“晚安”我温柔地对妈妈说。这是在星期天的晚上八点,我开始上床睡觉了。睡觉是我不喜欢的事情之一,因为瞌睡虫经常迟迟不来。于是我便耐心地等待这位迟到大王,就好似等待初日似的。不过,这一次,太阳竟从西边出来了,那位迟到大王竟然不过几分钟就来了。我想:太好了!不用再忍了,下面就是美美睡一觉啰!
我闭上了双眼,放松了身体,开始睡觉了!睡意就像涨潮一样,准备开始我这停在岸头的小船的旅途。
“嗡嗡嗡,”我耳朵里传进了蚊子的声音。随后,我感觉耳朵痒痒的,同时我那一丝丝睡意全部一散而光了,我一下恼怒起来不暇思索一个巴掌打了过去。不过,在这伸手不见五指的.房间里,怎能打下那小巧玲珑,身姿灵活的蚊子呢?我想像着,那只蚊子闪了一下身子,避开了我的攻击,却被自己的巴掌打了个正着。
我一不做二不休干脆爬了起来,打开门希望蚊子自己乖乖地飞出去。不过,不知是因为它太笨了出不去,还是因为我注定成了它的晚餐,它还是盘旋在我房间的上空。“嗡嗡嗡,嗡嗡嗡”地叫个不停,好像因为我的攻击,来诅咒我了,这声音,这情形简直让我生不如死。想睡睡不着,不睡却要被蚊子咬,就这样一个小时过去了,蚊子终于走了,我迷迷糊糊地睡着了。
睡到了大概三点钟,我突然又被惊醒了,这是因为耳朵很痒。我知道刚才又有“客人”来了!它一定是见我正在睡觉,不便打扰,留下了“礼品”,飞走了。我摸了摸那个凶多吉少的耳朵,无奈地翻了身继续睡觉。
蚊子真讨厌!
妈妈一走,就剩下我一个人。没过多久“丁东”,门铃响了起来。我连忙放下笔,去开门,打开门一看,啊,原来是班主任张老师来了。“张老师,快,快进屋”我一边招呼一边回忆着妈妈招待客人的`情景,学着行动。我带着老师走进了客厅。“快坐下歇歇!”我把老师让到沙发上坐下。你看老师满头大汗,我立即打开空调,还打来一盆冷水,端到老师跟前说张“老师,你把脸吧。”接着,我从冰箱里拿出一瓶可乐给老师,“老师喝这个凉快凉快!”张老师接过来。很高兴,连声说“好好!我到学生真会接待客人。”过了一会儿,我问老师:“请问老师您今天来到我家,有什么事吗?”张老师回答:“今天我是来请你星期六上午到学校去参加书法大赛,希望你能来。”我听了张老师的话,心里甜滋滋的,说:“好的,我会准时参加”老师要走了。我说:“老师再见!有空来玩。”
过了一会儿,妈妈回来了,我把招待老师的经过详细地说给了妈妈听。妈妈听了,也夸我会招带客人。
遇见老鼠
一个风雨交加的夜晚,我正坐在餐桌旁看课外书,忽然听见“嗖”的一声响,我放下书,惊讶地环顾四周,“啊”!我尖叫到,爸爸放下报纸,皱了皱眉头,问:“怎么了”?“我看见有一只老鼠闪过。”我小声地说,似乎怕老鼠突然冲出来。“怎么可能”!爸爸笑笑说。正说着,又是“嗖”一声。老鼠飞也似的冲到了电视机后面,爸爸被突如其来的老鼠惊的目瞪口呆,终于相信我说的话了。
与老鼠作战
爸爸很生气,也是,家中怎么会有老鼠呢?爸爸不再沉默,他要主动出击。爸爸从房间里拿出了手电筒和衣叉,轻手轻脚地走向电视柜,拿起手电筒照着里头。哈,一只肥头大耳的.老鼠出现在我们的视线里,仔细一瞧,那个家伙和仓鼠简直有天壤之别,除了小豆子似的眼睛,没有一丝相同之外,它那光溜溜,血淋淋的尾巴让人看着就觉得恶心。爸爸拿着衣叉,看准老鼠,一下子刺过去,可这老鼠却在这时发现了危险,发出一声“吱吱”地叫声,然后死命的往厨房里跑,身体娇小的它一下子钻进缝隙里。
