Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我的乐园在书中,书是我的乐园。
在标新立异的现代社会中,与书本竞争的对手太多太强了。人们可以轻松地敲着电脑键盘,打出一行行大小均匀的文字,研读诗书的人越来越少,他们疏远了让他们返朴归真的殿堂——书籍,他们不屑光顾这片乐土,他们的乐园在何方?
我的乐园在书中,书是我的乐园。衣着能赋予我外在的美,而读书却给我气质的美。读书能使我心灵得到净化与升华,能使我的心灵摆脱尘俗的纷扰,飞升到一个绚丽神奇的世界。只有在这个世界中,我才能超越时间的限制,去感知、探求人类的一切。有人说,一本好书是不会寂寞的,实际上,读者更不会寂寞。一卷在手,神游天地,俯视苍穹,与那些伟大的心灵对话,和自然的万物沟通,这是世上最美的享受。这里不会有人小你稚拙和贫穷,也没有装腔作势与故弄玄虚,更不会有烦躁的情绪,有的只是欢快的心情与美的享受。
我的乐园在书中,书是我的乐园。书籍不是名利场,在书海中我们可以尽情泛波,不用费心计算美钞与英镑;在书山上攀登,只需尽心享受自然与恬静即可。
我的外婆年级虽然大了,可是却很勤劳、好学,她每天五六点钟起床,就开始练毛笔字、画国画,家里的毛笔字和国画作品都快堆成山了!
等到我起床后,她就开始忙碌一天的家务活,她先跑到附近的菜市场买菜,当她拎着一大篮子新鲜的菜和早点,气喘吁吁地跑回来时,已经很累了,但还是忙着去扫地了,我吃着美味的早点,看到她大汗淋漓的样子就说:“外婆,您累不累,您坐会吧。”外婆微笑着摇摇头说:“不累,我不累。”于是继续干活,她的活真是多得数不胜数,但她把这些事都做完了,也只是擦了擦头上的汗珠,吁了口气,又开始快乐的学习了,外婆真好学。
有一次,外婆正在烧饭,做汤的时候情不自禁地唱起歌跳起老师教的舞蹈,等她回过神来,饭都焦了,可她还是幽默地说:“今天的饭带点焦味,特别的香。”
我喜欢我勤劳、好学、幽默的外婆,我要向她学习!
我的同位是张敬,也是我的好朋友。可巧,今天老师让我们写一篇作文《夸夸我的同学》,我和张敬不约而同的好说好要写对方。
瞧,张敬是个活泼可爱的孩子,短短的头发,干净的衣服,圆溜溜的大眼睛散发着明亮的光芒,漂亮极了!张敬是个爱动脑筋的好孩子,而且聪明,好学,回答问题积极。有时,她能快速的回答出老师 提出的疑难问题,我真佩服她!她学习成绩很好,字写的工整秀气,老师和同学们都很喜欢她。
下课后,我们喜欢在一起玩耍,有时我们两个也会“吵架”,她对我总是很宽容,很快又找我和好了,因此,我感觉张敬是个善良有爱心的人。我和她很有默契,有时,我和她会说出同样的一句话,做 一模一样的动作等等,呵呵,难怪我们是一对好朋友呢!
新年快到了,张敬还给我寄了贺卡:“像喜洋洋的聪明学习,向灰太狼的永不放弃学习!”
在此,我也预祝我的好朋友张敬好好学习,天天向上!
我和好朋友张敬之间已经建立了深厚的友谊,以后,我们要团结友爱,互帮互助,开开心心度过每一天。
“什么残害生命!”狐狸喝道:“我要执行我的使命,对任何危害社会秩序的东西进行惩罚。这些东西一个夏天都在池塘里游个没完,把整个池塘的水都弄脏了,使得我们大家都没有干净的水喝。”
喜鹊说:“就算弄脏了池塘是一个错误,但游水的是鸭子,你怎么抓鸡,鸡什么时候弄脏了池塘呢?”
“抓鸡怎么样!”狐狸争辩说,“鸡的危害更大。每天天还未亮它就大声号叫,闹得大家都不得安宁,难道鸡不更应该受到惩罚吗?”
喜鹊说:“如果鸡啼打搅了你的安宁,啼的也是公鸡,可你抓的`是一只母鸡呀?”
“母鸡更坏!”狐狸说,“它生那么多蛋,孵那么多鸡娃;你没看到,它引着一大群鸡娃,咯咯咯咯,在地里糟踏了那么多庄稼!”
“真有意思,”喜鹊说,“狐狸先生维护社会的秩序,又还关心地里的庄稼!但是,你抓的这只母鸡还很小,它还没有开始下蛋呢!”
“胡说!”狐狸怒道,“它现在没有下蛋,难道它永远不下蛋!反正它迟早会下蛋,会孵鸡娃,我能容许它吗?什么有意思没有意思,你不必在树上吱吱喳喳,吱吱喳喳,有意见到我面前来光明正大地提吧!”
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