生活是写作的源泉,学生作文的思想、观点、感情及一切材料都属于生活。生活是本无字书,这部书博大精深。叶圣陶说过“作文这件事离不开生活,生活充实到什么程度,才会做成什么文字。”感悟生活不仅要体验生活,深入生活,还要心入生活,即善于在生活中探求、挖掘自己的独特的感受,形成自己的作文的活水源头。有的家长逼学生观察,甚至让学生搬个凳子坐着,四下里瞪眼,以为这是体悟生活,其实是胡闹。文学意义上的观察并非要人傻里傻气用眼去看,而是要用心去体验,用心去认识身边的人和事。没有心的人是另一种盲人,什么也发现不了。
例如,我在教了朱自清的《春》后,让学生写一篇自己对一种植物或一处景物的真切感悟的文章,题目自拟,结果大多数学生都写得非常生动。有一名学生就在《开在心里的映山红》中写道:“……每年阳历四五月份是我们村子里最美也最快乐的日子,红的、白的映山红开满山头,简直成了人间仙境,我经常和村里的几个同学到对面山坡上去摘映山红,将一朵一朵喇叭似的映山红捧在手心里,用鼻子轻轻地一闻,哇!真香!轻轻地掰一片映山红放到嘴里,一股清淡的甜味融进心里,还有一点酸,我们还用映山红花枝编成帽子戴在头上,满林子乱窜……”因为学生写的是自己亲身经历的事情,而且是最想说的话,表达的是自己觉得新奇有趣的、最有感悟的情感,所以不仅写作的积极性、主动性很高,而且写得得心应手。这样,便能在写作中感悟生活,在生活中唤起灵性。
用心悟生活实际是一种善于用情感意识去思考、去触摸事物的品质,这样的感悟并非难为,一是让眼与心沟通,入目即入心,入心即升华;二是捕捉信号,即物心与我心撞击的火花。这样,便会悟出一份惊喜,一份生活的底蕴,一份成功的真谛。许多学生的眼睛也许很明亮,写作能力也许很强,但有的心是呆钝的懒惰的,就是说他们不会感悟,不知怎样感悟。因此教师应该引导学生去关心身边那些普普通通的人和平平常常的事,用细腻的心去寻找真善美之所在,去挖掘生活中的智慧和哲理,培养学生从斑斓的生活中主动搜索作文的信息。比如一家人看电视时抢自己喜爱的节目看,是家庭生活中最常见的一件小事,稍微留心就可以写出一家三口不同的性格特征、不同的兴趣爱好,就象我的霸气、妈妈的灵气、爸爸的傻气,并可感悟到一家人浓浓的亲情。
个性化的习作必然有创新的火花,需要我们教师积极鼓励,努力使其延伸到学生的整个习作过程;创新的过程总会带有不成熟的印记,需要我们教师大度宽容,使学生更为从容地跨越成长的过渡期;学生的模仿容易趋向油滑,需要教师正确引导,使其走向纯净洗练或雄浑大气;习作的语言难免一些瑕疵,需要教师适时点拨,使其成为优美可读的文本。但愿我们共同创造良好而宽松的环境,努力培养出更多优秀的文学才子。
"Jane Eyre" is a novel with a rotation of the color, it told people the true meaning of life.
"Jane Eyre" Bronte, author of gentle, pure, like the pursuit of some good things, despite the poverty of her family, from the loss of maternal love, combined with her short stature, appearance is not outstanding, but perhaps such a soul deep inferiority complex, reflected in her character is a very self-esteem. Her of Jane Eyre is a beautiful, little woman, but she has an extremely strong sense of self.
Jane Eyre in a survival environment, from an early age with their peers under the same treatment as people do not, aunt of the , cousin of contempt, insult and tortured cousin ...... perhaps it is because of all this, for Back to the Jane Eyre indomitable confidence and strong , a personality to overcome the inherent strength. she has steadfastly pursued a bright, holy, better life.
In before, she never because he is an inferior status of the family teachers feel inferior, but think they are equal. It is because of her integrity, high moral character, pure, spiritual not secular society of pollution, making Rochester was shocked, and she can be seen as an equal in spirit and their own people to talk to, and deeply in love with her .
And when they get married that day, Jane Eyre know Rochester has a wife, she must feel that they want to leave, although she said, "I want God to comply with the law issued by the world , I would like to stick to living a sober and sometimes I was not as so crazy now when accepted . " But speaking from the heart, deeper love Jane realize that they are being cheated, she's self-esteem has been teased because she loved Rochester. However, Jane Eyre has made a very rational decision. In such a strength of love under siege, in the prosperous life under the , she still has to adhere to their own dignity as an individual, this is the spirit of Jane Eyre the most charming place.
