怎样观察生活,对初一学生来讲,是个难题。作家艾芜在指导初学写作的同志时说:“要练习我们的眼睛,善于观察人的动作、态度和表情。练习我们的耳朵,善于听取别人讲话的语句、声调和他的特殊用语。”这就是说,观察生活,一是要看,二是要听。
初一学生天真活泼,好奇心强,富于激情,乐于参加活动。尤其是他们刚进入中学的时候,想了解中学的校史、设施,特别是很想了解老师和同学。抓住他们这 一心理特点,开学不久,我就让他们自选一位任课教师作为观察对象。观察的内容是:年龄、性别、身高、体型、脸型、肤色、发型、衣着打扮(颜色、款式、质 地)、表情,特别是眼神,以及老师上课的`语言和动作等。观察的时间是四个星期。对观察的要求是:
第一,要抓住人物的特征。人物的外貌、性格、感情各不相同。只有抓住观察对象的与众不同之处,才能写出人物的个性,才能避免“千人一面”的弊端。
第二,观察要细致。所谓细致,不是说在观察人物时不分主次,而是要发现观察对象与别人不同的细微之处。不同性格的人,说话、做事时的表现是不同的。人 物的一个动作,一丝微笑,往往带有性格化的特征。所以,观察必须细致入微。观察得越细致、越深入,印象就越清晰,理解就更深刻,描述就更具体、更生动形 象。
第三,比较观察。有比较才有鉴别。比较的目的是求异。在观察时,要抓住老师在各种情形下所表现出来的不同特征,即生气时、高兴时、严肃时……言谈举止和精神状态的不同点。这样,才能使人物形象跃然纸上。
四个星期后,每个学生都按要求写了观察笔记。写作之前,我再次强调,描写必须突出人物特征,不要求面面俱到。在我的指导下,大多数学生的作文,对老师的描写颇为生动逼真。
例如盘云珍同学,在描写数学李老师的外貌时,突出了老师眉毛和眼睛的特征。她是这样描写的:“他的眉毛非常黑,长得像两个锐角三角形,挺有个性。眼睛 不大,可很有神。”她在写李老师上课时,突出了“教学有方”的特点。文中写道:“每当我们上数学课时,班上总是很活跃,时时传出爽朗的笑声。最有趣的是提 问。李老师叫同学回答问题时,嘴角总是微微向上翘,流露出一丝笑意。有的同学答错了,一见老师的表情,以为自己答得挺不错,竟很得意,就稀里糊涂地说起 来,惹得大家哄堂大笑。有的同学答对了,李老师反会问上一句:‘对吗?’这个同学也就犹豫起来。在这种情况下,李老师就会让同学们互相讨论,最后他才把正 确答案告诉我们。这样,既能让我们认真思考、活跃思维,又能使我们对所学的概念有了深刻的理解。”这篇作文之所以写得成功,关键是观察的细致。
为了进一步调动学生写作的积极性,巩固在观察中的收获,我要生认真总结观察的过程和。盘云珍同学总结道:“我是数学课代表,与李老师接触得 多,我不放过每一次见面的机会,认真观察他的外貌,我发现他的眉毛很有特色。他给我的主要感受就是提问时很有趣。所以上课时,我就仔细观察他提问时的神 态、说话的语气、语调以及动作上的一些特点。如果我不用心观察,就无法获得具体的感受与认识,也就不能把人物的外貌及性格特征真切地表现出来。”通过这次 作文,同学们都尝到了观察的甜头,作文时再不愁没有可写的了。
Dear Headmaster,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature's beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What's more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand,30% don't like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
Yours truly
Li Hua
尊敬的校长,
我写信告诉你关于学校是否应该组织一次春季郊游的讨论。
对问题的看法有如下:70%的学生认为学校应该组织“春季郊游”。他们认为,春季郊游可以使他们享受大自然的美丽的风景,它可以扩大我们的视野,使我们更多的知识。他们还说,在空旷的.田野的空气很清新。更新鲜的空气对我们的健康有很大的健康。
另一方面,30%不喜欢外出郊游的想法。在他们的观点中,时间是非常宝贵的,所以他们要抓紧每一分的努力,在他们的课程中努力学习。旅游成本很多。在这种情况下,它会增加他们家庭的负担。首先,没有人能确保每个学生的安全。
你真正的
李华
In recent years, tourism has developed rapidly in China. Many people believe that tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and we should try our best to promote tourism. But what these people fail to see is that tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment. As for me, I'm firmly convinced that too much tourists bring harm to the environment.
