敬爱的爸爸、妈妈:
你们好!
俗话说,母亲的爱是无私奉献,父亲的爱是恩重如山。这句话我是深有。
那次我头昏不舒服,吃不下晚饭,你们出去散步的时候,在超市为我买了方便面、甜酒、糖果和治疗头晕的药给我,还专门为我开了一包杏仁给我吃,还问我肚子饿不饿,要不要吃点东西。也不知道为什么,当时我觉得头没那么晕了,我觉得,是爸爸和妈妈给了我许多的关心和爱护,给了我力量。
母亲,您在我伤心难过的时候安慰我,在学习上鼓励我,在生病的时候关心、照顾我,我回忆起您为我所做的一切的一切,我激动得流泪,说不出一句话来。
父亲,您虽然在我身边少一点,可是您的爱却是比泰山还重啊!虽然您在表面上爱我不多,可是行动上却把对我的关心与爱护表现得淋漓尽致,我是从心底里感谢您啊!
三月,是感恩月,三月,也是我向父母感恩的日子。我要感谢父母赐给我的生命,给我花样的年华。
母亲能够为我排忧解难,能够为我开创学习的道路。父亲能够在学习上为我加一把劲,能在生活上为我们提供保障……
妈妈啊,如果您是一个河蚌,那我就是你怀抱中的'一颗小小的珍珠,您用你毕生的心血来哺育我,我就像是小草,是永远也报答不了您春天阳光的恩情啊!
爸爸啊,如果您是一棵大树,我就是树上一片小小的树叶,您把我举得高高的,让我吸收雨露阳光,我是永远也报答不了您的养育之恩的啊!
爸爸妈妈,你们的养育之恩我是永远也报答不了的啊,你们为我所做的一切,我也是永远报答不了的啊!
祝:
身体健康,工作顺利!
方何顺
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
亲爱的妈妈:
您好
很高兴可以在此给您写信。这是我第一次给您写信。
首先,在这里感谢您对我13年的默默付出及养育之恩。因为有了您,我才得以出现在这个世界上。是您教我说话、抚养我长大、教我如何做人、在背后默默支持我、给我学习的动力,给我学习的目标……
抚养一个孩子,是一笔不小的开销。但每当我问起,您总是笑而不答。每当我失去信心时,你总会出现,给我信心和希望。我总是在想:一定是幸运女神的眷顾,才得以让我拥有您这样一位好妈妈。
记得有一次,尚年幼的我独自在人工湖边玩耍。当时的风很大,您叮嘱我小心些,我却总不放在心上。我站在湖边的一块石头上笑着、闹着。突然,您让我快点下来,并快步跑来。而我却傻笑着,没有将您的话放在心上,只当是您在和我开玩笑。然而,当一个浪打到我身上时,一切都晚了……
也许是人类求生的本能,也许是幸运,不会游泳的我紧紧抱住一块离岸边不远的石柱,并大哭起来。现在想起,感觉很幸运。又很幼稚。但一想起岸边上你焦急的身影,向一个又一个人求救的时候,我心里暖暖的。当我又站在你面前时,你那哭着的谴责,仿佛是世界上最温暖的光,驱走我身上的寒冷。当得知我除了有点害怕外,没有别的任何事时,你的激动和喜悦的神情,我永远不会忘记。
妈妈,每次有危险时,你总会当到我身前,说我还小,等长大后再换我保护您,而我也就以这个理由,在您的身后躲了13年。当遇到困难时,您从不会替我度过,而是教会我怎样度过,并看着我闯过一个个困难。
妈妈,如此恩情,我该如何报答您啊!妈妈,现在我已长大了,该换我保护您了。现在我唯有好好学习,给您减轻负担,让您欣慰啊……
此致
敬礼!
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