Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
“听说华侨公园有火龙表演了!”我兴冲冲地告诉了妈妈。
星期五的晚上,我们沐浴着夏夜的凉风,走进了傍海的华侨公园。只见一条几十米长的“巨龙”盘旋在宽阔的大地上,花团锦簇,巨龙身上扎着墨绿色的树叶,正昂首阔视,好不威风。“这就是火龙吗?”我好奇地问。妈妈摇摇头。
“亲爱的观众朋友,火龙表演就要开始了!”我们连忙随着喇叭的声音来到了公园右侧的一处灯火通明的空地上。
柔美的古筝声静静地在夜里流淌着,十几个身强力壮的小伙子头绑着白色的头巾,赤裸着上身,露出结实健美的肌肉,穿着一件黄色的镶金丝裤腿的龙裤,举着一条五十多米长的金光闪闪的“龙”,显得英姿飒爽。人们迅速占据了整个场子。
旋律突然改变,密集的鼓点响了起来,灯火通明的场子一下子全黑了。领舞人手执龙珠棒,跑动起来。小伙子们举着长龙跟着飞跑起来,“龙”便在场子上空蜿蜒盘旋起来。跑着跑着,长龙身上突然放射出夺目的亮光, 璀璨的烟花霎那间“噼哩啪啦”地响了起来,五颜六色的烟花开放在漆黑的夜空中,照亮了龙下小伙子们英俊的脸。这情景美极了!
音乐不时地变幻着旋律,时而激越,时而舒缓,时而密密集集,如出征的战马,时而丁丁冬冬,如静静流淌的泉水。烟花不时地跳跃,变化出各种奇形怪状的图案:五角星、珊瑚、麦穗、大菊花……整条龙也“活”了起来,浑身冒着火焰,熠熠生辉,腾空飞越,一会儿呼啸而来,一会儿俯地而去,一会儿弯弯曲曲,一会儿舒展拉长……热切的欢呼声、口哨声淹没了音乐,整个广场变成了沸腾的世界,人们的情怀被狂舞的“火龙”点燃了,正忘乎所以地欢呼……
咚、咚咚……鼓声敲得更激越了,烟花“一飞冲天”,串串礼花在半空中绽放,火龙神采奕奕、闪闪发光,整个夜空,礼花朵朵,五彩缤纷,百媚千红,鞭炮声、感叹声此起彼伏、不绝于耳……
灯突然亮了,音乐停了。我们仿佛从梦中醒来……
这是一个古老的故事…
在恐龙时代,恐龙妈妈生了一个小宝宝,当时乌云遍布,雨下得很大,大家都说这个孩子会带来恶运。恐龙妈妈不相信,怕小火龙受到大家的鄙视,就带他和其他孩子一起离开了这个地方。
已经到晚上了,恐龙妈妈和孩子们还没找到空余的山洞,他们冷得直哆嗦,但仍然坚持继续找山洞。终于,恐龙妈妈和孩子们找到了一个空荡荡山洞。他们终于可以踏踏实实的睡上一觉了。
早上了,恐龙妈妈出去寻找猎物了。忽然,小火龙醒了,吐出了第一团火,小伙伴们都吓坏了。等到恐龙妈妈回来的时候,小火龙早已不见了。
恐龙妈妈非常焦急,安排一个最有能力的的小恐龙来管理其他的小恐龙们,恐龙妈妈飞快的跑去山洞外面寻找小火龙,而小火龙早已去了远方。
恐龙妈妈在路上的时候不幸遇到了可怕的霸王龙,霸王龙一口把她吞掉了,从此,小恐龙们没了妈妈。
小火龙已经到了火龙家族,火龙家族看小火龙会喷火,就接受了小火龙来到火龙家族,他们火龙家族有一种风俗,只要火龙国王没有继承人,第一个来到火龙家族的外来人就会继承王位。
小火龙不知道他们的风俗,竟然无意间当上了火龙家族的国王,他才不到十岁啊!
