初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我是四川省德阳市实验小学五年级三班的一名男生,我叫敬良宇,今年11岁了,今天,我很高兴能给你写信!
在我们德阳,有很多好玩的地方,比如:世界闻名的三星堆、风景迷人的'东湖山公园、空气清新的石刻公园……个个让你陶醉,还有许许多多好吃的德阳特产,我真诚的邀请你来我家做客,到时候,我们就可以一起玩耍、一起学习……
我还有许许多多的兴趣爱好,比如:跑步、踢足球、打乒乓球……每次在学校举办的田径运动会中,我可常常进入总决赛呢,在决赛中获得前三名的好成绩。
对了,现在该讨论重点了,我觉得开展“手拉手”活动可以采取以下方法来举行:
1.通过写信的方式传递消息,可以在信上写上自己想说的话。
2.可以用打电话的方式,增进彼此的友谊,让大家成为好朋友。
3.可以通过上网,用QQ、微信来聊天,这样既节省了钱,传达消息又快,不过要有节制,不能在网上聊太久。
怎么样?我的建议还不错吧!如果你有什么更好的想法或建议,
请与我联系,期待你的回信。
祝
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2月25日
“生日快乐!”一群人围着一个蛋糕齐声喊道。哈!你一定猜到了吧!有人过生日了,那这次的小寿星又是谁?他是张宇。
急匆匆来到牛排馆,点了一份牛排就开始聊天。十分钟后,有人叫:“牛排来啦!”我听了猛一转头,牛排的香味真浓,我沉浸在牛排香里,一会儿后,便狼吞虎咽起来,嘴里的还没咽下,叉子上却早有一块肉了。
接下来,我们去了“小叮当乐园”。一进乐园,便开始了男女PK赛。 “看我方“飞炮”!”女生拿起海洋球对男生大打出手。“看我方“金华火腿肠”!”陈永晋拿着一个像香肠一样的东西攻了过来,“不好,撤退!”
不知何时,战斗场转移到了海洋球场,“啊!敢打我,看我怎么对付你!”我拿起好几个球,手做了个360度大转弯,“嗨!”顿时,球像雨点般落下来,碰在男生身上,哈,这可替我出了口气。
又过了一会,我们又变了场地,玩起了“捉捉”,啊!追上了,快跑!“加速”哈,追不上了吧!“喂!我们躲在这吧!”一层,二层,玩具屋里,海洋球场里,我们的身影无处不在。
半小时过去了,我们又玩起了“抢球”,男方左边,女方右边,这次是一可与陈听对战,一可快撑不住了,这时一可眼睛一亮,拼命地向陈听那边推,我叫道:“一可,你干什么?你这是把球拱手相让啊!”,只见这时陈听被推倒在地上,球顺着陈听身上溜了过去,这一局,女方胜,“耶”!
我们赢了!“看炮”“看我的飞毛腿”,“啊!好臭呀!我看你这是香港脚吧!其臭无比!”“哈哈哈?我看也是的,哈哈哈?”
8点半了,游乐园里依然有我们的笑声?
我喜欢吃水果,在各种各样的水果中,我尤其是喜欢吃草莓。
到了草莓上市的季节,每当走到草莓摊前,那红彤彤的草莓,闻到一股甜丝丝的香味,我就会像只馋嘴的小猫,口水忍不住“飞流直下三千尺”。
我喜欢吃草莓,因为它的颜色、形状和味道都特别惹人喜爱。草莓的.形状像颗鸡心,浑身长满了细细软软的小刺,摸上去毛茸茸的,不像仙人掌的刺会扎人。熟透了的草莓穿着红艳艳的“外衣”,头上戴着一顶绿色的“太阳帽”,样子可爱极了。取一颗熟透了的草莓放在嘴里轻轻一咬,软软的,那酸酸甜甜的红色液溢的满口都是。
我喜欢吃草莓的另一个原因,因为它没有皮和壳,吃起来特别方便,这样我就不用剥皮,吐壳了。嘻嘻,一口一个,痛快极了。
草莓不但好吃,营养也非常丰富,含有多种维生素。草莓的吃法有很多种,除了直接食用,还可以榨成汁或者腌着吃。我们家的金典吃法就是酸奶拌草莓,妈妈把刚买回来的新鲜草莓切成一块一块的放进一个大碗里,我把原味酸奶浇在上面,再拌一拌,等酸奶的颜色变得艳红艳红的,草莓就腌好了。哈哈,吃上一口酸奶草莓,更是回味无穷。
这就是美味的草莓,怎么样,听了我对草莓的介绍,你一定口水“飞流直下三千尺”了吧?保管你吃了还想吃!
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