一、何为“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”。
很多雅思写作考题的提问方式都是“Do you agree or disagree?”或者“To what extent do you agree or disagree?”。很多刚刚接触雅思的学生甚至是老师认为对于这种提问方式无非就是yes或no两种答案,所以文章的观点也就只能是同意或者不同意了。其实,对于这类提问,也可以采用“折衷”的观点,即“partly agree,partly disagree”(部分同意,部分不同意)。但是前提是一定要在文章中从支持和反对的两方面都阐述一些理由,而且最好再提出一种“折衷”方案。例如,考题问“现在很多人用动物做试验,你同意吗?”,考生可以在文中分别讨论支持和反对动物试验的理由,最后提出动物试验既有好处也有坏处,这就是一种“折衷”观点。除此之外,作者还提出了是否能用动物来做试验主要是取决于试验是否能给人类生活带来显著的改善(比如帮助人类发明治疗Aids的药物),这就属于“折衷”方案。
二、“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”的几种形式。
那么如何提出“折衷观点”呢?“折衷方案”又有哪几种形式呢?下面笔者将对常见的几种安排折衷观点和折衷方案的'形式,结合相应的考题进行总结。
(1) 兴利除弊
“兴利除弊”应该是一种比较简单的折衷方案,在优缺点类文章中特别常用。即在分析完考题所涉及事物的优缺点之后,在结尾段提出“优缺点都有,我们要兴利除弊”这样的折衷方案。例如以下考题:
The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
在讨论完英语作为全球性语言的利与弊之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷观点:
To sum up, it is difficult to tell whether or not the advantages outweigh the disadvantages regarding the spread of English as a global language. What we may have to consider is how to accept this trend as positive while at the same time staying away from its drawbacks.
(2) 平衡发展
很多考题需要考生讨论两种观点,通常会有“discuss both views and give your own opinion”这样的提问要求。很多情况下,文中说到的两种观点表面上看来是完全相反,但其实并不矛盾,可以用“平衡发展”的思路来提出观点。例如考题:
Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
在讨论完发展旅游的必要性和保护文化传统的重要性之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷方案:
We should find the right balance between tourism development and cultural protection and I believe the government has a very important role to play here. In my own country, for example, many tourist cities have made effective development plans to successfully attract large numbers of visitors while still preserving their distinct cultural traditions.
(3) 取决于……
有时在讨论完A和B两种观点以后,可以提出类似于“同意A还是B要取决于……”这样的折衷观点,前文讲到的动物试验是否可以进行取决于试验的性质就是属于这样的方案。再比如下面这个例子:
Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?
在讨论完动物当宠物养的理由和动物当食物吃的理由之后,结尾段可以这样提出观点:
From my point of view, there is no absolute answer as to whether animals should be treated like pets or as sources of food and clothes. It largely depends on what kinds of animals they are. But what remains undoubted is that we should treat animals with a humane attitude and bear in mind that they are important in preserving nature’s ecological equilibrium.
(4) 解决方法
很多双边讨论型文章中所讨论的两种观点其实是可以通过某种方案来“化解矛盾”的,例如这道考题:
In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should wok in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.
在讨论完“支边”的利(缩小城乡差距)与弊(年轻人丧失自由)之后,我们可以提出这样一种解决方案:
The best solution, therefore, is not to order, but to encourage. We should instill a sense of responsibility in young people and give more incentives to those who are willing to work in difficult areas, so that we can address the problem of urban-rural disparity while respecting whatever decisions new teachers or doctors have made.
有些材料不一定新鲜,但如果考生能别出心裁,从另一角度进行开拓,也能提出新的见解、新的观点。运用发散思维,能开拓思路,扩展视野;运用逆向思维,则能推陈出新。2010年高考语文安徽卷作文以诗“交流四水抱城斜,散作千溪遍万家。深处种菱浅种稻,不深不浅种荷花”为材料。可根据的后两句体现“因地制宜”的规律,联想到因人制宜、因事制宜、因文制宜,因国制宜,因楼制宜,因价制宜等。也可从水的角度构思,水抱城郭,深处可种菱,浅出可种稻,不深不浅处可种荷花,无水的岸边可住人家。水有上善之德,泰勒说:“水是万物本源。”水影响了整个生态和世界的变迁,由此还可以联想到一切作为本源的东西,如炎黄、风***、儒家文化圈等。还可从美的`角度立意,本诗用明白简练的语言描绘了吴兴的美景,“美”是从阅读整诗的感受的角度提炼出来的哲理。马克思主义美学观认为“美是主客体的和谐统一”,即“和谐为美”。可以联想五官和谐之美、自然和谐之美、人际和谐之美、国家和谐之美、和谐世界理念。不和谐的是强拆、污染、贸易战争、世界霸权等。
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinionthat
观点1. While others point out that
观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds moreweight. For one thing,
论据1. For another,
论据2. Last but not the least,
论据3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that预测。
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that
观点1. While others point out that
观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing,
论据1. For another,
论据2. Last but not the least,
论据3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
Some people believe (argue, recognize, thinkthat
观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that
观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,
论据1. More importantly,
论据2. Most important of all,
论据3. In summary, 总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
英语作文(2观点论述类
People from differentbackgrounds would put different interpretations on the samecase.
不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towardsthe issue.
这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。
Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It isquite understandable that views on this issue vary from person toperson.
俗话说,""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
To this issue, different people come up with variousattitudes.
对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。
There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goeswithout saying that...
万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。
When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but otherpeople regard ...as ....
提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., butother people think as...
