Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我们做的是水果奶昔,老师让我们提前准备了自己喜欢的水果带到班里。老师拿着料理机和牛奶等材料进来啦,教室里热闹非凡,像炸开了锅似的,同学们议论纷纷。老师咳了两声,我们立马就安静了,目不转睛地看着,生怕漏掉任何一个步骤。
看完老师的示范,我自告奋勇地上了台。我先把切块了的桃子和常温牛奶倒入料理机当中,在把桃子打的`“粉身碎骨”后,再加入冰牛奶和一些蜂蜜,搅拌均匀,一杯桃子奶昔就做好了。我把奶昔倒入杯子里,往上面撒了一些奥利奥饼干碎,又放了几颗心形软糖在上面,真好看!我喝了一口,桃子味掺杂着牛奶味,香香甜甜的,真好喝!
这是我第一次做奶昔,做的很成功。大家是不是也觉得很简单呢?不妨也试一试吧!
今天,妈妈买了很多橙子,这可是我的最爱。我很喜欢橙子。还记得有一次,外婆给我了一个橙子,我连看一秒的时间都没有给它,就立刻从口袋里拿出一个橙子吃了起来,嗯,真美味。
橙子大大的,圆圆的,果皮黄黄的,上面有一个梗子,像戴着一顶绿色的小帽子。切开它,一阵香气扑鼻而来。它的特点果肉是一瓣一瓣的,里面有很少的籽。远看,像月亮,黄黄的,很好看。它又像小船,弯弯的。近看,像一个小姑娘穿着一件橘色的小裙子,上面有白色珍珠点缀着,真漂亮!
这时,一阵风吹来,橙子微微动了一下,又纹丝不动了。我看了,觉得很好玩,于是推了它一下,它像不倒翁一样摇来摇去,就是不倒。我又用力一推,它像败下来的士兵一样重重的倒在地上,我赢了!
橙子的味道甜甜的,这时熟的味道。没熟的呢,果皮绿绿的,果肉又酸又甜,很怪的味道。熟的,很好吃,叫人越吃越爱吃。
它和桔子、橘子、柚子之间有什么关系呢?我不明白。
我查了百度,原来它和桔子、橘子和柚子之间的关系是相亲近的关系,橙子、柚子、香橼是三大元老,它们是柑橘属的基本种,其它的柑橘属是它们的子孙,它们三大元老则分别是它们或是它们子孙交结而成的呢!
原来橙子有那么多知识啊!
在我的家乡那里,水果可多了,有香蕉,有西瓜,有葡萄,有苹果,等等。可今天,我就给你们介绍在我家乡的橙子。
春天来了,柳树发芽了,小草睡?了,花儿们都展开了笑脸,他们争奇斗艳,竞相开放,而橙子树也忍不住了,抱着一团春天的惊喜,离开了去年的冬天,又重新开起了新一年的希望,重新长起了新的树叶和树枝。在那明媚的阳光下光着绿油油的光。
到了四五月, 橙子树上结出了细细小小的花骨朵,花骨朵绽放开来远远望去一团团,一簇簇藏在枝叶间,洁白洁白的,仿佛就像天上的朵朵白云。但当你走近它,那阵阵香气扑面而来,会使你流连忘返。
十月左右,橙子成熟了,一个个像小皮球那样大,沉甸甸的压弯了树枝。人见人爱。我情不自禁的摘下了一个,剥掉了厚厚的皮,用力的掰开,一瓣一瓣的,像弯弯的月牙,我忍不住诱惑尝了一下酸甜酸甜的。可真好吃啊!橙子的皮还可以做糖呢!
啊!家乡的橙子真让人喜爱呀!
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