初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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今天是“五一”国际劳动节。天气非常晴朗。我们一家三口到盐城的人民公园游玩。
人民公园里人山人海、热闹非凡。儿童游戏项目很多。我们先去坐“大青虫”,“大青虫”实际上是电动火车。刚开始,“大青虫”在轨道上“爬”得很慢,然后越来越快,下坡的时候开得最快,让我感觉惊险。我紧紧地抓住前面的把手,生怕自己掉下去。
接着,我们又去做“水上投球”游戏。当船开始旋转时,我从水里抓起一只球,向篮圈投去,结果没投中。我不灰心,又投了第二次。瞄准篮圈中心,用力地投去,结果投中了。接着,我投中了第二次、第三次,一共投中了七次。
我们还玩了“遥控军舰”。刚开始,我不知道怎么操作,所以“军舰”经常和“冰山”相撞。在妈妈的指导下,我操作自如,“军舰”也就可以安全地在水面上航行了。
另外,我们还玩了旋转木马、咚咚猴、扣盆、打怪兽、奇乐堡、太空转盘。
今天,我们玩得很开心。在游戏的同时,我也明白了一个道理:无论做什么事情都要细心、认真,多动脑筋,掌握方法,这样才能获得成功。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
前几天,老师就告诉我们周四要到金山湖公园秋游,我一直期盼着这一天的到来。这天早上,凉风习习,我早早的地起床了,迫不及待地来到了学校。
我们坐上校车,不一会儿就到了金山湖公园。金山湖公园是由金山湖公园北面的金山湖和大片湿地改建而成。我们从东大门进入公园,一进门,就看到里面绿树成荫,芳草萋萋。左边是大片休闲绿地和儿童乐园,右前方是波光粼粼的湖面,一条长堤逶迤穿湖而过,将金山湖公园的东西两片绿地连成一体。
我们项一群叽叽喳喳的小鸟,一路上撒下无数欢声笑语。沿着湖边的石子路向前走去,不一会儿就到了“情园桥”,这座桥像一个巨人叉开双腿,悠然自得地横卧在水面上,形成一个“人”子形。过了情园桥,就走上了长堤。金山湖公园又叫白娘子爱情文化公园,说以一路上我们看到许多与《白蛇传》传说有关的景点,如白娘子和许仙捣药、洗衣、担水的雕像,白娘子与小青带领虾兵蟹将水漫金山的地雕、情园桥、揽云桥、折柳堤、访仙桥等等。时近中午,我们终于到达了“终点站”——三廊门。
在这附近,有一大片大大的草地,我们在草地上休息了一会儿。草依然是绿色的,仔细看才发现草地已微微泛黄。草地旁就是碧波荡漾的金山湖,湖面上吹来阵阵微风,真让人心旷神怡。一只水鸟游过湖面,湖面上立刻泛起一阵涟漪。
中午,我们吃过零食,已经十二点多了,我们依依不舍地回去了,临走时,我学着灰太狼的样子喊了一句:“美丽的金山湖,我一定会回来的'!”
五一是国际劳动节,每年的这个节日,都会放假,今年连着周末,一共三天假期。
第一天,我在家里写作业,爸爸妈妈计划第二天带我和弟弟出去玩。第二天,也就是五月二日,早上刚醒来,妈妈就到我房间里,告诉我,起床以后,自己收拾自己的床,然后吃早餐,吃完早餐帮妈妈准备一些出去玩需要的东西,把水果准备好。于是,我洗了两个苹果和一个哈密瓜,切成小块,分别放进两个保鲜盒里,我又配了一些牙签,这样我们不管走到哪里想吃的时候,就很方便了。妈妈夸我很细心。一切准备就绪,我们就出发了。
今天,天气非常好,阳光明媚,风和日丽,蓝色天空下,白云显得格外洁净。我们刚走了没多久,就堵车了,大概是因为小长假里,天气格外好的原因,大家都想要出来晒晒太阳,兜兜风。车流量很大,车子移动的很慢,我真想汽车能一下飞起来,飞到我们要去的目的地。一直到一点多我们才到了目的地。由于,错过了吃饭的时间,我们肚子饿的咕咕叫,一下车,就去狼吞虎咽的大吃一顿。
吃完饭,爸爸妈妈带着我和弟弟在河边看鸭子和天鹅,弟弟开心的一路狂奔,路上捡的柳树枝,拿在手里使劲的挥着,嘴里还不停的叽里咕噜的说着一些我们都听不懂的话,时不时的摆个姿势,一二一的走着,看得出来,弟弟很开心。我和弟弟在草地上撒欢的时候,看到有人钓鱼,我们也去租了鱼竿,买了一包鱼食,钓起鱼来。好半天,我感觉有鱼上钩了,我使劲的往上一提,鱼竿没拿稳,鱼给跑了。后来就一直没有成果。旁边有位哥哥,钓上来很多,我好奇的过去瞧瞧,原来,他是用蚯蚓做的鱼饵,我看到他们把一条蚯蚓弄成两半,一半挂在鱼钩上,另一半还在小桶里挣扎着,看到这里,我心里很难过,它本来可以帮助小花小草松松土,快乐的和它的伙伴们生活着,想到这里,我没有心情继续钓鱼了,时间也差不多,我们退了鱼竿,看着天鹅在水中欢快的滑行,我们离开了那里,一路看着夕阳下的风景回家了。
"五一"之旅,让人难忘。俺还要去。
今年五月一日,我们一家坐着小轿车去云台山旅游,一路上,只见欢快的麦苗在风中跳着舞,红红的玫瑰花,黄黄的.月季花,还有许多不知名的小花盛开着,不时散发出淡淡的清香,田野到处充满着初夏的芬芳,我们仿佛行进在一幅美丽的画卷中。
听爸爸说,云台山属太行山系,是豫北的名山,位于河南省修武县境内。那里山岳高峻,山间常年云雾缭绕,风景优美,有着“小九寨沟”的美称。
快到云台山的时候,山路崎岖起来。远远看去,只见山脉连绵起伏,到了山脚下,我们下车步行进山。山路两边群山起伏,郁郁葱葱的绿色林海中,点缀着一簇簇小野花,带着露水和草木的清香。随处可见的潭水五光十色,色彩缤纷,而且清澈见底。在这令人心旷神怡的景色里,我禁不住跳进了清凉的水中,溅起的水花弄湿了爸爸的衣服,他拿起空水瓶,舀满水向我泼过来,哈哈,开始泼水了,我们俩互相追赶,真的是身上湿淋淋,脸上笑开花,课文里不是有句话:“清水是吉祥如意的象征,谁身上泼的水多,就意味着谁得到的幸福多。”我们怎能不高兴呢!
当我们下山时,多次回头,不忍离去。云台山,我喜欢你的山,喜欢你的水,更喜欢我们欢乐的“泼水节”。
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