我清清楚楚记得那一天,我下午从学校回来,忽然觉得全身无力,躺在沙发上。见到我这样,妈妈吓坏了,连忙找出体温计,给我量体温,呀,发高烧,妈妈着急的说,妈妈立即找出药来喂我吃下,又问我感觉怎么样,要不要去医院,扶我上床,给我盖被子。一会儿摸摸我的额头,一会儿又喂我喝水。半夜,我忽然想呕,老妈急忙拿来垃圾桶,又给我清理呕吐物。一会儿喂我喝水,一会儿给我换冰袋。就这样在妈妈细心的照顾下我迷迷糊糊睡着了。
早上醒来,我看见妈妈眼里布满血丝,看样子她肯定一夜没睡,守护在我身旁,我很感动,同时也觉得很抱歉,真想对妈妈说声:“您辛苦了,谢谢您。”
同学们,也许在你眼里,这只是一件小事,但在我心里,这就是无私的爱啊!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
好难受啊——躺在床上的我忍不住“哼哼”了几声。
唉,清明时节病菌上身呐!心中这样想着,拉了拉被子。不一会儿,豆大的汗珠便从额上渗出,被子中的温度正在直线上升。“热啊!”把被子掀开一点,想散些热气。可刚一掀开,我却忍不住皱起了眉头——热气没能顺利的散出,被子掀起的热风却让我的头疼痛起来,一种像被千斤重物压住的感觉像我的脑袋袭来。我连忙把被子掩实,把脑袋往右偏了偏,不想,却更难受——
我的`头似乎灌满了水,这一倾斜,便把所有的重量全部压到了右边,使右边无比之痛,也让我烦躁无比。从床上坐起,一股热气从身下涌了上来,我则坐在那里嘘嘘喘气。
眉头紧缩的我一手托着头,另一只手则在被窝里揉着自己冰冷的脚丫。发烧,是“名副其实”的“冰火两重天”呐!
再躺下去的时候,胸口好像闷了一股气儿,无论被窝里的我如何伸长脖子,它就是不出来,一直憋在那里,如同一个恶魔“抓着我不放。为使自己放松,我便呈”婴儿睡”法。没多久,意识便模糊了。
可惜,这“恶魔”却没让我睡个安稳觉,带给我了一个噩梦,没睡多久我便再次醒来。
“呃——”为何这种时候想去“方便”呢?坐起身,寒气逼人,我打了个寒战。只穿了睡衣的我就这么跑去卫生间,会不会冻死?呀!头又痛起来了。唉,病毒啊病毒,我被你“打败”啦……
第二天,头疼依旧,并且尝试了“清开灵”和“板蓝根”的混合体——味道嘛,怪怪的。
第三天,病基本上好了,可惜拉肚子了。
用妈妈的话说:“清明节假都用来生病了。”
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
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