卫生间里的老鼠
有一次,妈妈去卫生间,刚进去,突然叫了一声:“老鼠”。她吓得惊慌失措,她在卫生间里又叫又跳大喊“救命,救命”。她即怕老鼠逃到客厅,又怕小老鼠来咬她,脸上木木的,什么表情也没有,那只老鼠把她吓得魂都没有了。爸爸即时赶了进去,把下水道打开,把老鼠“送”了回去,妈妈见老鼠跑了,终于松了一口气,慢慢地把脚放了下来。
“必***计”
妈妈简直要疯了,晚上去厨房做饭时,又看见了一只老鼠,差点没昏过去。没办法,老鼠把我们惹恼了,我们只好使用“必***计”:粘鼠板。妈妈把粘鼠板放在了它经常出现的柜子里,天天去张望。突然有一天,那只老鼠被粘住了,我心里想:坏老鼠,我一定要弄死你。可当我看见它时,心里充满了同情,我情不自禁地说:“爸爸,你不要弄死它,好吗?”我看着它拼命的挣扎,还一直看着我,似乎在向我求救。我不禁想:老鼠啊,可是我也无能为力呀。
老鼠啊,你那么脏,怪不得人人都说:“老鼠过街,人人喊打”。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
我们家经常来客人,我们每次都会盛情款待。我们先给客人倒一杯茶,然后给客人拿水果吃,再和客人聊一聊天,这是我爸爸和妈妈的客人。
如果是我请来的同学,我就迫不及待的给小朋友倒果汁,然后和同学一起玩游戏,因为这样才能看我们的热情好客。
如果是爷爷奶奶,我们会给他(她)倒一杯果汁,然后拿一个雪糕给他们,爷爷奶奶夸我是个好孩子。
刚才张老师带我们玩了一个看望病人的游戏,我们安排一个谁当病人,剩下的人当看望病人的同学,结果,我当病人,他们当看望的同学.
我们开始游戏了,忽然我病了,我趟在病床上寂寞孤独,我说:"真寂寞呀,真希望有人来看望我!"话音刚落,一位护士把门推开,后面还跟着几个同学,他们带了花和水果来看望我,我感觉一下子病好了许多。
通过这次活动我知道怎么招待客人和怎么看望病人.
正在吃早饭时,只见老爸像一阵风似的冲下楼。不一会儿,他就回来了,身后还跟了几个人,不用说那就是所谓的很多客人了。老爸、老妈在厨房忙得不可开交,招待客人的事就由我负责了。
我为客人一一倒了茶。拿出了花生、瓜子、山核桃和水果招待他们。我将电视机打开,按到了他们想看的频道。看着他们看得津津有味的样子,我咧开嘴笑了。
我又找来几本杂志,对不想看电视的阿姨说:“阿姨,这几本杂志挺好看的,你看合不合你的心意,不合意我再去拿。”阿姨说:“晨晨,这几本正合我的意。”我不好意思地说:“我是瞎猫碰上死耗子,蒙的。”
接着,我把小弟弟、小妹妹领到我的房间,拿出我的玩具、故事书、彩笔和纸,对他们说:“你们随便玩,玩玩具、看书、画画都可以。只是不要大吵大闹,好吗?”他们异口同声地回答:“好!”
吃过饭,客人都走了,我对妈妈说:“今天真累啊,但总算能为妈妈做点事了。妈妈也直夸我,真的懂事了,长大了。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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