自从小火龙当上了火龙国王以后,虽然地位不同,可是还是会想念自己的亲人啊!小火龙派人去那个山洞,却发现那里只有几个兄弟姐妹,而妈妈却不见了。小火龙急忙去寻找妈妈。后来才得知妈妈已经离开了这个世界。
这就是那个古老的故事,它告诉我们要和亲人相亲相爱。
星期六的傍晚,我和爸爸一起到动物园去参观珍稀动物展。动物园里面展示着龟,蛇,鼠等许多动物。我最感兴趣的是一对变色龙,它趴在树上一动不能,全身的颜色和树***颜色一样。我正仔细看着它,突然,变色龙开始向树叶丛中爬去,只见它进入绿色树叶丛中的头,颈,前足依次慢慢由浅黄褐色变成各树叶一样的绿色,当它全身进入树叶丛里,它的整个身子也变成绿色的了,如果你不仔仔细细的观察,你是不会发现在树叶丛的它。好奇怪啊!它的身子怎么会变色呢?
带着这个问题,我上网查阅了资料。原来变色龙的皮肤能随着背景,温度的变化,也能随着心情的变化而变化。变色龙是一种“善变”的树栖行动物,在自然界中它是当之无愧的“伪装高手”,为了逃避天敌的侵犯和接近猎物,天长日久,这种动物不经意间有了改变自己身体颜色,把自己融入到周围环境中的本领。
从变色龙的本领上我想到发明变色衣。这种衣服能随着人的心情而变化,如果你高兴,它就变成红色的,如果你不高兴,它就会变成黑色的。这种衣服也可以随着周围的环境来变色,就看你需要它展现哪种本领了。有了这种衣服,以后,如果有别的国家胆敢来侵略我们的国家,我们的军队就穿上这种变色衣,就能轻而易举地将侵略者全部消灭。
大自然真是人类的好老师,我要仔细观察身边的事物,做出更多的发明。
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
今天上午,我和妈妈,还有笑笑妹妹和姨妈一起去戚城公园的历史陈列馆参观中华第一龙,有一位阿姨给我们讲解了中华第一龙的历史。
我看到第一个墓坑里有墓主人、一条龙还有一只虎,阿姨说那叫左青龙右白虎;第二个墓坑里有虎、龙还有一只鹿,阿姨说这是一种祭祀活动;第三个墓坑里有一只奔跑的虎还有一个人骑着龙飞天,阿姨说这叫奔虎和骑龙飞天,这里除了墓主人的骨头,其他的都是用蚌壳做的,阿姨说这里的墓主人可能是一位皇帝。我还看到一个椭圆形的屋顶,上面有北斗七星和很多星座,就像晚上的天空一样,很漂亮。
为什么它叫中华第一龙呢?因为它是我中国发现最早的龙,距今有6000多年了,又因为它是在濮阳发现的,所以濮阳又叫龙乡濮阳。
一天,怀胎20个月的母恐龙突然肚子疼了起来。原来,她要生宝宝了。经过母龙的努力,终于生出了一颗蛋,样子奇丑无比。可母龙依然精心地呵护着;而公龙依然出去寻找食物。
“吼~~”一只霸王龙冲到树林里寻找食物,许多恐龙惊慌失措,赶紧躲开。可那只母龙依然纹丝不动,坐在窝中孵化。她知道:如果自己离开,龙蛋必定会成为霸王龙的美餐。于是,她闭上了眼睛……霸龙发现了这只母恐龙,欣喜万分,馋得口水直流:“啊!饿了三天,今天我终于可以饱餐一顿了!”正当霸王龙扑向母龙时,突然,从林中窜出一只公龙,与霸王龙奋力抗争。霸王龙被打得遍体鳞伤,以血洗面,带着伤慌忙逃窜。
“科~~”出来了,龙蛋里的小龙孵出来了。
公龙倒了,但脸上却露着最灿烂的笑容。母龙悲痛万分,小龙抱终天之恨,一想到父亲,便以泪洗面!他决定要找到霸王龙,报***父之仇。小龙拜别母亲,跋山涉水,风餐露宿,历尽千辛万苦,终于找到霸王龙,使出全身的力气拼***, “啊~”霸王龙在一声惨叫中结束了生命。从此,森林中又少了一个为非作歹、仗势欺人的恐龙。回到家,小龙的英雄事迹传遍了整个森林,众恐龙们便拥戴他为“恐龙之首”。在小龙的领导下,恐龙家族过着幸福、安宁的生活。
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