Novel design of a very bright at the end - although Rochester's manor destroyed, he himself became a disability, but it is such a condition, so that Jane Eyre is no longer in the dignity and the conflict between love and at the same time access to their own dignity and love.
In today's society, people are mad for money and status of submerged love. In between poor and rich choice of the rich, and in love with does not love does not love to choose between. Few people will be like this for the love of Jane Eyre to abandon all for the character, and without looking back. "Jane Eyre" by the show to us is a kind of getting back to basics, is a fully paid by the pursuit of love, there are as a human being should have dignity. It is like a cup of ice water, purifying the hearts of everyone.
BOOK REPORT_Oliver Twist
Charles Dickens is one of the most famous novelists of the Victorian Age. When Charles Dickens was young, his father was put into prison. During this time, Dickens was living by himself and working in the underground cell of a shoe blacking factory. Maybe it is because this period of experience that makes Charles Dickens’s works are more focused on the living condition of the poor. In many of his novels, Dickens showed his sympathy for the poor. Just like this book-Oliver Twist in which Charles Dickens described the miserable life of the poor children and exposed the seedy side of the society at that time.
Oliver Twist is one of Charles Dickens' most popular stories. Oliver Twist was born in a workhouse in 1930s. Later, he was sent to a Coffin shop as an apprentice. As he couldn’t endure the oppression from his boss, he fled to London. However, on the way to London, he was cheated into the haunt of thieves and trained to be a thief. On one occasion, he was taken in by a rich man—Mr. Brownlow. But unfortunately, he was framed and entrapped into the haunt of thieves again. But Oliver still believes that there are hopes in his life. Finally, Nancy, a kind-hearted woman pickpocket, rescued Oliver from dangers despite the threat of the thief-in-chief and told Brownlow that actually Oliver is his good friend’s son. Nancy was killed at the end of the story, but the police surround the haunt of thieves immediately and Oliver reunited with his family members.
Of the characters in this story, Oliver, Nancy and Miss Ross represent the goodness that they are born in suffering, grow in dark world, but still keep a heart ofgold. None of the hardships can through them into the hell. Oliver is a brave and strong child that he suffered enormous pain, such as hunger, thirst, beating and abuse. But no matter how tough his life is he never gives up his belief. What’s more, in Oliver Twist, morality and nobility are always black-and-white issues. Just like Monks, who was a greedy, ruthless, shameless person, represents the black, Olive can represents the white. But Nancy, a thief who has done something bad, finally been influenced by Oliver and decided to help Oliver. This gives us the implication that the boundary between virtue and vice is not always so distinct.
Charles Dickens praised ideal human nature and interpersonal relationships and he hoped to use his pen to express his ideals in that the reality is very cruel. So, through this novel, Dickens criticized the seedy side of the capitalist society at that time and expressed his deep sympathy about the bottom class who lived in a miserable life. In this way the people could realize the social reality and consider more about their behavior. But on the other hand, Dickens shows his wish through this novel that people should firm their belief no matter what they are suffering about and evil can never prevail over good.
新课标鼓励学生自由表达和有创意地表达。其作文具有强烈的竞争性。在立意上,只有将笔锋触及别人尚未写到的新人新事新问题,表达出自己独到的观察发现和认识感受,写出新意,才能取得意高文胜的效果。但大多数人在考场上因情绪紧张,一时想不出新的素材,这就要求能够巧于构思,让旧素材表达出别人未能表达的新意来,这存在一个选择角度问题。比如拿到一个苹果,别人都习惯于竖着切分,你若能独出心裁横着切,结果切分出来的横断面就与别人切分的截然不同,你就可能从中观察到别人观察不到的东西。作文也当如此,“横看成岭侧成峰”,变换一个角度,或许就能化腐朽为神奇。告诉同学们,事物都是有区别的,我们要善于分析比较,只有这样才能写他人之未写,才能有独特的见解,并要求学生自己命题写文章,在作文中把事物的异处表现出来。
例如,有位学生以《疙瘩柳》为题写一篇作文,结尾处这样写道:“柳树被伤害了,婀娜的它背着个丑陋的疙瘩;人要被伤害了,愉悦的他也会背着个沉重的`思想疙瘩。人啊,请不要伤害柳,更不要伤害人。”事后我问她为什么这样写,她说:“我发现我们学校的柳树中有两棵有疙瘩,先请教一位老师。他说因为柳树老了。我指着不远处一棵小柳树问他,听说那棵柳树只有五年树龄,怎么也有疙瘩呢?他没有回答出来。后来问生物老师,才知道柳树的疙瘩为伤害所致。”这位学生的见解不同于一般,她通过柳树的对比,同中求异,又联想到人,于是写了这篇富有新意的文章。
This is a story about a special and unreserved woman who has been exposed to a hostile environment but continuously and fearlessly struggling for her ideal life. The story can be interpreted as a symbol of the independent spirit.
