My dearest Mother,
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.
Love,
Your son
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
亲爱的`母亲:
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you will have a wonderful mother's day.
母亲节快到了,我想在这封信里对您说“母亲节快乐”。我爱你,感谢你为我做的一切。这一天,我离开了,不能在家给您表达我的谢意。我知道我会看着自己,所以不要担心我。我在学习上做得很好。我的同学和老师都很好。尽管我不在家里,我仍希望您有一个美好的母亲节。
Your son,
你的儿子,
Li ming
李明
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
几年前,母亲随口说的一句话,仍存留在我心灵深处。不知为何,她的那句话,她那时面部的表情,如此难以忘却,无论风吹雨打,还是艳阳高照,都铭记在心。
我小学的时候,成绩非常不好,不及格是非常正常的现象,妈妈每次看到我的成绩都皱着眉毛,浓浓的忧愁。再加上邻居家的孩子成绩非常好,这令她更难过了,每次大人们谈孩子时都躲得远远的。
一次期末考试,那是我有史以来分数最低的一次,成了班里倒数第一,也因此,开家长会时妈妈被老师留到了最后,谈了谈话,回到家时,妈妈身上充满了低气压。那一天,刚好下着大雨,天空没了往日的蔚蓝,乌黑一片,轰隆隆,雷声猛烈地响着。妈妈来到我身旁,脸上也是阴沉沉的,满满的哀痛,眼尾有些微红,又有点湿润,我不由得想:她是哭了吗?我的思绪被妈妈打断,她最初说了什么,现在我也记不清多少了,唯一记得“我们只是普通人,你要记住,对于你来说,只能好好学习,不要像爸爸妈妈一样,每天都很累,却挣不了多少钱,你要努力,再努力,拼尽全力,不要走爸爸妈妈这样的路。”从那以后,我奋发图强,成绩逐渐上升,心中一直记得那时发生的一切,每当坚持不下去时,就会想起她的话。
良言一句三冬暖。母亲的话,如阳光,温暖着我,也鼓励着我前行。
When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn‘t do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was very happy.
When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which weren‘t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His mother said, Thank you,my child!
今天是母亲节。孙峥觉得应该为妈妈做点事,他决定帮妈妈做些家务。放学回家的路上,他去商店买了食品。到家后,他尽全力做些好吃的,尽管他并不擅长烹任。做完饭,他又打扫了房间。他感觉有些累,但仍然很高兴。
当父母回来后,看见干净的房间和并不太荚味的`菜,他们依然很高兴。他们一起吃了晚饭。妈妈说:“谢谢你,孩子。”
Today is Mother‘s Day. I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework, others .are going to buy some flowers for their mothers. I want to say to her that I love her very much. But as a boy, it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart. I think only girls can do that.
My mother is very kind. She takes care of me day and night.
She spends little money, but buys anything for me that I need.
This time I must show my love. I am going to give her a card and write like this, I love you, mother! I am going to put it under her pillow.
今天是母亲节。我知道一些同学打算帮妈妈做些家务,还有一些同学打算给妈妈买些花。我只是想对妈妈说一声,我非常爱她。但是对我来说这样表达我的情感有点儿难,因为我是个男孩。我觉得只有女生才这样做。
我妈妈是个非常善良的人。她对我照顾得无微不至。她自己很少花钱,但能给我买我需要的任何东西。
这次我一定要表示我对她的爱。我打算送她一张写有“我爱你,妈妈”的卡片,我还打算把它放在她的枕头下面。
“加油,你是最棒的!”这是妈妈常跟我说的一句话。这句话像盏善良的明灯,指引着我人生的方向。这句话像一张耸立的白帆,引领着我驶向成功的彼岸。这句话像一条闪电。在我迷茫的时候为我指点迷津……
有一次妈妈让我看《哈利。波特》这本书,我看的不耐烦了,就把书扔到里一边。妈妈看见了,不但没有批评我,而且还抚摸着我的头说:“孩子,加油你是最棒的.!这只是你姥姥送改我的一句话,‘当年,只有我们四个姐妹和一个哥哥,没有人管我们,只留下了点钱,我们要有不会的题,都没有人问。有一天妈妈回来了,说领导生病了,停了三天。我们都说:“不学了,学习实在是太苦了!”但是妈妈说:“加油,你是最棒的!”’妈妈的这句话鼓励了我们。从此以后,学习再苦,再累,只要想起妈妈说的那句话,就再也不苦,不累了,因为是这句话给了我们无穷无尽的力量。”
我听到这里,我的眼泪都涌出来了,我拾起我扔下的书,我好好学习,天天向上。在期中考试中,我取得了很好的成绩。
长跑运动会上,我参加了400米长跑。“砰!”地一声,发令枪响了,我飞一般的冲了出去,等到最后一百米冲刺的时候,我已经筋疲力尽了,但是我听见妈妈正在上面高喊:“吕奇峰,加油,你是最棒的!”这句话给了我动力,我一口气冲到底,赢得了冠军。再一次写作业的时候,我埋怨老师留的作业太多,就不写了,妈妈说:“不管做什么,只要用心去做,好好去做,就会更上一城楼的。孩子,加油,你是最棒的!”
“孩子,加油,你是最棒的!”这句话像一艘大轮船,载着我驶向金色的沙滩;这句话像一盏不熄的明灯,照亮了我人生的道路;这句话像一把神奇的扫帚,扫清了我前进的道路,扫清了我前进的道路上的障碍。这句话已经印在了我的心里。我我会永存心中。“孩子,加油,你是最棒的!”
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