初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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“叮叮叮,”上课了。我们的英语王老师走了进来。
她虽然有一点矮,但走进来的时候自带一阵风。王老师的眼睛特别的大,紫色短发,是那么与众不同。
王老师刚走进教室就快速地打开了手机秒表,就像飞一样的速度,开始计时已用了多少时间,下课就还有多少时间,不过如果我们在课上能抢回时间,下课就能按时了。急如风火的王老师对待做课前两分钟的同学却是截然相反的耐心,有同学说着说着卡了壳,王老师总是轻轻地提醒同学,那份温柔会让你忘记这是刚刚拿着秒表的王老师。
正式上课了,王老师对我们的要求是在她的课上不会可以,但是要学,尽量做到又能热烈又能安静,这倒是一个令人难以办到的要求,就像让猫抓老鼠,还不许出声,真是奇怪。王老师说英语又快又流利,她一但发现上课有人不听讲,就会走到那个人面前,表情特别严厉地对那个人说:“我见到你们的第一面就说过,允许你不会,但不允许你不学。”严肃的王老师让我们不禁生出敬畏感。
不过,上课时王老师总会跟我们开一些小玩笑。比如:有一回王老师让我们写下自己心中的英语老师,在我们写之前她对我们说:“我以前有一个学生给我写的是:老师,您能再长高一点儿吗?像类似这样的要求就不要提了。”王老师还说:“以前,我有一个学生,刚开始我问他:‘你喜欢我吗?’他回答:‘不喜欢。’后来一个学期过去了,王老师又问他:‘你现在有一点儿喜欢我了吗?’他说:‘嗯,有一点儿。’”我觉得这个学生也太大胆了点儿吧!可这不也说明我们的王老师很亲切吗?
下课后,王老师也总是让英语课代表提醒她:“下课了,王老师该留作业了。”王老师每次都只用一分钟来留作业,从不拖拉,也从不占据我们的课间时间。说到这儿,我又觉得王老师很为我们学生着想。
英语王老师在开学第一次和我们相见,就让我们写下对英语老师的要求。我想对王老师说:“王老师,您已经满足了我对英语老师的所有期待!”
夏天,教室里热得慌,但同学们还是你一言无我一语地说个不停,闹得好像全世界都能听见。
这时,美术老师像幽灵似的突然出现在门口。但同学们好像没看见,依然吵吵闹闹。于是美术老师神不知鬼不觉地来到了吵得最大声的同学背后,把他往上一提,喝到:“闹够没有?我又不是来菜市场里买菜的!”教室里顿时鸦雀无声。
或许大部分美术老师比较文静,但他可不是,他经常批评同学后就忘了,反而还跟同学聊起天来。
有一次,老师又抓了一名同学,把他抓到了讲台上,大家以为要训人了都紧张起来,可等到的却是:“你坐到这儿,其他同学安静画画!”说着,老师拍了拍身旁的椅子,让那位同学坐下,问:“你怎么这么调皮呀?每节课都这样吗?”
那位同学摇摇头。
“没有?”
他又点点头。
“有?每节课都这样?”
那位同学笑了一下,说:“我的意思是,我没有每节课都这样。”
“哦。”老师点点头,“那你每天吃什么?”
那位同学肯定是吓了一跳,老师怎么转变得这么快!刚才不还在批评我吗?但老师眨眨“大眼睛”看着他。于是那位同学说:“菜呀、饭呀、肉呀、汤呀……”
“那你为什么这么瘦呀?要多吃一些肉肉……”
同学挠了挠头:“哦!”
“你把你最好的朋友也叫上来,我们一起聊一聊。”
天哪!真的转变得太快了,全班都捂着嘴巴笑。就这样,一堂严肃的美术课成了我们的乐园。
下课时,老师摸摸那个被抓上去的同学,让他乖一点不要捣乱。这次的“探讨”让他们成为了朋友。真是“漫画”老师呀!
宋老师是我们的语文老师,她看上去20多岁,一头细软的披肩长发,小巧秀美的鼻子上,架着一副眼镜。双目炯炯有神。一张嘴巴总能说出许多让我们捧腹大笑的笑话。谁要在下面说悄悄话,她都听的一清二楚。(人物肖像式开头,刻画人物生动形象,引出下文,很好!)
宋老师的讲课风格和她的性格一样,风趣幽默……(简单叙述,过渡。)
宋老师有一次总结作业,发现有同学把″腾云驾雾``的"驾``写成了木字底的架,便说:"有些同学真不简单呀!骑木头上天了。"此言一出,同学们都哈哈大笑。老师又说:″那位同学一定要把那块木头拿来呀!让我们见试一下。"这下同学们有的掩(捂)着嘴小笑,有的笑出了眼泪,有的笑的直不起来腰。(排比句运用的好,值得借鉴!)从那以后,那位同学再也没犯过这样的错误。
还有一次,老师发现某位同学总是写错别字,而且还是同一个字。 屡教不改。于是老师给我们讲了一个故事:一个人不小心坠进了洞里。第二次懒得绕着走。又掉进了坑里。第三次,第四次也是……一边说,一边为我们摆出滑稽的姿势。同学们笑得合不拢嘴。当然那个同学从此也改掉了这个坏毛病。(文章详略得当,很好,选材富有生活气息,值得借鉴。)
"随风潜入夜,润物细无声。"宋老师对我们的教诲之恩,不正如那一滴滴春雨,滋养我们的心田吗?
这就是我的漫画老师,怎么样?你们喜欢吗?(反问结尾,耐人寻味。)
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