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我是C罗。有些冒昧,打扰之处还望海涵。下午刚刚跟赫迪拉通了电话,了解到你们有可能在末轮轮换球员,我深知你跟美帝克指导私交甚笃,你们一场平局不伤和气,我们却会白忙活一场。抛开这个不说,你看看现在的形势,欧洲危矣!世界杯将沦为美洲杯!亚洲孱弱非洲低迷不说,世界杯向来是我欧与他美角逐的最重要战场,现在西班牙英格兰意大利因为抢购特价机票早早地打道回府,继续维护我欧尊严的仅剩你德我葡萄还有法国河南比利时瑞士,而最后有夺标实力的,就你德和法荷了。意大利后防大将基氏左肩依旧伤痕累累,美洲诸强正张开血盆大口,夺我基业之心路人皆知。未来的`淘汰赛,美洲兵团势必会对我欧球队展开围剿,那般,我欧2006年攻下的基业将毁于一旦,而让西西内内领军的探戈桑巴坐收渔翁之利。因此,还望勒指导以我欧大局为重,对美帝一战勿念你与克指导旧情,放手一搏。我葡萄诸将,纳尼佩佩费雷拉等辈将誓死一战,举全葡萄之力拿下戛纳电影节,不,拿下加纳。勒指导,还记得1982年大明湖畔的“希洪之战”吗?虽然和奥地利小伙伴很happy地共同出现,最后还是在决赛中负于意大利。
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我是中国南京雨花外国语小学的一名四年级的boy,我热爱我的\'祖国、热爱学习,更向往美好的和平。
今天,很高兴能以书信的方式和您谈谈我这个中国男生以及我对“奥运精神”的理解和喜爱。奥运精神是“更快、更高、更强”,但在我理解:其中还蕴含着全人类的和平、友谊和团结。特别是团结精神,在体育运动中,有很多竞技项目都需要紧密合作、团结一致来完成,例如篮球、排球、足球……如果大家不去紧密团结,而是各人顾各人的,那么,可想而知结果肯定很糟糕,用中国的一句话来说就是马尾巴搓绳——不合股。
目前,我所在的学校为了提高我们的身体素质,不仅专门在每天的课程里安排了体育课,还有大课间、轮滑俱乐部、篮球队……。我很想参加儿童足球队,可却没有这样的机会,这让我很失望。但我没有因此对自己失去信心,我报名参加了学校组织的管乐队和漫画俱乐部。其实,体育给我们带来的冲击力不仅是在某一项体育运动当中,它所带来的感染力和影响力还贯穿在生活和学习的点点滴滴当中。
期待您的回信,希望以后我们能有更多的交流机会。
祝你生活愉快,球球进门!
olympic amateur:chinese boy zhuyuanzheng
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;
2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);
3.你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3)传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
你们好,当你们看到这封信的时候,也就是我们快要离别的时候了。很高兴在这段时间里能与你们一起同甘共苦。做你们的班主任是一件快乐的事情。今年夏天,感谢有你们的相伴相随。
首先,非常感谢你们这段时间的积极配合工作。我们班,C班,是一个非常优秀的班级。为此,老师甚是感到高兴,骄傲和自豪。我们是一个团体,C班里的每个人都有自己的特点。在老师的眼里你们都是优秀的,都是好孩子;在老师的眼里没有差生。我记住你们每个人的名字、相貌和特点。
唐隆是一个天真活泼烂漫的孩子,喜欢得到老师的关注和宠爱,有极高的资质,懂得关心别人。
志强是一个听话懂事的孩子,朗诵水平不错,估计语文水平也不差。
正沅在老师面前总是表现得很腼腆,小小个子的,鬼灵精怪。
学艺是个好孩子,喜欢唱歌,歌声动听。
还有晓萱,是个勤奋好学的孩子,每节课都坐得很端正,文静,善解人意,老师非常喜欢她。
彩娟,学习能力强,思维活跃、创新,课堂上积极回答问题。
雨欣的声音很好听,清脆悦耳。
小莉喜欢笑,笑容纯真好看,老师希望你以后也要像现在这样多笑点,无论遇到什么都要微笑着面对。我喜欢她,因为她和我同一个“莉”字。
黄娜,一个听话的孩子,我也喜欢她,因为她和我同一个“娜”字。
春婷,也是一个爱笑的孩子,我喜欢捏她的脸,因为可爱。
家乐和晓倩,都是文静的`孩子,上课是时候坐得非常端正,认真。
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还有许许多多同学,在此就不一一展开说了。你们每个人的名字、相貌,我都深深地记在心里。但愿有一天回忆的时候,还可以记住彼此的脸。很多情已积累在心中,无法再用言语来表达。
老师真的很想再多教你们多些东西,老师爱你们每一个人。
这些日子里,你们都表现得很好,老师在此对你们表示衷心的感谢。
同学们,孩子们,你们要记住:没有伞的孩子只能奔跑。如果你们想知道山那边的世界,想走出山那边,想看看山那边的海;那么你们就得努力攀登了。
夜已深,就此搁笔。
祝全班同学:
身体健康,快乐成长!
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