Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
从诞生的那一刻起,我们就开始了自己独特的人生历程,体验着生活的五彩斑斓。
爱,就像一个跳动的音符,与我们一路同行。
当我们享受着美好的生活时,你可知道,这个世界,还有许许多多的人享受不了生活的美好,大自然的热情。
他们就是——残疾人。
残疾人在人们的眼里是一些低贱的人,人们见到残疾人,不但不帮助他们,反而对他们指指点点,拿他们取乐。你可知道你一些微不足道的动作,对他们的`心灵上,尊严上有多大的伤害吗?残疾人也是人啊!要不是种种原因,他们现在能这样?海伦。凯勒说过:“世界上最美的事物,不一定能用眼睛看到或用手摸到,他们是必须用心灵去的。
的确是这样,”残疾人虽然身体上出现了一点缺陷,但他们的生活也是丰富多彩的,他们的生活也有快乐。
贝多芬出生贫寒,从小随父亲学音乐,8岁开始演奏,26岁耳朵失聪了,可他有伟大的理想,克服种种困难。经过他的努力,他一生创作了许多优秀作品,深受世界各国人民的喜爱,他的成就对同时代及以后欧洲音乐艺术发展都有巨大的影响。
张海迪5岁就瘫痪了,可她并没有放弃过活着,她不断进取,学习了日语、德语、英语和世界语。
她还尽力帮助周围的青年,鼓励他们热爱生活,珍惜青春,努力学习为人民服务,为祖国的兴旺发达献出自己的光和热。不少青年在她的鼓励下考取了大学。张海迪在轮椅上唱出了生命之歌:一个人的生命的价值在于为祖国的富强,为人民的幸福而勇敢开拓,无私奉献。这种种都说明残疾人并不比我们弱。
只要有生命的存在,人生就有希望。让我们去体贴残疾人,关心残疾人,学习残疾人吧!
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
星期六早上,我去公园里玩,看见一大群人都围着什么东西,我很好奇,于是我也走过去看了看。
我挤了上去,旁边的人说:“唉,你这个小孩,挤什么挤?”我不管他们在说些什么,只想着为什么这么引人注意。当我挤到前面一看,原来是一个老人在地上写字。他的两只手都断了,两只脚正在比划什么。我仔细地观察,才发现老人赤着脚,用右脚的两个脚趾夹着一支毛笔,左脚扶着纸,正写着一个个端正的毛笔字。我心想:这样写字一定练了很久,可见他是多么热爱书法啊!
这时,旁边的人都掏出钱来,买老人用脚写的毛笔字。老人连连说:“谢谢!谢谢!”有些人向老人提问,说:“请问您是怎么练成用脚写字的呢?”老人并不回答他们的问题,却一直专心致志地练着毛笔字。虽然老人不回答他们的问题,但是却很热心地和身边的人“握脚”……眼前的这一幕,我深深地震撼了我的心,我不假思索的掏出妈妈给我买早饭的钱给了老人,顺便和老人握了一次“脚”然后拿了一张老人写的毛笔字回家。回家后,我把老人写的毛笔字给妈妈看。妈妈不禁感叹:“真厉害!居然可以用脚写出这样漂亮的'毛笔字。”
其实,残疾人在我们身边并不少见。据统计,全国各类残疾人总数是8296万人,残疾人占全国总人口的比例为6.34%。让我们一起关心帮助爱护身边的这个特殊群体吧!
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
首先,我会端正自己的态度,不会那么的'自闭,人们帮助我时,我会接受人们的帮助。人们帮助我,那叫关爱,而不叫同情。我应该接受这样的关爱。
假如我是残疾人,我会打开并走出我的心灵。我会去看那似宝石一般灿烂的海面,看那似火一般热情的太阳。我不会在想我先天或后天的缺陷。我只会打开我的心灵,享受着大自然的美景。
假如我是残疾人,我会与大家一起玩耍,与热爱运动的男生一起疯狂的打乒乓,和心灵手巧的女生一起编织、绘画。我会和大家搞好关系,融入这个集体。
假如我是残疾人,我会好好学习。向大家证明:“天生我材必有用。”的道理。告诉他们“我的身体虽然有缺陷,但是,我好好学习,比你们还好哦!”
残疾人,虽然他们有许多生理上的缺陷,可是,他们同样有权利与我们生活在同一个世界中、同一片蓝天下!
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