It seems to me that many readers’ English reading experience starts with Jane Eyer. I am of no exception. As we refer to the movie “Jane Eyer”, it is not surprising to find some differences because of its being filmized and retold in a new way, but the spirit of the novel remains----to be an independent person, both physically and mentally.
Jane Eyer was a born resister, whose parents went off when she was very young, and her aunt,the only relative she had,treated her as badly as a ragtag. Since Jane’s education in Lowwood Orphanage began, she didn’t get what she had been expecting——simply being regarded as a common person, just the same as any other girl around. The suffers from being humiliated and devastated teach Jane to be persevering and prize dignity over anything else.As a reward of revolting the ruthless oppression, Jane got a chance to be a tutor in Thornfield Garden. There she made the acquaintance of lovely Adele and that garden’s owner, Rochester, a man with warm heart despite a cold face outside. Jane expected to change the life from then on, but fate had decided otherwise: After Jane and Rochester fell in love with each other and got down to get marry, she unfortunately came to know in fact Rochester had got a legal wife, who seemed to be the shadow following Rochester and led to his moodiness all the time ----Rochester was also a despairing person in need of salvation. Jane did want to give him a hand, however, she made up her mind to leave, because she didn’t want to betray her own principles, because she was Jane Eyer. The film has finally got a symbolist end: Jane inherited a large number of legacies and finally returned. After finding Rochester ’s misfortune brought by his original mad wife, Jane chose to stay with him forever.
I don’t know what others feel, but frankly speaking, I would rather regard the section that Jane began her teaching job in Thornfield as the film’s end----especially when I heard Jane’s words “Never in my life have I been awaken so happily. ” For one thing, this ideal and brand-new beginning of life was what Jane had been imagining for long as a suffering person; for another, this should be what the audiences with my views hoped her to get. But the professional judgment of producing films reminded me to wait for a totally different result: There must be something wrong coming with the excellence----perhaps not only should another section be added to enrich the story, but also we may see from the next transition of Jane’s life that “Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you would get.”
What ’s more, this film didn’t end when Jane left Thornfield. For Jane Eyer herself, there should always be somewhere to realize her great ideal of being independent considering her fortitude, but for Rochester, how he can get salvation? The film gives the answer tentatively: Jane eventually got back to Rochester. In fact, when Jane met Rochester for the first time, she scared his horse and made his heel strained, to a certain extent, which meant Rochester would get retrieval because of Jane. We can consider Rochester’s experiences as that of religion meaning. The fire by his frantic wife was the punishment for the cynicism early in his life. After it, Rochester got the mercy of the God and the love of the woman whom he loved. Here we can say: human nature and divinity get united perfectly in order to let such a story accord with the requirements of both two sides. The value of this film may be due to its efforts to explore a new way for the development of humanism under the faith of religion.
