正在进行时态英语作文五年级【一】
说起书法啊，真不好意思，要知道我可为了写字大伤脑筋呢！
我嘴上虽说能练好，可心里却一个劲儿嘀咕。
以前的时候，有一次，试卷一发下来，我便傻了眼，明明是对的`却给我扣了分！我忍不住抗议：“老师，您改错了！”同桌闻声凑过来看了看我的试卷，不由皱起眉头说：“哎哟，你这是什么字啊！别说老师了，就连我也看不懂。”从那以后，我便狠下心来练字。
“横平，竖直……”妈妈远远地看见我在练字，笑意浮上眼角。但她走过来，看了看，眉心不禁又陷下去。我见了，一下子泄了气……真没想到，写字竟这么难！看来，我真是没戏唱了。妈妈见我那副沮丧的样子，便给我打气：“练字，不仅可使字写得漂亮，更可以陶冶性情，它不是瞬间就练好的，它来不得半点急躁。你得有耐心，从简单的笔画练起，这和做人要从小事做起一样，你要记住。”
哦，原来这写字也包含着这么大的学问，我一定要练好！
功夫不负有心人啊！我终于练成了班里首屈一指的好字！不能再说我的光辉战绩了，不然，该笑话我不谦虚了。
这练字不正和做人一样吗？无论再难的事，都要坚持下去！
正在进行时态英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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正在进行时态英语作文五年级【三】
每个人都会有一个属于自己的“上帝”。这位“上帝”，会给你意想不到的惊喜。
早晨起来，我翻了翻日历：嗯，今天是我的生日啊，不知爸妈会有什么生日礼物呢?
我怀着满满的好奇心走出房门，想象着爸妈给我惊喜的模样。谁知道，走出房门，却是冷淡一片。我如常的跟家人说“早安”，想获得一句“生日快乐!”。可是，也却只有一句“早安”。
我失落起来，冥思苦想了一上午，还是搞不明白：究竟是怎么了，他们是不记得我的生日了吗?往年，他们还给我办了个生日聚会了;今年，怎么就没有反应呢?
我十分纳闷，不开心。今年，恐怕要自己一个人吹蜡烛了。
我拖着步子回房间，郁闷的看起书来。因为，我听说分散注意力可以让自己没有那么伤心。
但是我发现我自己根本看不下书，心情变得有些暴躁。我很清楚自己已经十分失落，想打人。可是，我已经不再是一两岁的小宝宝了，不会生气就打人了。即将六年级的我只能把不开心收在心里。
就这样，我在我的房间里度过了一个下午，整个下午我都在“思考人生”，时不时还想一想晚上怎么度过。毕竟是自己的生日，总不能平平淡淡吧。
我走出房门，打算用零花钱买一个小蛋糕，插根蜡烛表示一下就好了。
在打开门的一瞬间，一个大大的拥抱温暖着我。不需抬头，我已经知道，拥抱我的是我的老妈。“怎么样，惊不惊喜。生日快乐啊!”老妈使劲的抱住我。不难发现，以前是我依在老妈怀里的';现在，是我抱着老妈了。
“天哪，我还以为你们忘记了我的生日了。”我看着眼前的一切，惊讶的叫道：一个诺大的蛋糕摆在台面上，还有几个盒子放在一旁。“哪会不记得啊，今年搞个新花样，给你个惊喜。”老妈看着我惊讶的眼神，不禁笑了起来。
当你感到伤心时，可能是“上帝”正在给你创造惊喜而拿走了你一点点的开心。下一秒，“上帝”的惊喜就会送到你的身边。
正在进行时态英语作文五年级【四】
每当月亮下班，天色朦胧，小鸟就早已飞上枝头欢叫；每当黄昏降临，天际的云朵被映得五彩斑斓。坐在窗前，小品一杯香醇的茶，手捧一本名书，浓郁的茶香伴着书的幽香，真让人感到惬意！
梦想，如书籍一般伴随着每一个人。不同在于，书是无处不在，伸手可得的.。而梦想却忽近忽远，让人摸不透，抓不着，怎么样才能追上梦想的脚步呢？今日，让我们迎着夕阳余晖，品着香茶甜点，慢慢的切入真题吧。
梦想，相信每个人都有吧，不管他多么伟大或多么渺小。遥遥梦想路，需要的书籍不止一本。每一个职业都需要一本书，一本内心认为有用的书，一本充满名人至理、世间人情、知识丰富的书。
像我们班，每一个同学书包里都备着几本课外书，一到课间无作业时就拿出来看几页，放松一下紧张的大脑。我，可以说是标标准准的书呆子，不信，瞧！寂静的夜，房子里的灯光依旧通明，我坐在床上，手捧《爱的教育》滋滋有味地看着，不一会儿，就响起了妈妈对我这样做的不满声：“我的小祖宗啊！11点34分啦！你开着灯让人怎么睡啊？”切，言下之意就是让我别在这么晚看下去了。哼，难不倒我！我下楼跑到客厅，打开灯继续看。
由上所述，孜孜不倦的读书，天天坚持着积累。定能让你向着你的梦想前进！当然，每个职业都离不开书籍：医生需要医书；工程师需要建筑书；糕点师需要甜点书；老师需要一本教科书……这年头，就连家用电器都有一份说明书，你说，你能不读书吗？
我曾读过一首诗：“盛年不再来，一日难再晨。及时当勉励，岁月不等人。——陶渊明。”陶渊明是中国第一位田园诗人。后世称靖节先生，田园诗派第一人。他爱读书。这首诗告诫人们要珍惜时光，好好读书。连热爱田园生活的陶渊明都已告诫人们了，我们能不反省并且开始读书吗？
书，多的可以铺成一条路，为什么我们不走这条充满幽香的路，而选择另一条有许多未知数的路呢？尽管有许多人不得不选另一条，可是你们真的争取了吗？我在此种下一颗种子：请中国人民人人手持一本书，没事读一读，让中国成为“书香之国”！让上海成为“书香城市”！我希望并不是我一个人浇这颗种子，我期待它长成参天大树！
最后，让我们一齐，由书香伴着，踏向梦想之路，完成我们的梦想之旅！