提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则认为_________。
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of ....There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,butpeople who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。
Some people are of the opinion that..
有些人认为_____________。
Many people claim that...
很多人认为_____________。
A majority of 绝大多数
A large number of 很多人
Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages
有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处。
Those who argue for ... say that ...economic development of thecities.
觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。
Some people advocate that ....
有些人在坚持认为_________。
They hold that ... 他们认为_________。
People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons(grounds
坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据。
Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing highpraise of it.
那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。
Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.
强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...
有人会认为___________。
People who support ... give some or all of the followingreasons.
那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。
But others hold the view that ...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。
观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, come up with,setforth, put forward等。
But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people whostrongly advocate that..,.不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。
But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...
不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。
However, there are a large number of people who hold a differentview concerning this case.然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。
问题用词:Issue, phenomenon,后接介词, on, over等。
However, some others argue that... 然而,另一些人则认为_________。
However, there are also some others who contend that...
然而,也有人认为__________。
But other people set forth completely totally different argumentconcerning this case.不过,对于此,另一些人则持完全不同的观点。
Some people examine this issue from another angle.
有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。
On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly...
另一方面,也有很多反对的人,他们认为_____________。
According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer ...rather than...
根据我的.个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。
Personally, I side with the latter (former opinion...
就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者___________。
Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.
就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。
To my point of view 我认为
To my mind, the advantages far overweigh thedrawbacks(disadvantages, shortcomings我认为,优点胜过缺点。
For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..
就我而言,我较赞同后一种观点________________。
As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of thelatter view.
在我看来,我较同意后一种观点。
After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of thelatter view that...
经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即________________________。
If asked to make a decision, I would prefer...
如果真的需要作出选择,我宁愿____________。
展现问题篇
问题的常用词:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of ...... has been brought into publicfocus.
近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities andinnovations, and great changes
have taken place in people’sattitude towards some traditional practice.
现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。
Recently the issue of whether or not ... has been in thelimelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.
近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
The issue whether it is good or not to .... has aroused a heateddiscussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
At present, some people think ....while others claim ...Bothsides have their merits.
目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种观点都其可取之处。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversialissue.
对于这种极具争议的话题,我们很难作出绝对的回答。
People from different backgrounds would put differentinterpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towardsthe issue.
这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。
Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It isquite understandable that views on this issue vary from person toperson.
俗话说,""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
To this issue, different people come up with variousattitudes.
对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。
There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goeswithout saying that...
万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。
When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but otherpeople regard ...as ....
提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., butother people think as...
提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则认为_________。
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of ....There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,butpeople who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。
Some people are of the opinion that..
有些人认为_____________。
Many people claim that...
很多人认为_____________。
A majority of 绝大多数
A large number of 很多人
Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages
有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处。
Those who argue for ... say that ...economic development of thecities.
觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。
Some people advocate that ....
有些人在坚持认为_________。
They hold that ... 他们认为_________。
People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons(grounds
坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据。
Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing highpraise of it.
那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。
Those who strongly approve of ... have cogent reasons for it.
强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...
有人会认为___________。
People who support ... give some or all of the followingreasons.
那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。
But others hold the view that ...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。
观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, come up with,setforth, put forward等。
But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people whostrongly advocate that..,.不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。
But people who are ..., on the other hand , maintain that...
不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。
However, there are a large number of people who hold a differentview concerning this case.然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。
问题用词:Issue, phenomenon,后接介词, on, over等。
However, some others argue that... 然而,另一些人则认为_________。
However, there are also some others who contend that...
然而,也有人认为__________。
But other people set forth completely totally different argumentconcerning this case.不过,对于此,另一些人则持完全不同的观点。
Some people examine this issue from another angle.
有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。
On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly...
另一方面,也有很多反对的人,他们认为_____________。
According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer ...rather than...
根据我的个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。
Personally, I side with the latter (former opinion...
就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者___________。
Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.
就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。
To my point of view 我认为
To my mind, the advantages far overweigh thedrawbacks(disadvantages, shortcomings我认为,优点胜过缺点。
For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..
就我而言,我较赞同后一种观点________________。
As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of thelatter view.
在我看来,我较同意后一种观点。 After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of thelatter view that... 经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即________________________。 If asked to make a decision, I would prefer... 如果真的需要作出选择,我宁愿____________。
事物的存在往往有两面甚至多面性,应把这些面都挖掘出来,去粗取精,把握其精髓,让自己的思辨充满着智慧的光辉。不能停留在事物的表面打转,要学会从不同的角度对事理进行剖析和挖掘。如2010年高考语文天津卷作文“我生活的世界”,考生可以从自己熟悉的世界出发,写观察到的世界,体味到的人间真情,领悟到的人生真谛,展示出审美情趣和思想个性。考生可以鸟瞰波澜壮阔的时代,也可以聚焦身边的凡人小事;可以写物质世界的丰富,也可以写精神文明的进步;可以写国家的发展、家乡的变迁,也可以写亲人的温暖、校园的苦乐;可以写实实在在的人生,也可以写虚拟的网络世界;可以写世界对我的影响,也可以写我对世界的责任……大处着眼,可以写得深刻开阔;小处落笔,可以写得细腻感人。再如,2010年高考语文北京卷作文“仰望星空与脚踏实地”,这里的“星空”不是实指,而是虚指,它可以是未来和理想,也可以是愿望与憧憬;“脚踏实地”是要从脚下做起,踏实认真地做好每一件事情,包括学习、生活、工作等。这个题目可以看作“理想与现实”。
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