Dear Chris,
How are you doing? Recently, an important volleyball game will be held in our campus, which will be not only meaningful but also exciting. So, as captain of the team, I, on behalf of all our team members, am writing to invite you to join us in the battle!
Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, it will be on the 3rd volleyball court from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of July 1st. Besides, we, the Giants, will confront the Eagles, which is undoubtedly a tough rival. As a result, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.
Hopefully, you could make it to this wonderful event. We need you! Looking forward to your reply and your presence.
Yours,
Li Hua
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
人要活得精彩,在人生的漫长旅途中,我们要做得足够好,尽力地在人生大道上留下深痕,在岁月长河中刻下永恒。生活是一条崎岖坎坷的路,路上有着荆棘沼泽,也有鲜艳的花果。我们要笑对人生,也就是要笑对生活,这是一种心态,也是一种境界。生活中有疲劳,也有痛苦,有挫折,也有酸辛。这些使人觉得很累,但只要心中燃起一簇希望的亮火,点起一盏明灯,理想便会闪闪发光,生活就会多姿多彩。虽然,生活是艰难的,但我们要做生活的强者,不做懦夫。
每个人都希望站在山顶,但所有的幸福都发生在你攀登的时候,一个人只要不自弃,相信没有谁可以阻挡你前进。我不欣赏那种怯懦、安逸的人,我钦佩那种表现出奋力向上精神的人,那种永不屈服的人更令人尊敬。失败是艰难的,但是,不去努力争取成功,却更为糟糕。失败并不可怕,可怕的是不敢正视失败,生命的真谛在于奋斗,在于坚持不懈的追求,在于失败后的又一轮拼搏,真正的强者,不是在失败中诅咒成功者,也不是怨天尤人,而是在失败中反思自己,发掘自己内蕴的宝藏,力图重振旗鼓,卷土重来。
虽然在失败中流过泪,伤过心,但要擦干眼泪,更加发奋,去拼搏,争取更大的胜利。诗人曾经说过,“流过泪的眼睛富有开阔的视野,失败过的人生将近孕育着更大的成功。”记住:只要站起来比摔倒多一次,那你就是胜利者。有的人面对自己的.贫困和生活的失意,总是羡慕和妒忌他人的富裕、幸运,抱怨自己生不逢时,大骂世道不公,怨天尤人,却不寻求改变现状的正确途径,坐等靠要,或者是自暴自弃,感到生活没意思,毫无欢乐而言,那么,这种人的精神比物质还要贫困。
与之相反,有的人能面对同样的生活压力,却不怨天尤人,而是面对现实,视之为一种对人生和生命的挑战与考验,努力奋争,尽自己最大的力量去改变现实中的不如人意,同时,也不对生活抱以过高的奢望,充分地感悟着人生,享受人生,从而活得有滋有味。生活是一本书,书的题目是“生活“。让我们都来写好自己的生活之书吧。生活告诉我们,然自界的季节可以变换,拉断的琴弦可以更换,演糟了的戏可以重排,唯独人生没有第二次 .
所以,我们要活出个样来,给自己和爱自己的人看看。在生活中,最关键的是要学着自己坚强。人生的道路上,谁都有可能跌倒过,但要勇敢地站起来。经历了摔打,经历了风险,才能在前行的路上潇洒的驰骋。 正是:不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹。所以说:人的一生应当这样度过,当你回首往事时,不因虚度年华而悔恨,也不因碌碌无为而羞耻,当困难来临时,要勇敢对它说:“来吧,困难,我一定把你搞定。”这才是生活的强者!