《简爱》是一部激励女性,振奋人心的作品。这是十九世纪英国著名的女作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作。
故事中的简爱从小就失去了父母,被舅舅家领养。舅舅里德很照顾简爱,却不幸过早离世了。这就使得简爱在舅舅家的地位是无足轻重的了。简爱在那受尽了歧视和瘧待,表哥常常欺凌她,舅母对她甚至是像对仆人一样,并且千方百计地要赶走她。尽管如此,但小小年纪的简爱离开的时候并没有表现出一丝的留恋和依赖,因为她知道她心里坦荡荡的,光明正大,所以才无所畏惧。送去罗沃德孤儿院之后,她遇到了最好的朋友海伦。两颗幼小纯洁的心灵从此联系在了一起。简爱体现出了一种敢于反抗封建思想的精神。怎么可以因为上课时分神了一下就得遭受严厉的鞭打呢?这是冷漠人心的表现,是不符合人权的行为。期间,简爱掌握了不少知识,并且还做了老师。
之后,简爱来到桑恩费尔德庄园应聘,也就是在这里,她遇到了生命中的真命天子——罗切斯特。他们在庄园里的第一次对话便有些针锋相对的意味。罗切斯特是个富有的有社会地位的庄园主,也许是对贫苦人的抱怨和希望博得他人同情的行为司空见惯了,他以为简爱也会如此,会大肆宣泻自己的不幸与不满。可是令他意外的是,简爱竟然说她自己没有不幸。而且是在父母早亡,在舅舅家受瘧待和歧视,被舅母赶出家门,在孤儿院受压迫过活的情况下。其实光是这一点,就足够令罗切斯特对简爱感到另眼相看了。
在点点滴滴的相处中,罗切斯特深深地感受到,简是个坚强,内心深处有着自己独特想法,有血有肉的女子,是个能与他的灵魂平等交流的女子。他被简彻底地打动了。一次Party使得简爱的期待落空,也使得屈辱不堪的'她终于爆发了,道出了自己的心声:不要以为我长得矮小平凡就以为我不会思考,就没有爱的能力;如果我也有上帝所赋予的天资,那么我也同样会很出色。我认为,这也是本书最精彩的地方。的确,其实人生来就是不平等的。有的人出于富贵之家,有的人生来就拥有一幅好的容貌。可是,何必要执着于这些呢?要知道,我们还是能够满怀友爱,自信而平等地对待他人。
一念天堂,一念地狱,如何取舍就在于自己的一念一想。误会解除之后,罗切斯特向简求婚,简高兴地答应了,然而没想到的是,这背后却有个惊天秘密。罗有个患有精神病的结婚十五年的妻子!这个事实令简大受打击,她忍受不了她最信任的人一直欺骗着她,忍受不了他们之间有道法律的鸿沟,而这条鸿沟却是跨不过去的。简带着她仅剩的一点尊严离开了罗,之后被牧师圣。约翰收留。圣。约翰请求简做他的妻子,一并带她去印度。当问及娶简的原因时,他的回答却仅仅是简适合做传教士的妻子,而不是出于爱。不,这不是简想要的爱情。她想拥有的爱情是纯洁的,是两个心灵激情碰撞之后产生的火花,是因情感交流而衍生出来的惺惺相惜,绝不是存在利益关系的交易。于是,简又回到了庄园课那里却变成了一片狼藉,简急切地想要找到罗切斯特,看他是否安好。因为那场大火,罗切斯特变成了一个残废。可尽管如此,简还是一如既往地爱着他,并没有因为他变成了残疾而鄙视、抛弃他,也并不会因为他变得一无所有而离开他。这就是简对爱情的态度:你可以贫穷,你可以变丑,但你不能欺骗我,伤害我的自尊。这才是真正的“因为爱情”。
我想,简的这种精神是独立的,是难能可贵的。我们是活生生的有思想,有感情的人,带着尊严和爱生活在这个世界。别人可以瞧不起我们,但我们不能看不起自己,我们要“自命不凡”,坚强、自信、努力地面对一切困难,迎难而上。如何做的关键就在于自己如何想。选择积极的心态那么阳光、快乐、满足将会伴你一生;选择消极的心态,那么阴郁、抱怨、不幸将会长相随。所以,对自己好一点的话,全世界都会为你让路。
《双城记》
After reading "A tale of two cities" "A tale of two cities" is one of Dickens's most important representative works.The novel profoundly exposed the society contradiction before the French Revolution,intensely attacks the aristocratic social clais dissolute and cruel,and sincerely
sympathizes with the depressed classes.The novel also described many magnificent scenes like the revolt people attacked Bastille and so on,which displayed people's great strength.
The novel has portrayed many different people. Doctor Manette is honest and kind but suffers the persecution actually , Lucie is beautiful and gentle ,Charles is graceful and noble,Lorry is upright and honest ,Sydney is semblance of indifferent, innermost feelings of
warm,unconventional but also selfleand lofty,MiProis straightforward and loyal,Evremonde brothers are cruel and sinister......The complex hatred is hard to solve, the cruel revenge has made more hatreds, loves rebirth in the hell edge,but take the life as the price.
As an outstanding writer,in Dickens's work,the language skill is essential.Each kind of rhetoric technique,like the analogy,the exaggeration,the contrast,the humorous,and the taunt are handled skillfully,and the artistry of the work is also delivered the peak."A tale of two cities" has its difference with the general historical novel, its character and the main plot are all
fictionalizes.With the broad real background of the French Revolution,the author take the fictional character Doctor Manette's experience as the main clue,interweaves the unjust charge, upholstery and so many techniques,causes the structure integrity and strictness,the plot winding anxious and rich of theatrical nature,it displayed the remarkable artistic skill.the style "A tale of two cities" is solemnity and melancholy,fills indignantion,but lacks the humor of the early works.
