五年级英语作文写新老师【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文写新老师【二】
佛山有八景，风光秀丽，引人入胜。我是三水人，所以首先带你游三水，美丽的三水有一景——荷花世界。
我们出发来到荷花世界。首先映入眼帘的是荷花形态的大门，六片粉红的花瓣惟妙惟肖，让人眼前一亮。走进荷花世界，你看到这满池荷花竞相争艳，肯定会十分惊讶。这时我提议：“不如去划船吧！”坐在小船上，欣赏着满池荷花，闻着扑鼻的清香，我们聊起了荷花世界的变化。
以前荷花世界的占地面积很小，交通也不方便。春天，唯有几株小荷才露尖尖角，泥路两开放着几株杜鹃，三两个游客毫无兴致地走过。夏天，品种单一的荷花开满塘，虽然草木繁盛，但也游人稀少。秋天和冬天，荷花凋谢了，连荷叶也衰落了，万物萧条，更是看不到游人的身影。
后来，为了把荷花世界打造成“佛山新八景”，政府和人们共同努力。建造了更多、更大的荷塘，引进了各种各样的新品种，改善交通和道路状况······再看看如今的荷花世界：春天，才展露头角的荷也不能吸引你的眼球。没关系！看，那一片片金黄的菜花，朵朵盛开的向日葵，娇艳的芙蓉都在向你招手呢;夏天，各种荷花、莲花竞相争艳，整个荷花世界都是荷的倩影，荷的清香。这里有稀有的并蒂莲，有能承受一个小孩重量的王莲，有白色的、红色的、粉色的，有单瓣的.、也有复瓣的。荷花在碧绿的荷叶间显得更加婀娜多姿，真是：接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红。秋天，荷花虽然凋谢了，但其它培育的花朵却又吸引着游人，还有温室大棚里的荷花供你欣赏。冬天，这里特有的冬莲在等待着你的光临。
荷花世界不仅是荷花的海洋，也是其它花卉的海洋，这里一年四季都有花赏。这里是休闲的好去处，空气非常清新，你可以在园区散步，可以骑自行车穿梭在绿荫下，碧草间，也可以乘坐小船在荷花池里漫游。这里是小孩的乐园，一座游乐设施齐全的游乐场建设在公园的中心位置上。孩子们可以在这里尽情玩耍，这里也总是最热闹，最充满欢声笑语的地方。这里也有许多当地美食供你品尝，更有特别的“全荷宴”挑起你的食欲；在这里，你还能看到各种精彩的文艺表演。
荷花世界的美景让你流连忘返，但请不要驻足留下。明天，我还会带你游览其它的佛上美景。
