初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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“儿子,你怎么这么高了,马上就要超过我了!”父亲看着正坐在沙发上吃着零食的儿子,骄傲地说道。“那当然了,我长得可快了,哪天,我就要超过家门口的小树。不信,我们就在门前的树上钉个钉子,明年再看看长高了多少。”儿子不以然的说。
说干就干,父亲手里握了一把坚硬的小锤子,嘴里叼着一个闪着光芒、尖利的钉子,飞快的向树下走去,让儿子笔直地站在树下。儿子挺胸,抬头,一个立正,表情像一只小雄鸡一样神气十足,还高傲的把头轻轻仰了起来。此时正是金秋,树上的叶子缓缓飘下,落在地上,铺成一层厚厚的金地毯,一阵微风吹乱了儿子的短发,更加显得不可一世。父亲用一种欣慰而略带狡黠的目光盯着儿子,脸上有一种窃喜的神情。他先用锤子抵在儿子的'头上,并与树干相垂直,然后蹲下身子,轻轻把嘴里的钉子取出,如抽烟一般用两根手指夹住按在树干上,最后便用锤子小心翼翼地把钉子钉一半在树干里面,儿子则在一边仔细地看父亲干活。
冬天来了,冬雪覆盖了大地,万物披上了银色的时装,漫长的严冬即将来临了,父亲和儿子一起穿着厚厚实实的衣服,欢快地跑出了家,在这儿蓬松的雪地上奔跑,有时堆雪人,有时打雪仗,玩得不亦乐乎。不知不觉中,春天也如约而至,这个世界流光溢彩,氤氤氲氲。花儿竞相开放,鸟儿在枝头高声歌唱,小河解冻了,万物复苏了,连在冬日里黯然无光的小树也重新焕发出光彩,展现出了新的活力,一切都是那么的美好!
父亲与儿子一起站在树下,欣赏着抽出纸条的小树。父亲突然发现去年钉上去的铁钉,上面已锈迹斑斑。父亲让儿子站在上面去比一比,儿子便得意洋洋地站了上去。本以为早就超过了树上钉子的高度,可谁知,比原来矮了整整一大截,儿子得意的神情瞬间凝固了,努力踮起了脚尖,但还是不能够碰到钉子,便奇怪地问正在一旁哈哈大笑的爸爸:“为什么我越长越矮了呢?”父亲则笑眯眯地回答道:“并不是你变矮了,而是小树长高了,要用发展的眼光看问题,而不能用固定思维看待问题。”儿子听了,似懂非懂的点了点头,和爸爸一起回家了。
这句话,给了儿子许多帮助,使他深深地记在了脑海中。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
一个秋高气爽的周末,父亲和儿子去公园散步。公园里秋姑娘把树叶染成了金色、红色。一阵秋风吹来,金黄的树叶像蝴蝶一样,翩翩起舞,飘飘洒洒,落满了一地。远远望去,像是一条黄金大道。
他们走到一棵小树前,儿子对父亲说:“爸爸,帮我量一下身高好吗?”“好的。”只见儿子挨着小树笔直地站着,爸爸在小树上留下一个标志,然后拿出钉子和锤子,蹲下身子,将钉子钉在小树上。儿子在父亲身后认真地看着。
秋去冬来,鹅毛大雪漫天飞舞,纷纷扬扬地下个不停,给大地铺上了一层白地毯。公园里静悄悄的,落光叶子的小树依然笔直地站在风雪中。人们用积雪在小树旁堆了个雪人,它头戴一顶瓜皮帽,手拿一把大扫帚,像一个士兵,站在雪地中,可爱极了!
冬去春来,小树冒出新芽,长得郁郁葱葱。父亲和儿子又去公园散步,他们来到小树前,想和去年量的.身高标志比一下。儿子站在小树旁一看,顿时大惊失色,他左思右想,抓耳挠腮,百思不得其解,忙问父亲:“我怎么比去年矮了许多?”父亲愣了一下,忽然想到了原因,笑着说:“儿子,不是你变矮了,而是小树长高了。小树是有生命的,它和你一样,都会长高。”
听了父亲的话,儿子茅塞顿开,终于明白了其中的道理。父子俩高高兴兴地回家了。
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