现在和未来英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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现在和未来英语作文五年级【二】
就像书店里卖的历史书一样，我们每个人都有自己的历史。有酸，有甜，有苦，还有很多平平常常的小事。这么多东西组合起来，就变成了自己的历史。我们还有现在，有将来。将来是不受确定的，每个人都不知道未来会发生什么事，当然啦，也有酸，有甜，有苦，还有很多平平常常的小事。经历过的未来，又变成历史了。
什么叫历史呢？比方说，你的目光扫过这一行，这一秒就变成历史了，哪怕你重读一遍，这一刻与上一秒的速度、动作、环境都一样，时间也不同了。就像人类的历史已经渡过了1997年，就不可能再来一次1997年了。知道了这些，是不是感觉时间不停的流失，不停地书写着历史呢？
经历过的一切，就都叫历史。可以这么说：没有经历过以前那些平平常常的事，就不会有现在与将来了。你看：出生很平常吧？全世界每过几秒，就都会有成千上万的婴儿出生。10年，20年前，那一刻的成千上万个婴儿里，是不是有一个是你呢？出生是平常的'，但是是现在在读文章的你出生，那就不平常了。因为如果你没有出生，你就不会在读这篇文章，不会做以后与现在的一切一切的任何事了。那些同你一起出生的婴儿，对于你来说是平常的，但对其他认识他的人来说，又变为非常非常特殊的了。所以，历史有许多许多个身份。
为什么我们有历史？为什么我们需要历史？历史不仅是通向现在与未来的铺路石，还是领导我们不误入歧途的领路人。假设你很久很久以前在路上被一个大坑给绊倒了，那么下次你经过这条大路时，就会想起那个历史，你一定一定会很小心，不会再傻傻的被再绊倒一次吧？
好了，经过了那段出生与成长的历史，你长啊长，到达了现在。现在是什么？比方说，你现在在读这篇文章。这个比喻，是不是与历史的举例很相像呢？但是这是不同的。虽然你扫到这行字的这秒成为了历史，但是现在是你正读着整篇文章的过程，还有一些没有读完，所以你正在读。这是不是很神奇？一边制造着源源不断的历史，一边又经历着现在。
现在是这三个关键词中唯一比较特殊的部分。想想看，你能改变历史吗？不可以。你能预测将来吗？估计只有神仙才能做到哦。但是现在，是可以紧紧握在手中的！现在你虽然在读文章，但现在你也可以活动活动你的任意部分。伸伸手，踢踢腿，也可以现在就喝一口茶。
为什么我刚才没有说“你能改变将来吗”而是说了“你能预测将来吗”，因为将来确实是可以被改变的哦。那为什么我不说唯一不可改变的历史为“特殊的部分”呢？因为如果没有现在，将来是永远不会被历史或自身改变的，必须是现在做了什么事，它才会发生变化。你一定听过“未雨绸缪”这个成语，或是看过蚂蚁搬家吧？正是因为现在蚂蚁搬了家，或现在带了伞，才避免了被雨淋湿。现在真的很奇妙很奇妙，如果历史是上文，将来是下文，那么现在就是承上启下的中间段啦。因为现在正制造着历史，改变着未来。
未来是非常玄妙的。就像你还是读着这一篇文章，怎么也不知道后面会写那一段话。如果你跳着读，先知道了后面，后来也不知道中间会发生什么有意思的故事一样。你永远不知道未来会发生着什么，只能做这一切的准备，以防意外。只是在做准备的过程中，人们发现了一丝可以把握的玄机罢了。就像以前的地震仪，现在的天气预报。但这些有时也是不准的。地震仪我不知道，但我每天都在看天气预报。就像有一次学校要在星期五春游，结果天气预报说要下大雨，我们只好作罢，但是那天晴空朗朗，一丝雨都没有飘下来，我觉得好可惜哦。
所以呀，实在想做的事情经过法律允许后都可以做，哪怕事后觉得开心也好，不开心也罢，都不会后悔。这样总比当时想做却没做，事后不停地懊悔、想像“如果做了会怎么样”要好得多。
历史，现在，未来这三部分两两关联，他们强强联手，选择了那一刻出生的婴儿，陪伴着他们度过了一生。这三者，大概就叫人生吧。
现在和未来英语作文五年级【三】
眼前，是一望无垠的土地，到处鸟语花香，花草树木在柔和的风中翩翩起舞，一派生机勃勃的景象……
这天，远方来了一群人，他们自称是龙的传人。这些人被眼前的大地给吸引了，为首的叫做黄帝的人动情地说：“我们要征服这土地，建立自己的家园。”
于是，龙的传人们干开了，一幢幢建筑如雨后春笋般冒出大地，一个个鱼塘闪烁着阳光的'灿烂，一条条四通八达的大路成了神州大地的脉络……
现在
一座座废弃停产的工厂如城市的一个个疤痕；马路上高分贝的汽车喇叭声使居民们苦不堪言；一到下班时，整座城市如一罐沙丁鱼一般，人流在缓慢的挪动着，北京的长安街就像一根独木桥……
如今，科技在飞速发展，知识在不断更新，城镇却愈发拥挤……
水土流失，沙尘暴，水资源匮乏等问题接踵而来……
土地资源如今已显得十分宝贵，价格越来越上涨，现在全世界可以免费使用的只有空气了。
龙的传人们，是你们，使这本来美丽的神州大地变成了这般模样。
5000年后
在太阳系的第三条轨道上，一颗毫无生机，黑色的星球在缓慢地转动着，越来越慢，越来越慢…
整个星球已毫无一人；
地面上都是几十米厚的黄沙；
最后一滴水已在两千年前就已消失。
那些龙的传人们呢？他们早已从历史的舞台中退去了。这本是蓝色，足以让银河系为之骄傲的地球，经过他们的手已成为一个发出恶臭，黑乎乎的死星，即将结束它46亿年的短暂生命。
