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Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______.
Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.
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In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China,and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years.
The biggest benefit,in my eyes,is that_______.In addition,_______.Finally,______________.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges.In the first place,_____________.In the second place,________.What’s more,_______________.In summary,we should_______________.
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Nowadays more and more ______are commonly and widely used in everyday life,ranging from __________to_____________.
The popularity of _______will have a great influence on ______.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,__________.
To conclude,____________are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may________.However,one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use,always being a master instead of slaving of them.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
我一心想见见外星人,就从深圳科学馆买回了多功能眼镜和沟通神糖。晚上,我戴上多功能眼镜,吃了一颗沟通神糖。一会儿,我就看见了外星人的飞蝶停在我家门前的草地上。我走进飞蝶,只见四种外星人正在开种族大会。他们分别是:巨爪型、矮人型、飞翼型、蒙古人型。我对一个矮人型外星人说:“你好!我来自地球,叫黄毅,今年11岁。” “欢迎你来我们ufo星球做客,我是fa3,让我们交个朋友吧!”他彬彬有礼地回答。
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从餐厅里出来,天色不早了,我就告别了fa3,坐飞蝶回地球。就在飞蝶快要到达地球时,飞蝶出了机戒故障。我只得坐着逃逸舱轻轻地落在地球上。
朋友们,你也想见外星人吗?快去深圳科学馆买多功能眼镜和沟通神糖,想见就能见。
晚上,我戴上多功能眼镜,吃了一颗沟通神糖。一会儿,我就看见了外星人的`飞蝶停在我家门前的草地上。我走进飞蝶,只见四种外星人正在开种族大会。他们分别是:巨爪型、矮人型、飞翼型、蒙古人型。我对一个矮人型外星人说:“你好!我来自地球,叫黄毅,今年11岁。” “欢迎你来我们ufo星球做客,我是fa3,让我们交个朋友吧!”他彬彬有礼地回答。
说完,fa3就带我去太空游乐园玩。fa3说:“请你按一个幸运数字,也许你能得到太空彩头奖。这一期的特等奖奖金是13亿元太空币。”我随便按了一个8字。一位蒙古人型外星型就颁奖给我,还说恭喜我中了特等奖。我分了一半给fa3。我们在太空游乐园里玩累了,就去太空100星级豪华酒店去里吃中餐,我们要了两份“全套麦当劳”。
从餐厅里出来,天色不早了,我就告别了fa3,坐飞蝶回地球。就在飞蝶快要到达地球时,飞蝶出了机戒故障。我只得坐着逃逸舱轻轻地落在地球上。
朋友们,你也想见ufo的新闻报导祥细地介绍了多功能眼镜和沟通神糖。
我一心想见见外星人,就从深圳科学馆买回了多功能眼镜和沟通神糖。晚上,我戴上多功能眼镜,吃了一颗沟通神糖。一会儿,我就看见了外星人的飞蝶停在我家门前的草地上。我走进飞蝶,只见四种外星人正在开种族大会。他们分别是:巨爪型、矮人型、飞翼型、蒙古人型。我对一个矮人型外星人说:“你好!我来自地球,叫黄毅,今年11岁。” “欢迎你来我们ufo星球做客,我是fa3,让我们交个朋友吧!”他彬彬有礼地回答。
说完,fa3就带我去太空游乐园玩。fa3说:“请你按一个幸运数字,也许你能得到太空彩头奖。这一期的特等奖奖金是13亿元太空币。”我随便按了一个8字。一位蒙古人型外星型就颁奖给我,还说恭喜我中了特等奖。我分了一半给fa3。我们在太空游乐园里玩累了,就去太空100星级豪华酒店去里吃中餐,我们要了两份“全套麦当劳”。
从餐厅里出来,天色不早了,我就告别了fa3,坐飞蝶回地球。就在飞蝶快要到达地球时,飞蝶出了机戒故障。我只得坐着逃逸舱轻轻地落在地球上。
朋友们,你也想见外星人吗?快去深圳科学馆买多功能眼镜和沟通神糖,想见就能见。
吗?快去深圳科学馆买多功能眼镜和沟通神糖,想见就能见。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
中学生只有十多岁,既不能工作,也不能赚钱,我们只能读好书来孝敬父母。我们可以在父亲节或母亲节的时候展现一张漂亮的成绩册给他们。“不听父母言,吃亏在眼前”,我们应该听父母的劝告,毕竟姜是老的辣嘛!听他们的'劝告不仅对我们有好处,也能使他们感到满足:我的孩子长大了!我们应该在平时储蓄。只要我们一天储蓄一点,到父母生日当天,我们就会有足够的钱买生日蛋糕或礼物我为他们庆祝生日。
我们还可以帮父母做家务。这样一来,我们不但能减轻父母的重担,还可以使家里变得一尘不染呢!何乐而不为呢?我们的小动作可以令他们感到欣慰。比如:我们自己安排时间,主动帮他们拿东西,在他们遇到问题时帮助他们……这些都是孝敬父母的方法。
父母是伟大的。我们应该尽早孝敬他们,以免到头来,父母不在了,我们才后悔。
小时侯,我们对父母依附、崇拜。进入青春期后,我们有了自己的思想,开始独立行事,渴望从家长那里拿到“解放证书”,渴望父母像对待大人那样对待我们,甚至挑战父母的权威。而在父母的眼里,我们总是长不大的孩子,没有生活经验,没有丰富的阅历,却有自己的主意。父母责怪我们越来越不服管教,越来越不懂事,而怀念我们小时侯的乖样子。他们对我们的关爱之心没有变,只是要求更加严格,免不了多叮嘱几句,在我们听不进时,就觉得家长唠叨。罗嗦。于是,我们与父母之间就产生了矛盾。
望子成龙。望女成风,是天下父母共同的心愿。我们与父母的冲突,往往基于父母对我们的高期待。严要求。这种在我们看来有些苛求的“严”,反映出父母对于我们的爱。我们要理解。体谅父母的一片苦心。
与父母发生冲突,如果以强硬的态度顶撞,以粗暴的举止反抗,或者对他们不理不睬。冷淡相对,或者由对某事的分歧迁移到对父母本人的恶感,甚至采用极端的办法来处理,都是错误的,会造成极大的危害。
在家中,父母与我们之间容易产生矛盾和代沟,对此不能否认,不能漠视,但也不能夸大。积极的做法是从中架起沟通的桥梁。沟通是双方的事。我们做子女的,要走近父母,亲近父母,努力跨越代沟,与父母携手同行。
在家庭交往中,与父母不必太计较。即使父母错了,也要多原谅,不要非与父母争个高低上下。有时即使争赢了,也不一定给自己带来快乐,给家庭带来幸福;我们认了错,也不会丢面子了,反而让我们丢掉包袱,得到更多的爱和快乐。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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