亲爱的`母亲:
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you will have a wonderful mother's day.
母亲节快到了,我想在这封信里对您说“母亲节快乐”。我爱你,感谢你为我做的一切。这一天,我离开了,不能在家给您表达我的谢意。我知道我会看着自己,所以不要担心我。我在学习上做得很好。我的同学和老师都很好。尽管我不在家里,我仍希望您有一个美好的母亲节。
Your son,
你的儿子,
Li ming
李明
阳光从窗外洒进来,照射着床头的布娃娃上,终于,我在被爱中学会爱。
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
今年有一天,早上我起床的时候我发现眼睛里有很多眼屎,我想睁开眼睛后,把眼屎弄掉,可是我发现睁开眼睛的时候有点疼痛。起床后我跟妈妈说,妈妈就跟我说大概是内热吧,吃点消炎的药就可以了,来儿子妈妈给你吃药。虽说吃了药,但在接下来的`日子里早上我照样有很多眼屎。一天早上妈妈吃惊对我说:“儿子你的眼皮怎么变大了?”我回答道:“不可能吧,我没觉得呀。”我边说边走到镜子旁。这时我真的下了一大跳,因为我的眼皮确实是变大了。妈妈这时跟我说:“儿子过来让我翻开你的眼皮瞧一瞧,到底是怎么一回事。”“哦”我回答一声后走到妈妈的身旁。妈妈翻开我的眼皮后说:“你的眼皮里大概是长了一个脓包,我带你去医院看看。”然后妈妈马不停蹄的带着我到了医院。到了医院后,医生说我确实是长了个脓包,做个小型手术就行了。我因为是第一次做手术,有点害怕。这时妈妈跟我说会打麻药的,打了麻药后就不疼了。做完手术后,果然跟妈妈说的一样,除了打麻药的时候有点疼,其它一点也不疼。
母亲对我们的爱,是我们所能报答得了的吗?正如《游子吟》所曰:“谁言寸草心,报得三春晖。”虽然我们报答不完。但我们也要一点一点的报答。
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