今天我正发愁写什么作文好时,突然看见了去年的一位“好朋友”。它是一只小鸟,去年的现在它曾经飞到我家书房的窗户上。今天我又见到了它,别提有多高兴了。
它那灰色的羽毛比去年丰满了,身体也比去年强壮了。但是它的眼神没变,还是那么孤独。所以我想陪陪它。
它好像明白了我的意思,开始唱歌了:“啾啾啾,啾啾啾。”虽然我听不懂它在唱什么,但我看出它是多么用心地在唱,它是多么地自我陶醉啊!
唱着唱着它又开始跳舞了,它的舞姿还是和去年一样美,一会儿扭动着小屁股,一会儿摇晃着身体,拍拍自己的翅膀。不时让我开怀大笑。
我觉得它还有一点没变,就是很爱“臭美”,一会儿用小嘴“梳理”羽毛,一会儿转过头去看看身上有没有杂毛,如果有就拔掉。我说了它。它还“啾啾”地叫,表示不服气。看见我今天穿着鲜艳的衣服,它就展开翅膀转几圈给我看。
我还发现它变贪吃了,看见我在吃葡萄,它就大声地叫,把我的耳朵都快叫聋了。我只能把葡萄分给它一半,大家不知道它吃得多开心。它熟练地用爪子按住葡萄,用小嘴啄着里面的果肉,大口大口地吃了起来。
这只小鸟是多么有趣可爱,希望它每年都能来看我。
我有一个和我从小一起长大的好朋友,名叫林孟铠。他的个子不高不矮,身子瘦瘦的,皮肤有点黑。圆圆的脑袋上理着一个头。淡淡的眉毛下,有一双亮晶晶的眼睛。我很喜欢和他玩,因为他和善、宽容,从不欺负女孩子,而且他对待学习非常认真。这也是我最欣赏他的地方。
二年级开学的时候,我写的字在全班算差的。老师对妈妈说:“你的孩子最好练一练书法。”妈妈就让我和林孟铠一起学书法。贪玩的我其实很不情愿,但是却发现林孟铠很热爱书法。于是就决定跟他一起学了。
上书法课的时候,老师先教我们基本笔画:起笔,收笔,横轻竖重。林孟铠聚精会神地看着老师做示范,可我却东张西望,总是让老师提醒。老师教完基本笔画,让我们每个笔画自己写三行。林孟铠纹丝不动地坐在那里练习,可我才写了一行,屁股就开始扭来扭去了。看着林孟铠那么专注地练习,我却一点都安静不下来,我都觉得不好意思了。上完课,老师布置家庭作业,每次都会给林孟铠留更多的作业量,可是他从不抱怨。换了我,早就嚷嚷起来了。于是,我就下定决心:既然林孟铠这么认真刻苦,我也不能太马虎啊!
后来,我便向林孟铠学习。三年级伊始,林孟铠的认真得到了回报,这次他获得了全校书法比赛的一等奖。我的字也有了长足的进步,这次比赛我还得了二等奖呢!我真应该谢谢他,谢谢我的好朋友。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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曾经读过季羡林教授的一本《我的人生感悟》,让我对生活有了深刻的感触。生活在这个缤纷的世界里,我就是一个追梦人。梦与生活并存于我的人生当中。
生活永远是美好的,青春犹如绽放的花朵般美丽,忧愁算得了什么。在遇到生活的烦恼时,往往是理想战胜现实,微笑是最终的胜利。生活之余,喜欢幻想,幻想人生的美好未来和打算。更喜欢做梦,做梦也让生活有几分的向往和追求。
喜欢读散文。读那些名家写的人生感悟,读作者的'思想和生平。读过余秋雨的《霜冷长河》后,再读《文化苦旅》。要感受这位天才作家的生平,就再去读《借我一生》。用他那触及到哪里哪里就会发出光芒的神笔写下的作品,让人真的感触深刻,也略懂了生活会造就一个人。
喜欢养花。记得老舍先生很爱养花,写过一篇养花的文章,乐在其中。的确,养花的乐趣远远胜过欣赏花。虽然年轻,但很耐得住烦恼,这是养花教给我的。经过自己的艰辛努力,原本毫无生气的小院全被我绿化了。夏天的静夜,坐在小院欣赏我的杰作,真有种收获的喜悦。
喜欢追梦。读过郭敬明的《梦里花落知多少》后,也有增有减。我的人生有梦让我生活得快乐和自在,我就像大海中的鲤鱼一样时时想越过龙门。但是,回到现实,却又觉距离太远,因为我的梦有点长久,要花费我更多的努力去实现。不喜欢半途而废,因为我不想成为生活的弱者。
冰心说:爱在左,情趣在右,一路走来一路阳光相伴。这就是生活,阳光下的微笑永远是灿烂和美丽的,对待生活,我有足够的勇气和把握。读散文培养了我的生活情趣,养花磨练了我的耐心和意志,追梦让我对生活有了更贴近的感悟。还有什么不满呢?唯有的就是再去感悟生活。
人生因有梦而精彩,生活因有梦而充实。我的人生就是这样,在人生边上写些我喜欢的和感悟到的,供我茶余饭后去欣赏,也提供给文学爱好者,让他们去评价一下好与坏。
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