Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
很高兴你与我相伴多年,我一直知道你的存在,一直感受着你带给我的绝望与焦心,今天,一次偶然的机会,能够重新认识你,直面你,称呼你一声:亲爱的。
你是一种病吗?这种认知无迹可寻,不过你与抑郁是邻居,人们可以谅解可以同情你的邻居,却很少有人理解你;你是懒惰的替代品吗?有些是,有些不是,没有绝对的答案,懒惰可以带来片刻的`舒心,而拖延,带来双倍的自责;你一定会造成恶果吗?短时间内,是的,因为我没能更好的完成自己该完成的事情,因为你增加了我内心的不安与绝望,因为我花了那么长的时间想要摆脱你,而你却形影不离。但当我走过那段糟糕的岁月,我感谢你,我称呼你为“亲爱的”,因为你填充了我的感知力,因为你让我重新思考生与死,因为你让我开始面对自己,面对人生。
有一天,我躺在床上,盯着白色的天花板,身边没有一个人,我知道此刻的我,应该像他们一样背着书包去图书馆学习,因为还有很多未完成的课业,因为我想做好身为学生该做的事,但我动不了,因为你的“降临”,我睁着眼睛挣扎了一下午,生气,自卑,失望,绝望,思索活着的家价值,思索人生的终点,思索生命意义,思索我的昨天今天明天。
这样的片段,不间断地重复,充斥着我最美好的时光,我时常痛恨自己,怨自己的不作为,鄙视自己的一无是处,我深知,我不想这样下去,不能再这样下去,我拼命与自己斗争,一直与自己抗衡,我在我的青春,狠狠地与自己为敌。
是的,从表面来看,我失败了,我是一个圣斗士,我是一个常败军。但内心清楚,成长了,学会和自己相处,学会接纳不完美的自己,甚至是满身狼藉的自己,学会做一个旁观者,不附加感情地看待与“拖延”相伴的自己,看着你折磨我,不再理会,最坏不过熬日子,今天过了,就结束了。
后来发现,当我开始接受自己,不再拧巴的时候,一切有了变化,拽着自己的头发,把自己从泥土里拔出来,其后的乐观,是不想浪费唯有一次的生命,是相信自己的生活可以被打破,再重造,是笃信生命的意义在于体验。
虽然你的伴随,丰富了我的生活,但我想成为我喜欢的人,想成为一个术业有专攻的人,所以,会继续慢慢摆脱你对我的影响,要开始掌控你,为你我的相依创造一个更为平衡的环境,你也许会一直与我同行,我欣然接受。
亲爱的“拖延症”,我谢谢你,谢你与我为敌的过去,谢你与我共存的现在,谢你与我相依的未来。
一、每个行为背后都有一个心理原因。要想长远地调整孩子的行为最好了解孩子行为背后的原因是什么,再用合适的方式去解决原因的产生,在父母看来孩子的不恰当行为自然就会停止了。
二、 一路走来从不出错的孩子,最容易出大错;过于极致的东西往往会导致极深 的伤害这种伤害如果不是针对他人,就是针对自己。
三、一个人的目标无论多大,如果目的`是为了赢得他人的认同,是为了取悦他而学习,那么这条路会走得很孤独,并且随时都会担心———我是否符合了他人的标准。一旦他人出现了不认同,就可能会放弃。
四、一个孩子只有在感受到安全和内在得到满足的情况下,才会感到快乐,快乐能够让他的爱能够自然流露。
五、永远记住,制造安全舒适的感觉比语言技巧本身还要重要。
六、邀请孩子分享他的问题,包括在谈话之前,也包括在谈话的进行过程中。
七、孩子自我行为的规范能力,需要从小靠点滴的小事来培养。生活中的自我管理能力和学习管理能力,将来对孩子成人后的工作和生活的自我管理有着巨大的影响。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
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