现象时评类作文题目【一】
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1．学生给老师打分已很普遍；
2．人们对其持不同态度（肯定或否定的态度）；
3．你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然，此任务是写一篇议论文，主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论，开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况，从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活，但有一定的语言难度，也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作，也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下，也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙，写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时，也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思，学会换位思考，这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确，赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师，就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样，不仅对学生、学校有利，而且对老师本人也有利。这样，老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己，看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可，这将是对自己的一次鼓励，为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高，老师就应进行反思，调控教学方法和教学态度。这样，教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据，内容充实，贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用，是短文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式，给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下：
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ；Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象，然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响，最后提出解决问题的办法，或者得出结论，或者提出个人看法，或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张，论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多，但最常用的是因果分析法。即：分析事实与论点的因果关系，指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点，从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中，议论文的比重占得越来越多，议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型，但文体实际是议论文，而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是：
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间，上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作，请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文，列举吸烟的危害，并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来，越来越多的中学生出国学习，出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
1）良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。
2）拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。
3）传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇：媒介，中间人：mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study．Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad．First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods．Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展，道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解，谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
现象时评类作文题目【二】
根据美国詹森太空中心泰勒博士1974年的报告，1969年降 落月球的《阿波罗12号》太空船，所收回两年半前无人探 测船《观察家三号》留置月球上的相机底部，竟然发现含 有地球上的微生物《缓症链球菌》。也就是说：来自地球 的微生物，在几近真空、充满宇宙线的月球表面生存了两 年半!这真是令人意外而吃惊的事，月球经由人类太空船 多次的登陆探测，可能早已散播许多微生物在上面了，从 此事以后应要改口月球上毫无生命的说法了。如根据《神 秘的月球计划」一书及 吕应钟先生《月球是外星人制造的》一文的研究与说法，月球上已早有了生命，而且是比 人类还高智慧的外星生命，也说不定!
现象时评类作文题目【三】
科学家利用模拟宇宙环境的实验，得知如《枯草 菌》、《黑麴菌》、《芒氏梭菌》等微生物，能长时间生存於宇 宙中。荷兰来登大学以枯草 菌孢子实验，在照射相当於 1000年放射线剂量的紫外线，结果仍有0.1%的存活率。德 国的多赛博士发现某种微生物能在超真空环境中生存达数 月之久。在浩瀚的宇宙中，也许也有这些生命顽强的生物 ，正在随着宇宙灰尘或慧星等在太空四处流窜，也许是地 球的生物飘向宇宙深处，也许是外太空的生物已悄悄的降 临地球，有人说爱滋病的病毒可能就是从外太空来的。所 以美国太空总署对回返地球的太空船与人，都要实施太空 防疫捡查。
现象时评类作文题目【四】
地球就像一个大温室，培育了千万种的动植物，依赖着大 气层的保护，内有充足的日光、空气、水及适宜的气候， 不断的适应各种环境而繁绵生长。如果离开这个温室，这 些生物还能生存吗?一般人总认为，离开地球在太空中或 月亮上，压力极低、温差又大，几乎没有空气与水份，而 且还充满各种宇宙线，在这种环境之下，应该没有任何生 物能够生存，而事实确证明我们错了! 其实在恶劣的环境中地球生物还能生存，这在地球上一些特殊而不适合生物 生存的环境中，却也常发现一些能适应的生物。例如在释出强烈辐射线的原子炉内，也可以发现有微生物。1977年 法国科学家在太平洋3000米深处，在水温高达 250度的热 泉口，发现红鱼、螃蟹、白蛤类等数种生物。而在南极极 冷的冰块中，也可以发现嗜寒菌。由此可见生命力是非常 的顽强，在各种恶劣环境之下，仍有能适应的生物。这给 我们很重要的启示，我们不能以狭隘的角度来观察所有的生命现象。
现象时评类作文题目【五】
北极光是一个非常神奇的自然现象。它出现于星球北极的高磁纬地区上空的一种绚丽多彩的发光现象。
北极光的成因一直众说纷纭，有人认为：它是地球外缘燃烧的大火;有人则认为，它是夕阳西沉后，天际映射出来的光芒;还有人认为，它是北极圈的冰雪在白天吸收储存阳光之后，夜晚释放出来的一种能量。这天象之谜，直到人类将卫星火箭送上太空之后，才有了物理性、合理性的解释。从本质上来说，极光是原子与分子在地球大气层最上层《距离地面100-200公里处的高空》运作激发的光学现象。它的形成有三大要素：太阳风、地球磁场、大气。所谓“太阳风”，是太阳对北极光宇宙不断放射的一种能量，它是由电子与质子所组成。由于太阳的激烈活动，放射出无数的'带电微粒，当带电微粒流射向地球进入地球磁场的作用范围时，受地球磁场的影响，便沿着地球磁力线高速进入到南北磁极附近的高层大气中，与氧原子、氮分子等质点碰撞，因而产生了“电磁风暴”和“可见光”的现象，就成了众所瞩目的“北极光”。
这就是北极光的原理，是不是非常神奇呢?
现象时评类作文题目【六】
1957年苏联在西伯利亚冻土层发现二千多年前的活蚯蚓十 八条。北爱尔兰地区有一种蛇，冬天被冻成冰棍，老人捡 来做手杖，妇女把它们做门帘挡风雪，当春天来临，冰消 雪融，它们苏醒后就溜的无影无踪了。我们对这些纵贯古 今的生命保持方法，还没有寻求到解答，但藉由科学的逐 渐发展，人类已能利用冷冻技术，把单细胞的受精卵做半 永久性的保存。要保存多细胞的复合组织，可就困难多了 ，只能维持三到四个星期。若要把整个身体均匀冷冻，毫 发无伤地长期保存，目前仍然做不到。虽然如此，已有许 多人为追求生命的延续，而加入美国亚尔柯生命延长基金 会，该会把已经死亡的会员 体冷冻保存起来，寄望未来 较进步的医学使其复活。在电影里我们也常见在太空中旅 行的太空人，需要藉由身体的冷藏来消磨漫长的太空旅程 及节省食物。这虽然是科幻情节，但随着科技的发展，也 许将来真的就是如此!
