独立寒秋,湘江北去,橘子洲头……同学们,听说过***写的橘子洲头吗?它是由湘江的激流冲击成的一个小岛,它成了湘江一笔靓丽的风景。
在以前,我走在沿江风光带的路上,那里的风景美不胜收。桃花开鲜艳,杨柳长得茂盛,小鸟们停在树枝上叽叽喳喳地叫着。像是为自己家在风光带而感到自豪。我也为自己家在这旁边而感到骄傲。然而……
现在,湘江的环境受到严重污染,小草没了以前那嫩绿的颜色,油菜花也变得没那么耀眼,小鸟飞走了;鱼儿病了;地面上沉积着大片垃圾……只有橘子洲头和风光带还拥有残留的绿色。为什么会这样呢?我们该怎么做呢?我进入了深深的沉思。
我查了资料,终于明白了:这一切都是由我们——人类不爱护卫生而造成的。每次去那玩,都会看到一堆堆的白色垃圾,有塑料袋、香蕉皮、烂拖鞋、纸盒,在岸边横七竖八地摆着。招来一片令人呕吐的臭味和腐烂的味道。它让我们叫苦不迭。我也垂头丧气、心灰意冷。
令人兴奋的是,政府开始下决心整治湘江污染问题了。他们加强对市民的宣传教育,强化了市民的环保意识;派出专人查找到好几个污染源,对这些污染源相应采取了措施,进行了整治;设立了污水处理厂,对污水进行净化处理,成功地清除了20%的污水。这些消息实在令人信心倍增。
我们当然也不能束手旁观,要努力呼吁人们保护环境,也要为湘江的美丽作出自己的努力。虽然我们只是小孩,不能使环境大面积变好,但我们可以从身边做起,从小事做起,甚至从捡垃圾做起。
俗话说:保护环境,人人有责。我相信,湘江——我们的母亲河总有一天会恢复以前的模样,光彩照人!
下面谈谈学习毅力的.问题。如果你有坚强的毅力,那么世界上就没有什么难事。学英语关键是能够持之以恒。
在学习过程中,你应该制订一个计划,一天记住几个单词,一天记住一两个句型。你不要小看“持之以恒”的力量。举个例子:
如果你一天背5个单词一年就是1825个单词,相当于初中三年再加高中一年零两个月的词汇量。如果你坚持两年你就能住3650个单词,相当于中学六年包括本科两年的词汇量。
在制订计划时要遵循以下几项原则:
1、计划要切实可行,不要好高务远。上面的例子已经说明,只要你能坚持天天学习,英语一定能学好。
2、要有坚强的毅力,每天都学习,不因为某些事而耽误了学习。如果哪天的工作没有完成,第二天一定要补上。连续不学习的时间不要超过两天。
3、要有一个帐本,哪天学会了哪几个单词,哪几个句型一定记录在案。
4、为了把单词、句型真正学到手,第二天一定要复习第一天的,第三天一定要复习第二天和第一天的内容。
5、所选择的课本可以是一套或两套,千万别太多。实际学英语的书没有什么好坏之分,只要你能按照一套或两
亲爱的`母亲:
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you will have a wonderful mother's day.
母亲节快到了,我想在这封信里对您说“母亲节快乐”。我爱你,感谢你为我做的一切。这一天,我离开了,不能在家给您表达我的谢意。我知道我会看着自己,所以不要担心我。我在学习上做得很好。我的同学和老师都很好。尽管我不在家里,我仍希望您有一个美好的母亲节。
Your son,
你的儿子,
Li ming
李明
自古至今,黄河与长江这两条“母亲河”一直养育着世世代代的炎黄子孙。它们流过许多省市,为我们提供水资源,电力。让我们过着无忧无虑的生活。可是,我们却没有感谢它,保护它;反而破坏母亲河沿岸的绿色生态,害的长江白鳍豚灭绝,黄河大绝口,水土流失。让许多人失去了家园,让许多人失去了亲人,让许多人失去了生命。
人们啊!难道你们还要继续这样下去,你们可知道,在这样下去,害的可是你们自己啊!如果你们还不醒悟,那就再看下去吧。
黄河,从约古宗列渠的一个小泉眼流出。小溪清澈见底,溪底的水草清晰可见。沿东南方向走,淙淙小溪经过几百千米的路程,折向西北,途中不断吸纳各地汇聚而来的支流,渐渐变成了一条大河。历史曾经美丽如画,树木茂盛,是祖先居住的地方,绿色的植被也使得黄河有了一条独特的风景线,远远望去就像是两排威武的士兵。但是,气候的变化和无节制的开垦放牧。使黄土高原的植被遭到大量的破坏,土质疏松。据记载,每年黄河被带入下游的泥沙竟达16亿吨。的泥沙被冲进河里,清清的河水失去最初的秀丽。变成了一条名副其实的“黄”河。古人称黄河是“一石水,六斗泥”而黄河之所以会成为这样,就是因为人类对环境的破坏。
而长江,则是养育着许多动物的“野生博物馆”而著名的白鳍豚就是在长江的保护下才九死一生的逃离了死神的魔爪的。同时长江保护了许多濒临灭绝的生物。如大熊猫,扬子鳄,中华鲟,水杉等。它们都是在长江的庇护才躲过了地质突变这个大灾难的。而如今,它们却躲不过我们人类的残害。
人们啊!求求你们,就听我一句话。保护母亲河,就是保护我们自己。现在,长江黄河已经变得浑浊不清,要知道,那可是我们的日常饮用水啊!一旦细菌融入水中,人类的生命又该有谁来保障呢?
所以,我倡议,我们大家应该携手去保护母亲河的环境。以致母亲河不再遭到破坏。让两位“母亲”恢复以前的容貌。给河里的生物一个生存的权利。所以,让我们还它们一个崭新的生活环境吧!
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
My dearest Mother,
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.
Love,
Your son
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