“哇!太棒了!太爱你们了!”
原来经过我的一再央求,爸爸妈妈终于决定带我去海南岛玩了。海边?那可是我从小到大一直梦寐以求的地方啊!
我漫步在海南边,远眺大海,海天相接处还燃烧着玫瑰色的霞光。落日的余晖,给大海铺上一层红纱,温柔的风轻拂海面。海水泛着微波;涌着碎浪,那是大海迷人的笑脸;海浪一层又一层地向岸边滚动,那是大海美丽裙幅上的褶皱。好一幅壮观的海浪图!
“哈哈!”“嘻嘻!”串串银铃般的笑声吸引了我。啊,原来是岸边的孩子们在戏潮逐浪。层层百缎子似的浪花一次次轻轻的抚摸着金色的沙滩。潮退去了,片片泛着白沫的沙滩显露出来了,这该是拾贝壳、捡海螺的时刻了。人们高兴的喊:“赶海喽!”看,提小桶的孩子们飞奔来了,大人们也说笑着用来了,沙滩上热闹起来了!人们的欢声笑语和大海的歌声汇成了一部交响乐。
时间不知不觉的流逝,我们静静地听着鱼儿的交谈,细细地数着浪花,尽情享受着海水的清凉,直到涨潮了。
今天是我们学校一年一度的春游活动,我起了个大早,兴冲冲地来到了学校,和同学们一起坐着一辆大巴来到了杭州茶叶博物馆。
我们随着导游来到了一片茶地上。远看,这片茶地犹如一片绿色的海洋,阳光洒在茶叶上,使一片片茶叶闪闪发亮。走进一看,原来茶叶的背后有许多绒毛,一片茶叶旁还有两片小小的叶子,就像是婴儿的两只小手,哦,原来茶叶宝宝正伸出两只柔嫩的小手尽情地吸收着阳光的温暖呢!四周都是一座一座的大山,它们像是在保护茶叶宝宝们。再仔细一瞧,茶树上还有几个白白的东西,像是一个白色的花苞,原来,这是还没长出来的茶叶。我还发现,越靠近太阳的茶叶颜色越新鲜。
我们有随着导游走进了一条小路,这儿有世界各地的茶叶,长得各不相同。奇怪的是,有些茶叶就像一棵棵树似的,长得很高,我比较了一下,长得最高的应该要数藤茶了吧。
出了小路,我们去看了茶道表演,每人还拿到了一杯茶,我仔细地品尝着这杯茶,有点儿香,又有点儿苦。
我们品完了茶,又走进了一幢大楼,这儿都是关于茶的“厅”,有“茶具厅”、“茶翠厅”、“茶缘厅”……给我留下印象最深的要数“茶翠厅”和“茶具厅”了。先来说说“茶翠厅”吧!这儿有许多茶叶的品种。基本六大类茶是:绿茶、红茶、乌龙茶、白茶、黄茶和黑茶。听导游介绍,泡茶还有讲究,不同的茶要用不同温度的水泡。再来说说“茶具厅”吧,这儿有许多茶具,有白色的陶瓷茶具,也有黑色的,漆器茶具特别漂亮,色彩鲜艳夺目,很让人喜爱。玻璃茶具用途广泛……“茶具厅”外还有一个古时候磨茶的工具,我们玩上了瘾。
看完了茶厅,就是自由活动的时间了。我们兴奋地玩了一会儿后又去参加了一个比赛,比赛的内容就是分辨出红茶、绿茶、乌龙茶泡出来的茶水是怎样的。这太简单啦!红的是红茶,淡绿的是绿茶,深绿的就是乌龙茶。我发现乌龙茶很特殊,因为它像一颗颗花苞,不像一般的茶叶。
今天玩得开心极了!我又知道了许多有关茶叶的知识。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在一个阳光明媚的下午,也就是今天。我们参观了民族博物馆,这是一座以介绍当地少数民族为主的博物馆,里面珍藏着大批图片和文物。
一进大门,映入眼帘的是一幅巨型浮雕,雕塑家用精巧绝伦的手笔在木版上雕出一幅画卷。画面上的土家族人物栩栩如生,好似活了一般。上面的男子在辛勤的锄地,脸上仿佛洋溢着欢乐的笑容,不管天上烈日炎炎太阳的炙烤。男子大都头上缠着一圈圈白巾,身着布衣挽着手上和脚上的袖口,带上一头忠实的老水牛在芳香的泥土里播下生命的种子,为来年有一个好收成。女子则在家中织着像“流水一样丝滑的布”,头上身上戴满了精巧玲珑的装饰品,婉如一个亭亭玉立的'少女。木雕的大部分空间给了摆手舞,他们在一起开心的跳着,摆脱了生活中困扰着他们的一切烦扰。快乐在这一瞬间得到了全新的释放。在山水中无穷无尽的享受着大自然所带来的乐趣,古朴的淳风和大自然的宁静与大自然溶为一体。这种舞蹈比不上帝王将相宫庭里的珠光宝气舞女的美丽;比不上风靡全球的阿根廷探戈的精彩无限;比不上流行欧洲美丽交际舞的高雅。但它所带来的快乐却是无法相比的。
接着我们又参观了其他文物,如用青铜铸造的一口淳于;那用一针一线在布上刺出的布画;新娘出嫁时捆成艺术的碗筷嫁妆。另外,还有一部分精美的图片文字资料,在图片上我看到了和花木兰一样的巾帼英雄秦良玉;神秘的挂在悬崖峭壁的悬棺;帝王喝酒的青翠欲滴的玉杯……
这次游览让我了解了当地民族文化,收获了不少民俗知识。也许比不上军事博物馆和红色博物馆的雄壮。但是带着自然朴实的民族风情却是值得我们珍藏的。
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