Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn't afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people's clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can't provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
夏同学,来我们培训点以前在多家知名培训机构培训过,但效果不好,害怕数学,培优作业没法完成,在班级数学考试排名靠后,家长害怕开家长会,来到我们这儿后,很喜欢这儿的课,尽管也有困难,但在老师的鼓励和帮助下坚持了下来,到现在已经完全变了一个人似的,不仅在班上名列前茅,而且完全超过了以前比她培优成绩好许多的同学。
刘同学,和夏同学情况差不多,来这儿后,由原来在校培优班排40名,到现在排前十名。他妈妈高兴的说,原来看着他就烦,现在越看越喜欢,杨老师您真是神啊。
周同学,明星B班没考上来我这儿,现在希望杯离一等奖差一分,华杯赛和新苗杯拿二等奖。
王同学,以前培优一直没起色,来这儿后由班上中等生进步到现在稳居班级前十名,年级前60名。
以上例子在我们这儿还有许多,几乎每个学生都是一个进步的案例。他们成功都有一个共同之处,那就是家长的支持和坚持。也有少数中途没坚持下来的,或者是失之交臂的,但现在看来他们应该是后悔的。而我也只能为孩子们感到惋惜。
希望以上的见解,对您的孩子有所帮助。
2.文句短。长句表意丰富,含蓄蕴藉,行文舒缓,给人严谨缜密之感。然而,无深厚的文字功底,加之时的思想紧张,句子一长,极易顾此失彼,造成病句。短句构建快捷,简洁明了,凝练生动,写之顺畅,读之清楚。因此,应力求多用短句,少用长句,长短结合,参差错落。
3.段落短。行文分段不宜太长,段落短小,层次分明,条理清楚,文思脉络显而易见。长段大段,组织不当,便有内容庞杂,冗长累赘,思绪紊乱之嫌。写时尤须力戒“三大段”,防止中间一段连篇累牍,又胖又长,如猪之肥腹,有失雅观。
4.结尾短,范文《议论文点评短语》。抒情怀、凸旨意,不枝枝蔓蔓,不拖泥带水,不画蛇添足,干净利落,戛然而止,余韵悠然。
5.篇幅短。大家知道,中考阅卷正值炎热天气,阅卷工作量大,且有规定的时间,既紧张又辛苦,“鸿篇巨制”显然是不合适宜、不受欢迎的。短小精悍才是选择的上策。当然,通常中考大多都有字数限制,一般在600字左右,写时自然必须按要求去做,但是如果不加控制,过度增字加长,一发而不可收,以致成了“老太婆的裹脚布——又臭又长”,势必让人反感。
6.议论短。议论有画龙点睛之功效。或述感怀或表见解,或评或论,析事剖理,闪金铄玉,当精粹简练,要言不烦,切莫又多又滥。
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