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer 汤姆?索亚历险记
By Mark Twain [美]马克?吐温 著
Summary:
Tom Sawyer loves adventures. He has adventures at home, at school, and other mysterious places with his friends. One day, Tom has an adventure in the graveyard. And they sea Injun Joe kills the doctor. He wants to kill the boys. Some days passed, Tom and Becky have an adventure in the cave. They hear Injun Joe! They run out of the cave as soon as possible. Later, Tom and his friends go to the cave again. They find that Injun Joe was died, and they the precious treasure. They go out of the cave with the box of money!
Comment:
Tom Sawyer is an active and pretty smart boy. He has a strong courage to go for an adventure. He is a brave boy, and he must be a reliable friend. He can always help you at the important time. Tom Sawyer is a good boy and his adventures are really interesting and be expectin
Alice in Wonderland 爱丽丝奇遇记 Lewis Carroll [美] 卡罗尔 著
Summary:
One hot summer day, Alice and her sister are sitting under the tree. Alice sees a white rabbit, and she run after it. The rabbit goes down a rabbit whole and Alice follows it, she is now in a strange wonderland. Alice eats some special things, and she changes her size! Everything is different and strange there. The animals there can speak! Alice meets many interesting things. At last, she wakes up. It’s just a dream!
Comment:
This story is really interesting, and attractive. Alice is a sincere gentle girl. She is ready to help others and is able to face to the dangerous things. In this way, Alice is also a brave and clever girl written by author.
The story includes three parts. They are respectively talking about: Gulliver in Lilliput, in Brobdingnag, and in Houyhnms.
Gulliver travels to the South Seas. On their way to the East Indies, a strong wind carried them to the wrong way. Most of the people died. Some days later, he comes to Lilliput, everything is small there. Three days later, he comes to Brobdingnag. This country is opposite from Lilliput, the thing are huge, very huge! Then he travels to a place called Houyhnms, which is also very interesting. Comment:
This is an exciting and interesting book. It’s also kind of humorous. I enjoy the story very much. And after reading the book, I find that we must learn from Gulliver. Learn from his braver, intelligence and wisdom.
Heidi 海蒂
By Johanna Spyri [瑞士]施皮里 著
Summary:
Heidi is a cute and kindhearted girl. She lives in the mountain of Switzerland, and has no mother or father. One sunny day, she goes to stay with her grandfather in his little wooden house, high up in the mountain. She soon has a friend——goat-Peter. She makes Alm-Opa no longer lonely. One day, Heidi’s aunt takes her to Miss Rohmer’s house to be a servant. Later she helps Clara to stand up from the wheel chair, and can even walk more!
Comment:
Heidi is a nice and kindhearted girl. She is helpful, and is kind to everyone. She will try her best to help others. She helps her grandfather goes out of lonely; she let the blind grandmother finds out the happiness; she also helps Clara to stand up from the wheel chair, and can even walk more! In a word, we must learn from Heidi a lot!
Summary:
“Always be good, so people will love you. Always work hard and do your best.” These were the words of Black Beauty’s mother to him when he was young. At that time, they lived with farmer
Grey. But when Black Beauty grown up, this was sometimes difficult. Not everybody was as kind as farmer Grey. Even someone heart him. Ata last, Mr. Thorouhgood helped him and took him on his farm. It was Black Beauty’ last home.
Comment:
There were many thousands of horses or other animals at work. Some of them work for kind people, but some do not. The animals have to pull heavy things, and have to works for hours and hours. So what may we do now? I’m calling for helping animals. Protecting them in our best. Then, we’ll have a piece and wonderful world!
By Daniel Defoe [英]迪福 著
Summary:
Robinson Crusoe is at the sea when there is a great storm. His ship goes down, and everybody dies. Crusoe is on the island along. He is not daunted by the difficulties. He has built a tent, a ‘castle’, made the appliances…At last, he has returned to his hometown London.joozone.com 本文来自地带:/yc/1837_4.htmlComment:
This is an exciting story. Robinson is a great man. He lived on the island for about 30 years without food, tool, or habitation. He wasn’t afraid of hardship. He was brave in adventure, and he was good at labor. I admire his courage very much. He is a real hero. He makes a great personal miracle on the one-man-island!
In fact, we also need to have the sprite of being undefeated and indefatigable, just like Robinson. If we believe ourselves, and never give up, do as possible as we can, we must be successful!
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