英语作文五年级我的祖国【一】
今天，我们在学校里观看“开学第一课”这个电视节目，这个节目对我有很大的启发。
在“开学第一课”中，对我最有启发的人是廖智。她是一名舞蹈教师，也是汶川大地震中倒塌的一栋楼里唯一的幸存者。当时她在废墟中顽强地挺过了26小时。在这26小时中她一直强忍着痛苦，直到救援队到来。然而，她失去了双腿。装上了假肢的前几天，廖智都跌跌撞撞的，她很绝望，甚至想到了放弃。后来有一天早晨，她醒来后想呼唤家人，请他们扶她去洗手间。可是叫了许多声都无济于事，这时她才意识到家里已经没有人了，不管怎么喊叫都是徒劳的。她只好等待，最后不得已爬下床去寻找假肢，然后跌跌撞撞地往洗手间方向走去。可刚到 洗手间她就滑倒了，头撞到了马桶边上，她不停地挣扎，挣扎了很久才重新站了起来。看着自己的狼狈样，想到了放弃。可是她一想到了舞蹈，就又重新振作起来了……
几年后，她终于实现了自己一生的梦想。
看完廖智的故事后，我觉我们很多人，远远比不上廖智，往往是受了一点挫折就退缩了，放弃了。就比如我原来去学跳拉丁舞，已经跳了好几年了，但我觉得很累，很辛苦，就偷懒，不认真练习，最终我放弃了 。
而梦想贵在坚持，从今往后我一定要向廖智一样，为了梦想去努力，去奋斗，就算上刀山，下火海也不退缩。这样，才能实现自己远大的梦想。
英语作文五年级我的祖国【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文五年级我的祖国【三】
每个学期的开始，我们都会看《开学第一课》，每次都让我有所收获，有所感动。今年的《开学第一课》更使我感慨万千。这一课全面而又生动地讲了三个内容：“孝”，“爱”和“礼”，虽然讲的都是父母对我们的教育，但我想到更多的是父母对孩子温暖、沉甸甸的爱!
百善孝为先。童话大王郑渊洁讲了一些关于“孝”的家风小故事，这些关于“爱”和“孝”的小故事就是平时生活中的点点滴滴。这里的感恩，是由内而外自然的表露。但是有些人的孝心却因为生活的琐事而成为了形式上的“孝”。其实真正的孝心，是体现在生活中那些微小的细节的。所以，首先在自己不用让父母操心的基础上，再为父母分担些力所能及的事，从一点一滴做起。
香港歌手容祖儿在这儿为我们讲了“礼”。她的母亲在她幼时就常教导她吃饭夹菜要有规矩，必须等长辈们坐下，动筷了才能吃，而且不能过分发出咀嚼的声音。虽然在大家眼中，都是小事，但她母亲教的这些细微的礼节就是生活中的点点滴滴，也是家长教育孩子的点点滴滴。
虽然，《开学第一课》只有短短的90分钟，但却给我带来了许多小小的触动。“孝”，“爱”和“礼”都不是一朝一夕能够完成的，但只要用心去做，便能感受到其中的快乐。
