Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
餐桌上的爱
奶奶在老家,一听说“我”这个许久不见到的“大孙子”今天上午要到这儿了,立马失去了往日的愁思,高兴得溜到厨房,磨亮了刀子,又是***鸡,又是买饮料,忙活了大半个时辰,刚忙活完,擦了把汗,便坐下来休息,板凳还没坐热呢,又听到了我那可爱的声音:“奶奶!我回来啦!”奶奶又高兴地跑了出去,把我接进屋来,一见时间不早了,便说:“开饭喽!”话音刚落,就将我报道了椅子上,我便喝起了饮料,爷爷拿出了他的“五粮液”喝上了几杯。趁着我上厕所,爷爷奶奶将鸡汤中几块骨头捞了出来,放在自己的地方,又将我这儿的一部分骨头弄到自己这儿,又夹了一块鸡肋,等我回来后,装做吃得津津有味,还时不时的念叨:“快吃呦!不然要被吃光喽!”我一听,急得连忙一口气吃了两块。
这不是白酒
一天,我拿着装了雪碧的杯子对爷爷说:“爷爷,来点雪碧吧!”爷爷说:“我喝白酒。”我便想:这东西有雪碧好喝吗?
有一次,我和爷爷去赶集,听见两个六旬老头儿在谈话,具体说什么已记不大清,只记得站右边的拿着一瓶白酒对另一个说:“侃!牛盘山二锅头!我儿子买给我的',很贵嗒!而且还很辣!”另一个说道:“我不信!除非你给我尝尝!”“切!就知道你会说这句话,我才不给呢.”于是,我又想:白酒里没有辣椒呀,为什么他们说辣呢?于是,一股强烈的愿望在我的心中生根、发芽——尝白酒!
终于有一次好机会,我蹑手蹑脚地走向那瓶白酒,然后小心翼翼地打开盖子,用舌尖小心地碰了一下酒,“咦?怎么没味?”我感到奇怪,好奇心牵引着我,终于,我壮着胆子喝了一口……没感觉,又喝了一口,然后使出浑身解数去努力地感受着,总算感受到了这一丝的辣味,“着白酒和白开水差不多嘛!”现在我才知道,爷爷在酒里加水喝,时装做给我看的。我感到了一丝愧疚。
意外的惊喜
在老家呆了好久,终于要离开了,在离开的前一天,我和爷爷去最后一次上街赶集了。在买东西时,一辆酷酷的玩具车映入我的眼帘,我很想要,爷爷说:“大孙子,买了这个就没钱买菜了,以后再买吧。”我便依依不舍得离开了。爷爷买完菜后,手上紧紧捏着36元钱——玩具车的价格。
下午,爷爷有一阵子不在家,奶奶说是给我去买零食了,要留着回昆山的路上吃。
我和爷爷分别了,奶奶与我回昆山了,临走时,爷爷用“贪婪”地目光紧盯着我,想要将我牢记在心……在车上,我找零食时,看到了那天我在超市看中的那辆36元的玩具车,我捧着玩具车,流下了一行行晶莹的泪珠……
那一段在老家度过的时光,我永生难忘!
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
尊敬的老师,同学们:
拿破仑有句:“不想当将军的士兵不是好士兵”对此,我深有同感。所以今天我要竞选班长。
我认为,班长不只是个称号,不只是个光环,它背后还有实质性的'内容。班长应该是架在老师与同学之间的一座桥梁,是老师的得力助手,是同学的领头人。所以,如果我是班长,我不会让这个“长”成为一个虚名。
首先,我得先从饿哦做起,严格要求自己,起表率作用;其次,我会在任何时候,任何情况下,都能想同学们之所想,急同学们之所急,敢于坚持原则,敢于为同学们谋求正当的权益。
我有能力处理好班级的各种事务,如果竞选班长成功,我将尽力为班级工作,为全体同学服务,并做到:
一、与其他干部一起抓好班级日常工作,发扬我们班团结合作的精神。
二、做同学们的知心朋友,为有困难的同学排忧解难。
三、做老师与同学之间的通信员,架起师生沟通的桥梁。
四、虚心接受批评,及时改正自己的缺点。
我会经受住考验的,相信在大家的共同努力下,我们的班级一定会更加出色,成为学校的先进班级。
一个人的深夜,一个人的歌,静静坐在这里,聆听电台里温柔动听的话语,心中无限畅然。这刻我才明白原来这个寂寞的夜晚,我并不孤单。有多少的时刻你不是孤身一人,有多少个夜晚你不是一个人默默熬过,但没有人陪伴的时间并没有想象中那样可怕,真正让人恐惧的是心灵的荒芜。
我常常一个人走在荒无人烟的沙漠之中,没有方向不知归途,好想获得一份归属感,好想知道家在何方,但始终没有声音回答哪里可以容纳你的所有。虽然快乐大于悲伤,但在这样的时刻里无人相陪总凸显了几分寂寥,很不幸我的人生常常如此。
每天活在破败腐朽的巨轮上,不知哪刻就会有凶猛的潮水袭来,一个大浪便会将船淹没。一天里总有一刻被恐慌占据,这时便会渴望有个人在你身旁,给你拥抱消去所有忧愁与烦恼,但这样的机会少之又少,用掉一次便少一分。没有谁可以永远站在你身边,也没有谁的生命能没有一刻孤单,但这不能成为在一个人的时候,我们向往温暖追求幸福的枷锁。纵使风浪再大,只要心怀爱与希望,这艘人生的巨轮便会一直行驶,直至彼岸。
细想这些年,真的是一个人的时候居多。心有不甘过,也努力争取过,却始终获得不了一份永恒的感情。热闹过,冷清过,身边的人来来去去,走走停停,这些人难以挽留,命运早已注定了各自的轨迹,在某刻分别只是时间早晚的问题,可我总不这样想。
我这一路都是孤单陪着我长大的,没人教我怎么圆滑处世,所以常常把自己弄得遍体鳞伤,一有事情准会先怪自己,根本不去细想问题的本质,其实有时候我并没有错,只是内心脆弱,难以做到像别人那样洒脱。输不起,伤自尊,这些只是借口,在友情的世界里根本就没有对错。彼此喜欢便在一起,看不顺眼便好聚好散,真心付出便不用后悔伤心,即使对方远走,但起码他们都陪你走过时光里的某段路。永恒固然可贵,但拥有之人世间少有,倒不如打开自己放眼世界,期待新的风景且好好珍惜现在陪在你身边的人。也可能你是孤身一人,但请相信那个人总会出现,只是来的路上堵车了而已。
总的来说,有人陪是挺好的,但一个人的滋味也算可以的。在寂寥的深夜,安静欣赏一首动人的歌曲,这个夜晚便不再孤单。
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