童年的记忆五彩斑斓,而印象最深的,却是一片青色的竹林。
那是一片美丽的竹林,在我家背后的山坳里。儿时,我常和小伙伴们在那里面嬉戏打闹,玩捉迷藏和其他各种各样的游戏。至今想来,仍有种幸福绵绵的感觉。
春天一到,整个山坳嫩竹萌发,万枝吐翠,生机勃勃,春意盎然。漫步林中,细风吹来,竹声沙沙,十分悦耳。听着这悦耳的声音,闻着嫩竹的清香,真让人心旷神怡,惬意极了。
春天的嫩竹有一种说不出的美。青青的秆、青青的叶、一丛丛,一根根,枝枝向上,劲健,给人一种向上的力量和昭示。竹有秀丽挺拔的青竹,有昂首挺胸的鞭竹,有苍劲伟岸、表皮布满点点泪痕的斑竹。
竹的虚心有节,笔直向上曾给人无限的想象和启发,因此古代的文人墨客非常喜欢竹,把竹当作人的品格的一种象征。文人们喜欢画竹,如郑板桥、文与可。诗人们喜欢咏竹,如苏轼、马致远。苏东坡写过几十首咏竹诗,我记忆最深的一句是“宁可食无肉,不可居无竹”。南朝诗人徐陵写过一首咏竹的小诗,里面有两句“嫩竹犹含粉,初荷未聚尘”。我也非常喜欢。
我时常去林中漫步,去林中拾竹箨,拾回竹箨奶奶编草垫,软软的,又防潮,又防虫,是农村人们最喜爱的坐具之一。竹林里十分清爽干净,没一点杂革,只有薄薄的一层竹叶,夏天是我们游戏时最好消暑纳凉的地方。
竹林四季皆翠,永葆本色,即使是在隆冬,万木凋零的季节,故乡那片竹林,依然是苍劲挺拔,直指苍穹。
在我童年的岁月中,故乡的竹林陪伴我成长,给了我欢乐,给了我力量,给了我无穷的启发,竹是我的挚友。
如今,我到异地他乡,那片青青的竹林也浓缩成一个遥远的记忆。然而,我无时无刻不在思念那些以前的朋友,每当起风的时候,这种感情更强烈,我仿佛又回到了故乡的竹林,在竹林里徜徉、漫步,和那些翠竹们做着心与心的交流。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
天空那么灰,空气那么的潮湿,我们变得沉闷和哀伤。
操场上盛开的栀子,一如我们当初纯洁无瑕的青春,那一天,不像是在春风的四月,而是多了一份8月的炙热,让内心无比的压抑。我们站在跑道上,弯曲着身子,在枪声响起的那一刻,我们如离弦的箭,跑了出去,跑了一圈,两圈,便听见老师们的呐喊:“加油!孩子们,你们是最棒的!!!”跑过后,那辛酸的汗水,不再是跑不动的借口,因为我们付出了太多的努力,才能够换回今天这灿烂的笑容。
教师的桌子上,一摞摞的书码在桌子上,我们刻隐在隐蔽处的小秘密,还有太多的玩笑,回想起那1000多个日日夜夜,虽说初三的生活不好过,每天都是那么烦人的课,无聊的生活,每天都盼望着周日的到来,好能歇息一天,但这也是最快乐的日子。我们从稚嫩的初一到成熟的.初三,这当中有太多的挫折与笑容,我们都是一齐走过,当我们到了黎明前的黄昏,——六月时,所有人都以期盼的心情走进考场中,我们奋笔勤书,写出那无憾的年华,在考场中那声嘶力竭的战役中,拼出了自我。
那是我们多好的回忆啊,即使栀子谢了,跑到旧了,课桌搬了,朋友走了,这些,这些,都是我无法忘却的。可是天下没有不散的宴席,我们不可能永远的生活在一起,我们终究是要离开的。
想起老师那严肃的批评,我们低着头,在底下偷笑,我喜欢这样,我喜欢永远和你们在一起。在老师那和蔼可亲的声音中,她时刻提醒我们要珍惜时间,但我们都是失去了,才懂得珍惜。
当我7月背着书包,走出我的校园时,抬起头,用手抹去天空哭过的痕迹,大声呐喊:“今天,我毕业了!!!”
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
可是,从养根楼放眼望去,你会发现一家苑、兰亭苑中常常会有一些塑料垃圾带、废纸……草坪上有许多枯萎的'落叶,甚至还有:“残疾”的树枝,“生病”的花朵有气无力地躺在地上;大树爷爷的身上留着坑坑洼洼的小伤疤……“校园是我家,清洁靠大家。”校园如同我们的第二个家,只有鸟语花香、温馨的校园,才能让我们感受到“家”的味道。保护美丽的校园是我们每个学生共同不可推辞的责任。
最近,我们学校正在争创“常州市绿色校园”。同学们看到了地上的纸屑,都纷纷挪动脚步,弯下腰,把垃圾送回了家。有的同学还把家里的小盆栽带来学校,放在班级后的柜子上,让他们给我们带来新鲜的空气。有许多“不自觉人士”也都改头换面,参加到这项活动中来。这“不自觉人士”中,当然少不了我的同桌——咪咪。
这不,今天我刚踏进校门,见学校大道上有个包装袋。我正想捡起来,竟被咪咪抢先了。我说:“今天你这是怎么啦?”她冲我笑了笑,什么话也没说。全校师生都参加到这项活动中来了。只要我们坚持努力,从身边的小事做起,“常州市绿色校园”会创建成功的。
1.培养孩子防拐、防骗的自我保护意识和能力。督促孩子严格按照学校的要求准时上学、放学,不在途中停留,不要单独在偏僻处,不炫富,以免给歹徒可乘之机。
2.教育孩子自觉遵守交通规则。听从交通警察指挥,红灯停、绿灯行,横过马路要左右看,走人行横道。不搭乘无牌无证、假牌假证、拼装车、报废车、货车、拖拉机、超载车辆和摩的等非法营运车辆。
3.教育孩子不要进入游戏室、网吧、舞厅、KTV等未成年人不适宜进入的场所,自觉远离“黄、赌、毒”危害。
4.教育孩子不购买非法烟花爆竹,不燃放烟花爆竹。
5.培养孩子良好的卫生习惯。教育子女不光顾无证食品摊点,不购买“三无”食品;不扎堆、勤洗手、常通风,防范麻疹等传染病。
6.教育孩子安全常识与技能,熟知常用的应急电话,如:火警119,报警110,医疗急救120,交通事故122。
1.自觉遵守法律法规,不做违法乱纪及违反社会公德的'事情。
2.举止文明,不参与黄、赌、毒及封建迷信活动,保持高尚情操。
3.反对铺张浪费,厉行节俭,教育子女养成艰苦朴素的生活习惯。
4.与人和睦相处、相互尊重,积极参与开展“平安家庭”创建活动。
孩子是祖国的未来,是家庭的希望,关注孩子的平安,是我们共同的心愿。让我们家校联手,为“平安瓯海、平安校园”建设多做贡献。
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