To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
也许你对目前的生活状况感到十分满意,但是你想过没有,还有许多人处在窘迫的困境之中,于是构建和谐社会就成为我们所有人共同奋斗的目标。现在中国正以矫健的步伐大踏步地不断攀升,世界的目光都在注视着我们,然而,个别国家为了遏止我们的发展而散布一些不利于我们的言论,于是,构建和谐社会是当务之急。我们必须以实际行动向世界证明,我们的强大必会给世界的和平带来有利因素。
这样,我们构建一个诚信友爱,充满活力,安定有序,人与自然和谐相处的社会。构建和谐社会,必须依靠每一个炎黄子孙的共同努力。我们生活在民族复兴的伟大时代,我们有责任为构建和谐社会作贡献。我们不能坐享其成,而应该从我做起,从先在做起。
首先,我们必须得勤劳。勤劳的人们总是追赶着太阳的步伐,而且还很光荣。他们用自己的双手创造着未来。我们虽然算不上什么真正意义上的劳动者,然而,我们还是有能力做一些力所能及的事情。扫扫地,擦擦桌,抹抹窗,等等。其实这些很简单,用不着太多的力气,还可以活动活动筋骨。
其次,还必须有责任感。它是人格高尚的重要组成部分,一种高尚的情感,一种博大的胸怀,一种执着的精神,一种自觉的\'奉献。徐本禹,他依崇高的责任感温暖了贫困山区的心灵,感动了中国。我们又和乐而不为呢?扶扶老弱病残,帮帮身边的每一个人,这样,我们的心情也会很愉快的。
再次,要有感恩的心。感恩是万物的共性,感恩更是一种人性美。古人说:“滴水之恩,当以涌泉相报。”陈敬道,一个大学毕业生,得到了善良人的帮助,为了感恩,选择到农村支教。黄舸,一个先天性肌无力患者,得到了许多人的帮住,为了说一声谢谢,走遍了祖国的大江南北,寻找那些帮助过他的人。
最后,要遵守诺言。俗话说:“言比信,行必果”,遵守诺言之所以很重要是因为诚信具有无上的价值。是否实践诺言是构建诚信社会的基础。如果人们不把守信重诺作为制约自身、与人交往的行为准则,影响社会各个层面,社会将呈现的是谎言和欺骗,社会和谐就是一句空话。
“落霞与孤骛齐飞,秋水共长天一色”,构建和谐,你我共同参与。
大自然是充满生机的,有时它是一组旋律,有时她是一副幅多姿多彩的画。冬日,雪花飘飘,天寒地暖,但雪中的景物却那般和谐静谧,散发出别致的意味。
自然是永恒的奇葩,她赋予梅花秉性,那是“众芳摇落独暄妍,绽尽风情向小园”。她绘制出别致的风景,有“乱花渐欲迷人眼,浅草才能没马蹄”的偏安一隅。她雕刻出壮阔山河,“日月之行,若出其中,星汉灿烂,若出其里”。
古往今来,文字记录了自然的旋律,它在纸面上自由挥洒,将大自然的变迁与奉献永载史册。我们后人手捧沉甸甸的书籍,恍若置身其间,不由得用心来体会自然的心跳。无数的书籍告诉我们:人与自然本是一家,两者理应和谐共存,互惠互利,与自然和谐相处,共同进化。
谈及“人与自然和谐相处”这一话题,我就会不由自主得想起一本小说《斗罗大陆》,这本小说讲述了在一个名为“斗罗大陆”的世界里,有着两个种族:魂师和魂兽。魂师必须通过猎***魂兽获得魂环来提升自己的实力,长此以往,魂师与魂兽的矛盾日益激化。小说的主人公唐三一家为了缓和和甚至解决这一矛盾,也是一直在努力探索。尽管他们开创的道路最终没有得到广泛推广和实践,但他们付出的努力也是不可置否的。
我想:这部小说中所讲述的这一故事不正是一个类似人与自然和谐相处的问题吗?很显然,小说中的这个问题比起我们人类与大自然的问题困难了十倍百倍。即便是这样,他们也最终找到了解决方案。那么,我们人类又有什么理由不去解决这一问题呢?
在经济建设突飞猛进的今天,物质生活日益丰富,为了满足自己的需要,人们砍伐一片片的`森林,污染一条条河流,侵蚀一寸寸土地,让那个曾经美丽的地球满目疮痍,这样的自然会成为我们的朋友吗?
为保障人与自然的和谐,必须建立人与自然和谐的心,除法律手段外,还必须依靠道德的力量,建立适应生态环境保护和改善的道德规范,有利于形成人们坚定的内心信念,形成强大的社会舆论压力。
唤醒“绿色之心”,实施“绿色计划”,开展“绿色行动”。让我们用双手撑起一片蔚蓝的天空!
乍看,那生命就是光束中飞舞的无数细微尘霭,随风起荡不便留存。生命的长度,有一份爱在丈量,不被探测与需索。阳光在身边,雨露才灌以成长。人间若是没有爱,太阳自会灭殪。做天使去拥抱受伤的别人,让爱溢满人间,那在今天更有价值。
每个人自小都处于一方阶台上,只是有人向上有人向下,有人犹豫不前,有人义无反顾。但勿论如何我们都在同一路上,在奉献一份沉甸甸的爱及伟大而崇高的美!转眼处,秋已临,不觉春光早逝,雨淅淅沥沥地落下。挤满荷池。一群无家可归的孩子,抱着碎分的枕巾,泪落溅飞颗颗染血的砂砾,又一个夜,陪雨度过宿冷的\'滂沱。——这正是一种责任,无时无刻不在刺痛的心,吮吸生命的挚情;无时无刻不在鞭策的身,要真须懂得奉献的重要。孩子,朋友,别在小池徘徊,别在雨中沉思,更不要在黑暗中落泪。在这里,会有一双双手,会有一份份爱在关怀,在等待。播种的爱心,期待收获的希望。
友情有义,关怀在路。那用爱浇铸的钢铁长城,用爱围筑的血肉城池,比最深的海洋还要深,比最长的河流还要长,比最韧的藤蔓还要韧,比最柔的绸缦还要柔,比最纯的金子还要纯。对于它,我们即使用尽全世界最美好的词汇也没法描述。所以,我们让心充满情谊的爱,荡涤着世间的尘埃,扫除心底的阴霾,温暖着人们的关怀。
故此,我们要将一份爱,加固永远的期限。乃当须弘扬博爱精神的主题,弘扬中华民族扶贫济困传统美德的己任,调动激发社会各界积极参与支持社会公益、慈善机构的事业,立砺新风,为学校直至整个社会树立一道友好互助的靓丽风景线!这是我们大家共同的心愿,也是我作这篇序言的目的及意愿…
最后,感谢社会各界人士对慈善机构事业的鼎力支持,感谢他们奉献的拳拳爱心!对于他们的奉献,不单是以资助贫困学生的真实描述,更是学校及全世界弱势群体感受社会关爱的真实体现。借此,热切呼吁:请投下一分情,为自己赢得一分彩,更为社会贡献一分爱!
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