英语电子邮箱作文小学五年级【一】
美国作家欧·亨利在小说《最后一片叶子》中写了这样一个故事：年轻的女画家 琼西因患肺炎，危在旦夕，用医生的话说：“他的病只有十分之一的恢复希望， 这一分希望就是他想活下去的念头。”已是深秋的时分了，琼西开始数窗外一棵 老极了的长青藤上的叶片。她确信，当最后一片叶子脱落的时候，自己就该去了。 可是，藤条上剩下的最后一片叶子却任凭风吹雨打，总也肯脱落。琼西因此受到 了鼓舞，病势一天天好起来，最后，她终于感到“想死是有罪过的”，在医生的 治疗下，身体奇迹般地痊愈了。可见信念的力量是多么强大。这让我想起了一个故事。 一个发生在非洲真实的故事：
6 名矿工在很深的矿井下采煤。突然，矿井 倒塌，出口被堵住，矿工们顿时与外界隔绝。这种事故在当地并不少见，凭借经 验，他们意识到自己面临的最大问题是缺乏氧气，井下的空气最多还能让他们生 存3 个半小时。 6 人当中只有一人有手表。于是大家商定，由戴表的人每半小时通报一次。当第 一个半小时过去的时候，戴表的矿工轻描淡写地说：“过了半小时了。”但是他的 心里却是异常地紧张和焦虑，因为这是在向大家通报死亡线的临近。这时他突然 灵机一动，决定不让大家死得那么痛苦。第二个半小时到了，他没有出声，又过 了一刻钟，他打起精神说：“一个小时了。”其实时间已经过了 75 分钟。又过了 一个小时，戴表的矿工才第三次通报所谓的“半小时”。同伴们都以为时间只过 了90 分钟，只有他知道，
135 分钟已经过去了。 事故发生四个半小时后，救援人员终于进来了，令他们感到惊异的是，6 人中竟 有5 人还活着，只有一个人窒息而死——他就是那个戴表的矿工。 这就是信念的力量。由于幸存者意识模糊，人们无法知道那位牺牲者是何时停止 报时的，但他给了同伴求生的希望，自己却因为知道真相而没能坚持到底。
英语电子邮箱作文小学五年级【二】
我读了《詹天佑》这篇文章后我有很多感想。
詹天佑是一位杰出的爱国工程师，京张铁路就是在他的带领下完成的。
我们一开始说要修着一条铁路，帝国主义者就跑出来阻挠：“我们不同意你们修，要修也可以，但必须要用你们自己的工程师才行。”
19XX年，詹天佑毅然接受了任务。詹天佑夜以继日的工作，遇到困难，他总会想：这是我们自己修筑的铁路，一定要修好，为国争一口气。铁路经过很多高山，必须要开凿隧道，居庸关山势高，岩层厚，他采用从两端同时向中间凿进的方法；八达岭长一千多米，他们采用中部凿井法，把工期缩短了一半。青龙桥坡度大，詹天佑决定采用两个后车头，设计了“人”字型线路，这样就省力多了。
看到了吗？这就是我们的爱国工程师，他不怕困难，也不怕嘲笑顶着各种压力，接受了这个任务。他这种精神，非常值得大家学习。
在我们的生活中，也存在着很多这样的人，比如每天要去少体校训练的人们；每天要训练的运动员；代替全校去区里比赛的同学……他们都有很多压力、负担，但是他们并没有选择放弃，而是选择了坚持。那些去少体校训练的人们都可能成为未来的运动员，他们也可能会在奥运会上拿金牌，为国争光。
我们中国人有很多，人人都想为国争光，人人都有一颗中国心。想争光的人为什么没有争光呢？是因为太难？太苦？太累？我想都不是，而是你们的毅力不够坚强，做事总是半途而废，遇到困难就退缩，你们要学习詹天佑，要有坚持不懈的精神，一定要为国争光，因为我们是未来的希望！
英语电子邮箱作文小学五年级【三】
《木偶奇遇记》讲的是；长鼻子的匹诺曹是一个神奇的木偶，能走能跑能跳，会说会笑会哭，他是老木匠用普通的木头雕成的。他诞生后，逃出家门，惹了许多坏事。那时在坏孩子的引诱下，逃去；玩具国；。他虽然玩得很开心，却受到了许多报应，历经苦难，最后接受了教训，终于悔改，变成了一个勤劳、诚实、乐于助人、热爱学习得好孩子。
我们也要学习小木偶敢于悔改的品质。
英语电子邮箱作文小学五年级【四】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语电子邮箱作文小学五年级【五】
《斑羚飞渡》一文描写的是一群被逼至绝境的斑羚，为了赢得种群的生存机会，用牺牲一半挽救另一半的方法摆脱困境。斑羚在危难中所表现出来的\'智慧、勇气和自我牺牲精神，会让每一个读过这篇文章的人感到精神的震撼，会启发人们重新认识这个万物共存的世界。赞扬了镰刀头羊临危不惧，舍己为人的英勇精神。
