包糖块儿,就推着车子坐电梯到了一楼来到了收银台,快到收银台的时候,我看到了一个非常漂亮的钥匙扣,就非常想买,但又害怕买回去被妈妈扔了,就心想:“我还是不买为妙比较好一些。”我就加快了步伐。到了收银台,售货员的电脑上准确的显示出了我买的货物价格,我付了钱,拿上了货物,高高兴兴的回家了。
到了家,妈妈夸我真是一个能***小伙子。
星期六上午,我写完作业,家里的糖用完了,妈妈让我去超市买包白糖,我心想:这也太简单了,不用费什么力气,便爽快地答应了。因为是我第一次单独去超市购物,妈妈又叮嘱了我半天。我满不在乎地出发了。
当我气喘吁吁地跑到小区的超市里,我抬眼一瞧,哇,货物琳琅满目,各式各样。“白糖在哪里呢?”我嘀咕着。这个超市不像家乐福那样划分得有条不紊,货物摆放得有些杂乱,要找到白糖,简直是不可能完成的任务。
我看到有位售货员阿姨站在那里,心里想:该不该问她一下呢?我有点心虚了,只觉得脸上阵阵发烫,从旁边的镜子一瞧,就像个红苹果。犹豫半天,最后还是决定问下这个阿姨。
于是我走过去,问道:“阿姨,你知道白糖在哪里吗?”“先往前直走,然后左拐,右手边第二排就是。”阿姨回答说。
我飞速跑过去,按照阿姨的指引,我很快找到了白糖,于是我拿起一包,直奔收银台。“三块五。”收银员叔叔对我说。我拿出一张5元的钞票递给叔叔,叔叔找回我一元五角。
我拿好白糖,接过找回的钱,往家走去。我边走边想:今天收获可不小,不仅买到了糖,而且还让我明白了要大胆尝试自己没有做过的事,要不然什么也学不到。
回到家,妈妈一个劲夸我能干,还说我亲手买的白糖一定特别甜。我心里美美的,就像开了一朵鲜艳的花一样。
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