当然,开头运用景物描写,要注意三个方面:一是写景的文字不能过多,不能一写到景物,就没完没了,无始无终,结果,景物写了很多,显得头大身子小,文章不匀称;二是要重点突出,主要景物多写一些,次要景物点一下即可,不能样样都写,结果都没有写好;三是写景是为人和事服务的,要与文中所写的人和事有密切关联,景与人事不能脱节,更不能把景物写成了文章的\'累赘。 请看下面这个开头: 瓦蓝瓦蓝的天,丝丝缕缕的轻云如烟般缭绕,夕阳的光辉洒满田间,万条金线接天浮动,玫瑰色的光彩,映在绿得发黑的菜上,叶面上像抹了一层油,亮闪闪的。 这段文字,是习作《路过天堂》的开头,用的全是景物描写,主要是仰视之景,夕阳下的美景,蓝天、轻云、夕照的光彩、碧绿的菜叶,渲染了美好的情境,为写“我”下文“路过天堂寨”提供了优美的环境背景。读后有身临其境之感,令人心驰神往,显然是一个好的开头。
点评: 一切景语皆情语,在记叙文、散文的写作中,景物描写是不可少的。景物描写可以渲染气氛,可以衬托人物、可以推动故事情节的发展。如果在文章的开头先进行一段简洁的景物描写,既可以为文章提供一个特定的背景,又能使文章形成一种特殊的氛围。
Dear mary:
How are you doing these days? I write this letter for expressing our appreciation of your great entertainment .
We have a very nice treavel in London,and have a wonderful impression on the senery there.London is a very beautiful city .
Not only the views but also the delicious food excited us.Facing this charming city and its abundant culture,we deeply felt its really a huge honor.
Would you like to accept our invitation for travelling in China?We sincerely Wish you a pleasure journey here.
Expresses our thanks once more .Have a nice day !
Yours,
Lihua
亲爱的李华:
很高兴收到你的来信。一切都好吗?你上一封信中说你才刚跟你父母从夏威夷度假回来。我真的很开心你能有这个开心的一段旅途。从你跟我对夏威夷的\'描述来看,那真的是一个很美的地方。我希望有一天我也能到那里旅游。我最近有点点压力,因为我准备要考期末了。我对英语,语文还有数学很有信心,但是很担心化学。你知道的,我化学一直都不好。我很怕因为化学把这次期考给弄砸了。噢,别想我的烦恼了。圣诞节就要到了,你现在肯定是在忙着准备吧。提前祝你圣诞节快乐。
李
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear in the phone call with your father that you were in hospital for you got the A H1N1 virus which made me feel so tense.
I dont know how you got it,however,dont be so scared for the A H1N1 virus is medicable duo to the high tech.You just need to be clam and partner the treatment with the dostors.
Besides,I want to give some advice about how to prevent the A H1N1 virus.Firstly,you mustnt go to the places full of people to reduce the probability of getting it.
Secondly,you should wash your hand before the meals and after you go home from outside.Only do this can you precent yourself from getting it again.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and wish you recover.
Yours,
Lihua
当然,开头运用景物描写,要注意三个方面:一是写景的文字不能过多,不能一写到景物,就没完没了,无始无终,结果,景物写了很多,显得头大身子小,文章不匀称;二是要重点突出,主要景物多写一些,次要景物点一下即可,不能样样都写,结果都没有写好;三是写景是为人和事服务的,要与文中所写的人和事有密切关联,景与人事不能脱节,更不能把景物写成了文章的累赘。
请看下面这个开头:
瓦蓝瓦蓝的天,丝丝缕缕的轻云如烟般缭绕,夕阳的光辉洒满田间,万条金线接天浮动,玫瑰色的光彩,映在绿得发黑的菜上,叶面上像抹了一层油,亮闪闪的。
这段文字,是习作《路过天堂》的开头,用的.全是景物描写,主要是仰视之景,夕阳下的美景,蓝天、轻云、夕照的光彩、碧绿的菜叶,渲染了美好的情境,为写“我”下文“路过天堂寨”提供了优美的环境背景。读后有身临其境之感,令人心驰神往,显然是一个好的开头。
Dear Chris,
How are you doing? Recently, an important volleyball game will be held in our campus, which will be not only meaningful but also exciting. So, as captain of the team, I, on behalf of all our team members, am writing to invite you to join us in the battle!
Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, it will be on the 3rd volleyball court from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of July 1st. Besides, we, the Giants, will confront the Eagles, which is undoubtedly a tough rival. As a result, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.
Hopefully, you could make it to this wonderful event. We need you! Looking forward to your reply and your presence.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear everyone,
Hello,everyone.Recently our school is going to hold the First Joke Contest.Our students can benefit a lot from attending this.It provides us a opportunity to improve our English speaking and listening skills.At the same time we are able to learn more about British culture.
Meanwhile,each competitor must pay attention that you had better speak fluently without notes.Whats more,your performance should take no more than five minutes.
Aside from a slew of performances and competition, attendees will have an opportunity to win a prize from the lucky draw. You are welcome to join us and actively participate in this competition.
Yours,
Li Hua
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