五年级去旅行英语作文5句话【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级去旅行英语作文5句话【二】
一天晚上，我和爸爸、妈妈去游乐场溜冰。妈妈拿出卡，刷了一下，我们就进去了，进去以后，我们把鞋换成了溜冰鞋。
换好溜冰鞋，我们就进去溜冰了，爸爸牵着我的手，在那里转来转去，我非常非常的开心。
我玩累了，就在休息区休息了5分钟，又开始滑了，我们三个人大手牵小手，飞快地滑过来滑过去，滑了一会，我们都口渴了，爸爸过去买饮料喝，我选了果汁，爸爸选了红茶。我打开盖子喝了几口，就把盖子盖上了。爸爸对我说：“你先把饮料放在休息区吧！”我高兴地说：“没问题。”
我们滑了好一会儿，就不滑了。来到了游戏厅，我们选了水果跳跳侠玩，爸爸是一个玩，刚开始很紧张，不一会就结束了，爸爸觉得挺好玩的，让我玩，可是我不会玩，就让妈妈玩，妈妈玩这个可厉害了，连续过了三关，还给我赢了5个小玩具，我好开心。
玩好后，妈妈说：“时间不早了，我们回家吧！”我们依依不舍的回家了。
五年级去旅行英语作文5句话【三】
终于到了超市。这个超市好大呀，虽然不如大商超市那么大，但远比它东西多。这里的东西样样齐全各式各样，看得我眼花缭乱的，来到了食品区，有很多好吃的，有水果、有饼干、有奶、糖……
忽然，我听到了一个声音，是爸爸说的`，说：“宝贝，你挑点儿吧，”天啊，这是我最感动地一次，爸爸竟然主动让我买吃的，我挑了我最爱的"好多鱼”、“3+2饼干”还有“康豆花生”，满满一大包，我好高兴啊！
买完东西，我们才依依不舍地离开了超市。
五年级去旅行英语作文5句话【四】
星期天下午，我和妈妈去游乐场游玩。
来到游乐场，啊！人山人海，用人流如潮，热闹非凡等词语来形容真是太恰当不过了。有打网球的，有滑潜艇的，有玩碰碰车的......
引起我注意的是滑潜艇比赛。我想比一比，妈妈同意了，于是我坐上潜艇开始比赛。
比赛枪一响，我就开始潜艇了，出乎意料的是有一位队员的速度飞快。不一会儿，他就和终点只离五六百米远了，我却几乎还在起点，气的我火冒三丈。我想：如果他累得满头大汗，不想往前滑的时候，我不就可以超越他了吗？于是我慢慢的开，他还以为我认输了呢。就在他掉以轻心，不注意的时候，我加紧向前，近了，近了......最终，我以飞快的速度超越了他，到达了终点。他只好认输了，我开心的领了奖品。
我怀着愉悦的心情离开潜艇的地方，路过转盘，就问妈妈：“我可以玩转盘吗”妈妈见我玩的正尽兴，就同意了。我来到转盘前，伸手猛一转，转盘便转呀转，转呀转......转了好几分钟，我一心想拿一等奖，急得直挠头，又过了好一会儿，终于停了，哈哈哈哈，真的是一等奖啊！但是工作人员一直没给拿出奖品，我纳闷的走过去问，他们笑嘻嘻的说;“忘了”。说完便进去拿奖品，但是，拿出来的却是二等奖的，我气的发火了，说：“不要欺骗小孩子啊。”那人说：“对不起，我弄错了。”真气人，游乐场也会出现这种情况。还好奖品是我喜欢的小自行车，看见这丰厚的奖品忘记了不愉快。
太阳落山了，人们依依不舍的离开了，这真是令人难忘的一天啊！
五年级去旅行英语作文5句话【五】
我听赵阿姨说东湖山有一个游乐场，那里有很多好玩的东西，我真想马上飞到那里去呢！没想到，星期天爸爸妈妈就带着我去那里玩了！
我们到了游乐场，看见有很多小朋友都来这里玩了。我激动得心好像马上要跳出来似的。
首先映入我眼帘的是一群人正在骑马，我觉得很好玩，就叫妈妈带我去。我选择的马是黑色的，一走到它跟前，我就想马上跳到马背上。可是，跳不上去，还是养马的叔叔抱我上去的呢！坐在马背上，我觉得好舒服哦！那马背上的毛黑得就像被墨染过似的。我抓住马鞍，说：“走。”那马飞快地向前跑，就像在给风儿比赛，我坐在上面，感到好刺激啊！
下了马，我又想去坐碰碰车，可是，当我们听到有一些人在尖叫时，吓得我都不敢去了，在妈妈的鼓励下，我还是鼓起勇气，冲向碰碰车，和爸爸一起玩了起来，我来踩油门，爸爸来打方向盘。我们开着碰碰车在里面横冲直撞，与对面的车相互碰撞，不断发出“砰砰”声，我笑得前仰后合......，正在这时，一位阿姨的车碰到了我的车，就在那刹那间我再次感受到了坐碰碰车的无限乐趣......。
游乐场里还有很多好玩的东西，等着大家去玩呢！我觉得东湖山游乐场真好玩！