在生活中,父母对我们的爱无处不在,在我身边就发生过这样一件事。
有一次,我考试考的成绩很差,我想惨了,回到家又要被老爸挨批了,嗨!真是没天理呀。一间屋门,就听到爸爸说:“考试考得怎么样啊。”我埋着头垂头丧气的说出了我的成绩,爸爸大声说:“什么,竟然考的那么差。”我就被爸爸的声音吓得退后了几步,我对爸爸大喊:“人生总会有很多次失误,我就失误了这一次,怎么了。”这时,妈妈走过来说:“原谅孩子吧,孩子就失误了这一次,你没失误过呀。”爸爸妈妈开始吵起来,我冲出了客厅跑进了自己的屋里,趴在床上,我听到爸爸妈妈现在正在为考试这件事争吵着,到了学校又一次考试即将来临,过了几天,开始考试了,我回忆起爸爸批评我时对我说的话,做题时必须认真,考完试,卷子很快就批完了,我考的分对于我来说还行,让爸爸看了看,爸爸说:“还行,上次批评你是因为为你好,看见没,批你一顿,现在考好了吧。”我高兴地回答嗯。
我终于明白了爸爸为什么批评我,是因为为了我好。
生活中充满了爱,它无处不在,我最清楚的是爸爸给我的爱。
上三年级的时候,数学总是拖我的后腿。每当我望着那只有七八十分的考卷时,较为内向的我总会把泪水在眼眶里打转。每当这时,我真想大哭。我的一切,都尽收爸爸的眼底,他总是削好一个苹果,放在盘子里,端到我的面前,亲切地说:“女儿,吃吧!”等我吃完苹果,爸爸耐心地说:“孩子,你看······我抬起头,望着爸爸那鼓励的目光,我又重新拾起了信心。
从那以后,爸爸每天都从他那繁忙的工作中抽半小时来给我补习数学。不厌其烦的教我做每一道做错的练习题,直到我会了为止。每次写完一项数学作业,爸爸都会认真地批改。作业本中的每一道练习题,每一个数字,他都会给我讲解清楚。
又是一次。我得了九十五分,这离不开爸爸的讲解与教导。当他看见我九十五分的试卷时,他欣慰地笑了。因此,我慢慢变了,变得有自信和快乐了,这都应该感谢我的爸爸。
爸爸对我的爱是无私的,我尊敬爸爸,爸爸也理解我。我感谢您,爸爸!
Dear Mike,
You asked me about the present situation of the public transportation in Wuhan in the last letter.
Now, I will communicate the action of the government and my opinion with you.
Firstly, the price of the bus has been cut down, which is very important, I think. Encouraging people to take bus can solve the biggest problem--too much people.
Another way is to develop the bike rental. As we know, car is much bigger than the bike obviously. Driving a car takes up much more place than cycling. So, developing the bike rental is an absolutely correct way to prove traffic circumstances.
Besides, government also builds 4 subway lines under the central of the city and increases the number of the taxis.
In my opinion, all the action above is useful. When the actions above are all finished, the city will be more perfect.
Yours,
Li hua
有些事我们对父母是无法了解的',有些事父母对我们是不了解的。今天,我了解了,什么是爱。
妈妈给我讲她的故事:妈妈小时候生活得很困难,所以很少吃好吃的。姥爷开家里来了客人。就买了很多好吃的东西。然后,客人吃饱了,就走了。剩下了一个鱼罐头。姥姥说:“要把鱼罐头退了。”妈妈想要吃。姥姥不给,妈妈就哭个不停。姥姥说:“鱼罐头对人体不好。”就要把鱼罐头给退了。可妈妈还要吃,然后,姥姥就打妈妈了。妈妈就不喊着要吃了。然后,姥姥就把鱼罐头给退了。
妈妈还讲了一个故事:妈妈该上学了,因为学校在很远的地方,所以每天都要姥爷接送。妈妈不愿意上学,姨也不愿意上学。可必须上学,不上学,就把妈妈她们扔在学校里。妈妈她们就大哭起来。每天都是这样的。妈妈就不知道为什么。妈妈现在知道了姥爷为什么对她们那样。妈妈就像姥爷在教育她的时候。我感受到了一种不同的爱。
妈妈对我的爱,我不知道。但我知道姥爷对妈妈的爱,还有姥姥对妈妈的爱。妈妈我爱您,我喜欢您。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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