今天看了于丹老师的《如何培养孩子的德智体能全面发展》,老师主要讲了两个方面:
(一培养孩子的孝心、爱心,让孩子懂得感恩,不能一味的骄惯孩子。
老师讲的一则寓言,告诉我们父母就像那棵大树一样把它所有的东西都无私的奉献给了那个孩子,到最后他什么都没有的时候,那个孩子也老了,那个孩子会回来陪陪他一起晒晒太阳,这棵老树心里也很高兴、很开心。是的,做为父母他们要求的并不多,只要孩子好,只要孩子幸福他们就无怨无悔,在父母老的时候要善待父母,我们家长就要做好这个表率,让孩子也感受到孝心、爱心;再有一个老师说要让孩子在人群中,多和小朋友交往,这样人际关系会好一些,培养孩子的仁爱的人际关系。这一点我很赞同,现在的孩子一般都愿意自己在家看电视、玩电脑、玩手机等,不愿意出去和别人接触,这样就不会有和谐的人际关系,要多让孩子出去和小朋友玩,在人群里多和人接触,引导他与人建立和谐的人际关系,让孩子在将来的人际关系方面有基础,不会害怕与人相处。
(二如何培养孩子自立、自强、自信以及抵抗挫折的能力。
孩子要自强、自立,自信,我们家长就应该让孩子多出去走走,自己去发现一些事情,在他们自己的'承受的范围内让孩子去发现,让孩子在人群当中去感受。于丹老师讲述了自已和家人去爬山的经历,说是第一次在正面上山,走的台阶上面后觉得很兴奋,第二天,家人都在休整的时候,她自己又从后面没有路的地方,都是荆棘没有路,但是她还是克服困难,爬了上去,手上或身上都被拉出了血口子,但是在到山顶的那一刻,比第一次爬上山更欣喜若狂的感觉。成长是要自己去发现的结论,不能只是接受前辈给的理论,要对自己有信心,要让孩子习惯于发现和观察。要给孩子机会去观察和发现,要让孩子更信任自己的发现。
在这个世界上知识固然重要,比知识重要的是人的,比经验重要的是人的悟性,一个有悟性的人,对知识的转化会接受的更快、更好。只要拥有自信,拥有向上的心,孩子就可以成就不同的人生。要想成就别样的人生,就要点亮自信的明灯,对自身的力量怀抱坚定的信念。一切发现的能力,好老师和好家长完成的是唤醒,不是灌输,直到现在我们做的太不够了,以后要按老师说的去做,希望孩子自信、自立、自强,能够有抗挫折的能力。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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