Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
第一个登场的是一位盲童,他叫刘浩,20xx年十岁了,是一名小小音乐家。他从4岁刚开始学电子琴,七岁学习钢琴,到现在早已三年了。刘浩的母亲把五线谱翻译成盲谱,一针一针地把音乐符号扎进包装纸里。刘浩十分信心,他每一次获奖便会对妈妈说:你瞧我获奖了。他妈妈说不必自豪。刘浩就说:我这不是自豪只是信心。对啊!幸福快乐就在身边,发展前途是光辉的,如同成龙大哥说的你需要勤奋,努力越多,获得的幸福快乐就越大。
第二个登场的是笃坪乡的`一个老师和他的学员们,教师叫王忠华,和我这群小朋友们在一起早已三年了。王老师除开给这群小孩授课外,平常没事儿就教她们麦克尔杰克逊的民族舞蹈。如今王老师就需要和这群小朋友们道别了,最终交给她们的礼品是一张光碟,上边记述了王老师和她们在这里三年里的相片也有王老师想对有人说的知心话,这群小孩是多么的的不舍得王老师啊!我觉得:王老师一定是世界最幸福快乐的教师!
第三个登场的是一位好看可爱的女生带著她的妈妈,这一女生叫孟佩杰,她的妈妈叫刘晓英。孟佩杰的妈妈偏瘫在床,她每日早上六点醒来给妈妈煮饭,搞好餐后,先让妈妈吃过饭,她再吃,随后跑着去学校授课。下午下课后,孟佩杰一路小跑步回到家,给妈妈搞好饭,等妈妈吃完饭,她便举起个冷馍边跑边吃,匆匆忙忙地回到院校。中午下学,孟佩杰返回家中的第一件事便是推着一天没出门儿的妈妈到外边去透透风。回家了后,又赶快去煮饭,吃过饭,帮妈妈推拿一会儿,再服侍妈妈入睡,等她忙完就9点多了,这时候她才可以专心致志做作业。
见到这儿,我忍不住落下来泪来。孟佩杰太顽强了,想不到大家同年龄人之中也有这么多悲剧的小孩,比较之下,身心健康又有爸爸妈妈疼惜的大家幸福快乐多了!将来我们要向她们学习培训,甘于奉献,信心开朗,勤奋找寻更完美的幸福!
中国,是一个拥有着五千年历史的国家,从黄帝炎帝时,中国就有了五根弦的琴。“寄语酿花风月好,绿窗来与上琴弦”。从先民时开始,就决定了我们这个民族的生活方式,诗情画意,山水之间。陶渊明家中放了一把并没有上弦的琴,别人都很疑惑,他却说:“既知琴中趣,何劳弦上音。”一句话摊破红尘过往。
在温晴的春日里,捧一本《宋词》,细细品味,还应该来一壶清茶吧!慢慢读完,用鼻子轻轻嗅一下花草的芳香,品一口茶,眺望一眼远方,油墨的香味透人心脾,意犹未尽。读到风不定,人初静,明月落红应满径时。温晴的春日也变得有些凄凉,散落在小路上的.颉红,叫相思。行走于江畔之上,清风徐来,圆月当空。我不知盖忆长安还是忆汴京。总是在心中暗暗的诵读“但愿人长久,千里共婵娟”来祈求一世长宁。
“一点浩然气,千里快哉风。”一把剑,保家卫国,***尽天下不平事。渴饮匈奴血,饥餐胡虏肉。宁为薄幸狂夫,不做厚颜君子。会挽雕弓,马作的卢;待到太平年年间,封剑,脱下满是血迹的衣服,披上普通的布衣,“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山。”
“有一美人兮,见之不忘,一日不见兮,思之如狂。”有一位佳人,似故人。又似知己。待到好友来叙,她会说到:“我有美酒十千,只待子时不背之需。”若水三千只取一瓢,娇梅万朵,独摘一支。我只道:此生足矣。
这是我认为的生活方式。一定与君所想不同,有人说,古人离我们很远,但在国家大力发展弘扬中华传统文化的今天,沾过汉时风,扶过唐时月,赏过宋时雨。古人就在我们身边。
如果您通悟了,请让我把开篇的词咏给您听:“飞絮飞花何处是,层冰积雪摧残,疏疏一树五更寒。爱他明月好,憔悴也相关。”
The Best Way of Traveling最好的旅游方式
People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.人们会乘坐飞机、火车、轮船、公交车去旅游。对于我来说,最好的旅游方式是暑假期间徒步旅游。
On a summer vacation I travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk on a grass covered path or among the hills I feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get more freedom. I can plan my own schedule. I can choose my own route. I can stop where I like. And I can see things and people that I might miss if I travel on a train or on a bus.暑假的时候,我通过旅游去释放自己和游览乡间。当我用双脚走在铺满小草的小径或山间时,我感觉(自己)远离城市的喧嚣,并且更亲近大自然。当我徒步旅行时我可以得到更多的自由。我可以自己选择行程。我可以自己选择路线。只要喜欢,我就可以停下来。而且我可以看到很多人和事,那些我可能乘坐火车或公车旅行而错失的。
