初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我爱看书,已经到了极度痴迷的地步。书像我的一日三餐,每天必不可少。因为反复品尝其中的味道,就会知道里面的香甜。
有一天,我妈妈不在家。她已经帮我把中午饭做好了,到点一吃就行了。我早晨写了好长时间的作业,感觉能放松了,便开始把家翻了个底儿朝天,目的只有一个——想找书看。
“这个中华成语故事,这个一千零一夜,这个……这些书都看过了,但又感觉不熟悉。对了!我可以再看一遍呀!”我自言自语道。不会吧!这些成语故事的出处呀,译义呀,都忘光了,就有的故事还记得些。原来这里边有这么多知识啊!我边想边点了点头。“汜”怎么读呀?怎么感觉那么陌生?我查完字典后才知道了答案,原来这字念si。真没想到我原来看书那么走马观花,只看了里面的.故事情节,根本不管里面字怎么读,词什么意思,段主要写了什么。现在我可验证了古人的一句话了“温故而知新,可以为师矣。”我思索着,查着字典,想着词义……
时间一分一秒的过去了,我的肚子不知怎么了,总是“咕咕”的叫,这时我才想起妈妈的叮嘱:“记住12点的时候把饭吃了啊!”我抬头看了看表,不禁吓了一跳,现在都3点半了!那饭都凉了!
虽然那次吃了一顿凉饭,但是我的心里却为得到了那么多的知识而快乐!
我最喜欢的人是妈妈,更忘不了她那双手。一见那双手,我心里就甜丝丝的。
小时候,我每天都要她抱。每当这时,妈妈就会把我举得高高的,然后轻轻地放我下来,拍拍我的小屁股,说:“小调皮,我要做事了。”说完妈妈就去煮饭炒菜了。她在炒菜,我则在一边目不转睛地看着,那手真是灵巧极了。
晚上,妈妈把我抱在怀里,一边用扇子帮我驱赶蚊子,一边讲那天边的故事。我睡着了,妈妈就放下我,一针一针的织毛衣,把她的爱都织进了衣服里。
当我学写字时,妈妈就手把手的教我写。写完了妈妈就会用红笔在纸上画一个鲜红的钩,再打上一百分。
有一次,我生病了。妈妈熬好药亲手喂我喝,我嫌药太苦,妈妈劝我说:“良药苦口利于病”,并拿来一颗水果糖放进我嘴里,再拿药喂我。
现在,由于过多操劳,妈妈有了白头发,可她依然细心地照顾我,从不在我面前表现出一点儿劳累的神态。
我已经长大了许多,可总是忘不了妈妈的手和妈妈的哺育之恩。
二年级那时,我们有一个漂亮的班主任,她的名字叫作:李瑞影,我们都纷纷尊敬的叫她:李老师,我们都很喜欢她!为什么呢?请听我慢慢道来:
李老师的五官很端正。李老师有两条像月亮那样弯的眉毛;眉毛下嵌着一对水灵灵,会说话的大眼睛;挺拔的鼻尖上戴着一个有着白领风味的眼镜;那厚厚的樱桃小嘴一笑起来,雪白雪白的牙齿露了出来,就像一个甜美的小公主!
李老师的眼睛会说话。记得有一次,我上课没专心听讲,东瞅瞅,西瞅瞅,被老师碰个正着,李老师的眼睛瞪了我一下,仿佛是在对我说:“冬妮,快点认真听课,如果你再不认真听课,我可要当着全班的面批评你了!”听了老师的话,我的脸“唰“的一下就红了!
李老师的声音很奇妙。记得有一次,老师朗读一篇课文,哪篇课文的题目是《礼物》,老师的声音时而忧伤,时而快乐,时而深情,时而……老师读完后,可我还呆呆地在座位上坐着,因为,我已经陶醉在老师的朗读声中了!直到我的同桌推了我一下,我才清醒过来。
……
怎么样?先说点精华给你们听。这就是我们喜欢李老师的原因。读了这篇文章,你们是否喜欢我们的李老师呢?
我的爷爷已经70多岁了,但他相信“活到老,学到老”。每天,书房里都有他戴着老花镜认真学习的身影,孩子们都亲切地叫他“博士爷爷”。
爷爷博览群书。读书时他常常用笔在书上圈圈画画;他热爱音乐,干活时常常哼着小曲,无论是“二胡”还是“葫芦丝”,都难不倒他:他风趣幽默,当我们说他头发少时,他就乐呵呵地说:“你们不知道吧?聪明的`脑袋,不长毛。”
爷爷爱写诗。我和奶奶总是诗的第一批读者。他常常让我们提一些宝贵的意见。记得一个初春的夜晚,天气闷热,一丝风也没有,奶奶正在灯下做着针线活,一只蛾子不知从哪儿钻了进来,围着奶奶不停地转,一会儿落在灯上,一会儿落在奶奶的手上,奶奶被蛾子扰得心烦,停下手中的活,伸出双手要打死它,蛾子惊慌地飞来飞去,想要溜走,说时迟,那时快。只见奶奶双手一拍,蛾子就被奶奶打死了。这一切恰好被爷爷看在眼里,他诗性大发,挥笔写下了一首小诗:
一只春蛾扰吾妻,
吾妻发怒打死你。
春娥逃命难择路,
双掌合击命休矣。
当我欣赏完这首小诗时,我不禁暗暗地佩服爷爷,一件不起眼的小事,爷爷也能写出这么精彩的诗。
这就是我的爷爷,一个风趣的人;一个爱好广泛的人;一个知识渊博的人,同学们你一定羡慕我有这样的爷爷吧!
我有一个小表妹,她今年才四岁。她可天真了。不信,你听我慢慢说来。
暑假中的一天,我去舅舅家玩。一进门,我就找表妹。楼上、楼下、各个房间我都找过了,可一无所获。她会去什么地方呢?我突然想起来,她家后面还有个“小花园”呢?其实那只不过是一块空地,因为表妹嚷着要种花,那块空地就成了她的“小花园”。
我来到了“小花园”。只见表妹正蹲在那儿弄着泥土。我轻手轻脚地走过去,看见一支新铅笔大半被插在泥土里,只有一小部分露在外面。“嘿!你果然在这儿!在干什么啊?”她叫见有人叫她,抬起头来,见是我,欢喜的表情立即洋溢于她的小脸上。她一本正经地对我说:“姐姐,你来得正好,你看,我正在种铅笔呢!”我露出惊讶的神情,刚想说:“铅笔怎么能种呢?”她继续说:“苹果树上结苹果,桃树上结桃子……我把铅笔种在地里,会长出铅笔树来,那时,树上挂满了各种各样的铅笔,姐姐,我一定送给你几支……”看着她那极认真的样子,我真不忍心把真相告诉她。但我又不得不把事情的真相告诉她。她听了我的话,显得很失望,她极不情愿地撅着小嘴走回了她的小房间。
你们看!我的小表妹是不是很天真呀!
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