每年五月的第二个星期天是母亲节,这是一九一四年美国总统威尔逊郑重宣布的,政府同时规定:母亲节这天,家家户户都要悬挂国旗以示对母亲的尊敬。母亲节创立好后,得到了全世界各国人民的支持,母亲节已经成了一个名副其实的国际性节日,康乃馨也成为母亲节的最受欢迎的花束。
今年的母亲节又将到了,在这个特别的日子里,我想对妈妈说,妈妈,是您教我怎样走路,怎样认字、写字,怎样计算答题……,您虽然有时骂过我,但那都是一次又一次的教诲,您给了我知识又教导我做人,帮助我成长……,我终身难忘。妈妈,您辛苦了,您的爱像海水那么深,比大山还要高,您的大爱无边,在母亲节那天,我要献上最美丽的康乃馨,愿你像花儿一样永远年轻漂亮。“儿行千里母担忧”,妈妈,儿已经长大,翅膀亦渐渐硬朗,请母亲放心,儿一定好好学习,取得好成绩向您汇报。
衷心祝愿天下所有母亲快乐!
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
My dearest Mother,
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.
Love,
Your son
When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn‘t do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was very happy.
When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which weren‘t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His mother said, Thank you,my child!
今天是母亲节。孙峥觉得应该为妈妈做点事,他决定帮妈妈做些家务。放学回家的路上,他去商店买了食品。到家后,他尽全力做些好吃的,尽管他并不擅长烹任。做完饭,他又打扫了房间。他感觉有些累,但仍然很高兴。
当父母回来后,看见干净的房间和并不太荚味的`菜,他们依然很高兴。他们一起吃了晚饭。妈妈说:“谢谢你,孩子。”
Today is Mother‘s Day. I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework, others .are going to buy some flowers for their mothers. I want to say to her that I love her very much. But as a boy, it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart. I think only girls can do that.
My mother is very kind. She takes care of me day and night.
She spends little money, but buys anything for me that I need.
This time I must show my love. I am going to give her a card and write like this, I love you, mother! I am going to put it under her pillow.
今天是母亲节。我知道一些同学打算帮妈妈做些家务,还有一些同学打算给妈妈买些花。我只是想对妈妈说一声,我非常爱她。但是对我来说这样表达我的情感有点儿难,因为我是个男孩。我觉得只有女生才这样做。
我妈妈是个非常善良的人。她对我照顾得无微不至。她自己很少花钱,但能给我买我需要的任何东西。
这次我一定要表示我对她的爱。我打算送她一张写有“我爱你,妈妈”的卡片,我还打算把它放在她的枕头下面。
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
Why need so hurried? If we run quickly.we’ll get to the terminal point quickly. But if we walk slowly. We’ll see the beautiful view.
After class.I put the book on the desk. Books and the pencil-case are in my bag.I’m only doing work slowly,but I never lose the schoolthings at school.
When I do homework, I write slowly. I haven’t got times. So I haven’t got other homeworks. I exam is one hundred.
When I wash my face. I’m slow,too. I have not only the clean face,but also the new thing. Look! Put the toothbrush in front of the two big teeth like a big rabbit. My mother sees my face,she laughs to me.
If you don’t like to be slow,Must shout me “snail”.You must remeberr,please. I’m happy.
今天是五月十三日,也就是母亲节。天气很好,但没有一丝炎热的阳光,凉爽的风吹在脸上,感觉有一点寒冷。早上,我高兴的上了兴趣班,几乎都忘记了今天是母亲节,是老师提醒了大家,才使我们记住,中午,我们很早就放了学,回到了家里,我独自一人呆在客厅里想:今天是母亲节,送妈妈什么礼物呢?今天是母亲节,妈妈好象把这个节日忘记了,早上吃过早餐,就匆匆离去了。既然妈妈不知道今天是母亲节,那就瞒着她,中午就给她一个惊喜吧!我左思右想,经过了和爸爸的协商,终于做出了决定对,对,就送一束美丽的鲜花吧,在加上一份精美的贺卡,决定后,我们便“动工”了,首先,我把卖好的花包上了精美的包装纸,然后,我又在网上了一些关于母亲节的嘱咐语,抄下来后,我再配上一些好听的音乐,再把贺卡和鲜花放在了桌边,我再把妈妈请到了桌边,随着那动听的音乐声响起,我也不由自主的念了起来“每当落雨的.日子,我的脑海中都会出现您的身影,您为我……。”就是这样的情景下,我带着感情,把这美丽,动听的诗句,完整的读给了妈妈听,读完后,一家人,沉浸在欢乐和笑声中,吃完中饭,睡过午觉,到了黄昏的时候,我们一家,快快乐乐的逛便了商场。母爱的伟大就体现在这里,无私、温馨,深情、温暖,博大、包容。今天的母亲节,我就是这样度过的,过的开心吧,以后的母亲节,我一定会给妈妈更多的惊喜!
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