漆黑的山路上,总回荡着动听的歌声,一群可爱的孩子,每天零晨四五点打着火把去上学。从他们的双眸中,我看到了他们对知识的渴望,对理想的追求,对美好生活的向往——他们是贫困山区的孩子。尽管每天要打着火把走两三个小时的山路,被火烧伤过,在山路中跌倒过,可他们始终没有放弃,仍然努力地学习。再想一想我们城市里的孩子,在家不是“小皇帝”,就是“小公主”,每天爸爸妈妈开着小轿车送到学校。相比之下,我们比他们幸福得多得多,有这么好的学习环境,我们能不好好学习吗?
我,一个初一的学生,每天早晨要爸爸妈妈掀被子才肯起床;还要爸爸妈妈烧好早饭;给我收拾好书包;晚上睡觉前还要爸爸妈妈给我铺被子通过看《打着火把去上学》,我感到自愧不如。陶校长曾说过:“滴自己的汗,吃自己的饭,自己的.事自己干,靠人靠天靠祖上,不算是好汉!”这群山区的孩子们从小就养成了早睡早起,吃苦耐劳的好习惯。从他们的身上,我看到了自立、自强的优秀品质;从他们的身上,我看到了朴实、勤劳的性格;从他们的身上,我看到了乐观积极的人生态度。
每个人都有自己的梦想,贫困山区的孩子们最大的梦想就是——考上大学、走出大山。他们喜欢读书,喜欢学习,更喜欢成为一个有知识、有文化的人。我们每天总埋怨老师布置的作业太多,总厌恶一连串的考试,总抱怨自己太倒霉了可是,我们又是多么的幸运呢,
其实,每一天都是一个新的起点,我们应倍加珍惜花样年华,珍惜现在的学习机会,努力学习。回首昨天,应该是问心无愧的;面对今天,应该是倍加珍惜的;展望明天应该是信心百倍的。
在昨天,我看了一部非常感人的电影,名字叫《背着爸爸去上学》。
这部电影讲述了在一个贫困山区有一个家庭,家里有一个男孩和一个女孩,一个叫石娃,一个叫勺子,他们的爸爸供不起他们俩一起上学,只有用转勺把的方法来决定谁上学,结果勺把向着叫石娃的男孩子,于是他便有了上学的机会,而他的姐姐却只能在家里做家务。
渐渐的石娃已经是初中生了,因为成绩优秀,被选去参赛,石娃不负众望,得到了大赛的一等奖。
又过了几年,他姐姐到了出嫁的年龄,为了支持家里的生活,嫁给了一个不喜欢的有钱人。有一天,石娃去看姐姐,爸爸则在庄稼地里割玉米,忽然下起雨来,他赶紧回去,但一不小心跌断了腿,还是四五个人来帮忙才把他抬回了家,从此石娃家的生活更困难了。
石娃虽然背负沉重的家庭负担,但是他并没有气馁,一直克服一切困难努力学习。终于他拿到了师范学院的录取通知书,但是摆在他面前的路更加艰难。如果去上大学,家里就没有人照顾爸爸了,为难之时他想出了一个两全其美的办法:背着爸爸去上学。
看完了这部电影,我的心情久久不能平复!我不禁想,如果没有石娃爸爸和他姐姐的付出,石娃就上不了学,更考不上大学……石娃懂得感恩的精神也是我敬佩,我应该感谢我的父母和家人,是他们让我过上现在的幸福生话,我要报答他们,多关心他们,多为他们考虑。我要像石娃一样把生命中的一切磨难都变成我向上的踏脚石,努力前行。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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