When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. 当更快、更方便的旅游方式变成通用的,我仍然支持用自己的双脚(旅行),我从中得到了许多乐趣。
让读书成为我们的生活方式从夏商周到唐宋元明清再到如今的21世纪不知有多少中外文人墨客。
从“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”中可以看出杜甫眼里书的重要。从“书是人类进步的阶梯”可以看出莎士比亚眼里书在人类发展史上重要地位。从“饭可以一日不吃,觉可以一日不睡,书不可以一日不读”中可以看出伟大领袖***对书的依赖。可见,不会读书,没有知识的人难以理解“书”的深层含义。
如今,书已成为人类的生活中不可或缺的.一部分。在《xx服装时尚元素》中找到了今年流行的穿着打扮。在《中国传统美食》中找到了令人垂涎三尺的中国传统美食的图片,以及它的做法。在《中国建筑》中找到了“住”的影子。在《中外旅游景点》中找到了各种风景独特的旅游胜地。这些书的影子来自日常生活方式中的衣食住行。人们从各种各样的书籍中寻找适合自己的生活方式。我最喜欢在散文、诗歌和小说中找寻我的精神食粮。张抗抗的《瞬息与永恒的舞蹈》写出了她对昙花生命价值观的肯定。从那跳跃的文字里我感受到了昙花怒放时瞬间的爆发力给予人们的心灵的冲击。以及在这瞬间开放的背后昙花的奋斗与努力。在看这篇文章时,是在一个失败的考试之后,那时心情跌入到了一个低谷。甚至很长一段时间不想面对书本。
偶尔看到的这篇文章,看过后我思考了很久。比起昙花坚持不懈的奋斗,散下无数的汗水,默默无闻的生长。为的只是那一场短暂的表演,而在表演之后她只能收起她美丽的舞裙,静静的等待死亡的到来。而我呢,面对的只是一个微不足道的挫折,我怎能如此消极。
我毅然收起了失败的历程,继续向书本进攻。从此我明白了人的生命价值就是不断创造,不断奋斗,不断的面对挫折,从哪跌倒就从哪爬起来。
万千书籍组成了我们的生活方式,也丰富了我们的生活。
我与书籍的缘分持续了多年,自呀呀学语的时候母亲就给我买来各种幼儿读物,从色彩缤纷的“看图识字”到引人入胜的科幻漫画,对我来说无疑都是充满了童年的乐趣的。
一个暑假时,我经常一个人在家,天天看电视吃饭睡觉像猪一样,索然无味地过日子,便时时进书房啃书本。这一啃就养成习惯了:每天早上起床便阅读书籍,照镜子都觉得面色红润,与家人说话时常石破天惊,我便把读书作为我生活中必不可缺少的事。
开学后,我的心思放在了服饰与玩的时间上了,不经意时照了照镜子,三分像人,七分像鬼!说话像得了口吃样,即便流利,也是些庸俗的言语。我吓了一大跳,立刻觉到读书很重要,所以无论如何每天我都要读几本书。
巴罗曾经说过:一个爱读书的人,他毕定不致于缺少一个忠实的朋友,一个良好的`老师,一个可爱的伴侣,一个温情的安慰者。只要有书陪伴,就有无穷的欢乐。在读书的道路上要去不断地寻找快乐,必然会遇到很多的苦,但是若达到了一个境界,就会真正体会到此苦亦为甜,此甜藏苦中。
蓦然回首,书已伴我度过天真的幼年,纯真的童年,又迎来我人生中最美丽的少年,书带我一步步走向成熟,我想它终将伴我度过最完美的一生。其实,享受读书的乐趣何尝不是在享受生活的乐趣呢!
有许多个无眠的夜晚,都是书籍陪我度过的。孤灯下,它就像一位多年的旧知,与我在寂寥中畅谈。始终固执地认为,书与人也是有缘分的,就像人与人之间的缘分一样,也分亲疏厚薄。书海无涯,一个人在其一生中所能结识的书籍总是有限的,所以每次买到一本好书的时候,我总是以虔诚的态度,细细翻看,结识这位新朋友。
我想,假如时间可以摧毁我们的容貌,书籍赐予我们的却恰恰相反,它能升华我们的灵魂,带给每个个体一次又一次的震撼与冲击。所以在某种程度上说,时间的飞逝给予我们的有可能是残忍,但是书籍给予我们的却是点点温馨与安慰,也只有精神财富是冷酷的时间所无法剥夺的。
读书能使人平静,使人明智,使人成长。一本好书是值得我们反复体味的,正如做人做事,需持有谨慎与谦恭的态度,这是我多年与书籍打交道所得到的一点感悟。遇到烦恼,回忆起曾读过的那些伟人事迹,想到伟人所遭受的异于常人的悲苦磨难,心灵的深处就会感到无比惭愧,觉得生活中遇到的这点烦恼也算不了什么了。多年的阅读使我懂得,人在内心深处要不断地去培养一种强大的精神力量,需带着积极乐观的态度去面对生活的洗礼。
书,是黑暗中的一盏明灯;书,是寒冷中的一缕阳光;书,是我们力量的源泉。
读书——我的最爱。
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