The bad impact of tourism on the environment has mainly expressed itself in various ways. One way is the proceof exploiting a new scenic spot. In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment. This proceusually breaks the ecological balance of the area. In some mountainous places, trees are being cut down to build hotels for others to see and explore the beauty of the mountains. Then land slides and mud-rock flows come up. Another way the development of tourism has damaged the environment occurs when tourists go to scenic spots. Some tourists don't have the awareneto protect the environment, and ignorantly throw their garbage here and there. Some people even kill the local wildlife to eat, which badly damages the balance of the natural environment.
It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. We must keep in mind that too much tourists bring harm to the environment. We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing to a minimum the pollution they cause.
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Tourism has developed by leaps and bounds in the past de
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Tourism has developed by leaps and bounds in the past decades in the whole world. Therefore, the issue of whether the tourism will bring harm to the environment is becoming a matter of concern. As for me, I hold that the tourism does more harm than good to the world. In the first place, the more places we travel to , the more pressure will be added to the environment. Take Dunhuang as an example, the greatest scourge these days comes from the tourists who swarm here by the busload , bring destructive amounts of carbon dioxide and moisture into the caves along with their eagernefor a glimpse of ages past . Secondly, It has become fashionable for travelers to drive a private car to the place they want to . In this case ,a large number of cars are mushroomed in the road and it cause twice as much as air pollution .At this speed ,we may live in a world which is full of dirty air instead of fresh air. In sum , although tourism is playing an indispensable we`d better try to limit role in the society , I still believe that its speed according to the harm that brings to the environment.
The world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction. Bird flu and Sars are two typical examples that environmental destruction may threaten our life. Besides, forest destruction , water and air pollution result in decrease of planting land and unpleasant weather.
Serious as the problem seems, we can come up with some measures to deal with it. First of all, the authorities should adopt the policy of "sustainable development", and laws concerning environmental protection should be put into effect and enforced strictly just as our government has been doing.
What' s more, every citizen should realize the seriousneof the problem and make concerted efforts to protect our environment. In addition, planting trees helps improve and beautify the environment.
In recent years, tourism has been popular and played an important role in our nation’s economic growth. However, I am afraid that if tourism develops over, it will bring harm to the environment and give rise to many problems.
There are a few reasons accounting for my views and I would like to list three of them. One of the examples is that a large number of woods and other plants were replaced by all kinds of accommodation facilities or scenic spots. That definitely breaks the ecological balance of these areas and destroys the natural beauty of the scenic spots. Worse still, more pressure has been placed environment protection in that many tourists left their garbage in the scenic spots. In addition, over-developed tourism will occupy large numbers of farmland and lead to the shortage of the land.
In a word, tourism will be harmful to our environment if it is over development. Thus, I do not advocate that we development tourism without considering the environment. And we should keep the balance between tourism development and environment protection so that we can achieve the sustainable development between our nation’s economy and the environment.
Up a slightly-left-of-center masterpiece. The emotional impact of the beautiful, wordless summation of Carls life that opens the movie the bass note that resonates through the whole film and at least as affecting as the scene in Wall-E when he holds h own hands while watching Hello Dolly. The rest of the movie, of course, breathtaking on just about every level, especially the tactile quality of all the characters and textures and the completely realized weather effects and action scenes. With no "new" technical milestones (fur in Monsters, Inc., water in Finding Nemo, realtic camera effects in Wall- E, the design the main focus, from the hilariously stylized characters to the amazing setting of the tepui.
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This summer my sister and I follow my mother to travel to the United States, we went to the three cities and one island, San Francisco, Los Angeles, Las Vegas, and Hawaii.
Hawaii is my favorite, although only two days, but I went to the beach for several times, is the famous waikiki beach, listening to the tour guide said where the sand came from Australia, where the water is clear, the sand is very clean, when I was in the sea waves to see the small fish, I also into base sand castle on the sand beach, made apple mould sand, crabs, bottle gourd, the shape of a fish, I also want to go to the seaside.
When holiday comes, thousands of people pour into the tourist sites, they want to relax themselves and enjoy the beautiful scenery. But Chinese people have a bad habit, they like to leave some notes on the site, proving them have been here before. Such a behavior has been criticized by the public, because the leaving note will damage the preservation of the tourist site. Most of the tourist sites are part of our country's historical relics, these sites are priceless, it is everyone's duty to protect the sites. When we go to travel, we should behave ourselves. First, we need to have the idea that no rubbish being leaved behind when we leave the site. We should take away what we bring, keep the environment clean. Second, no any notes being written in the sites. Though in the old days, Chinese workers like to leave their names on the sites, but now it is a new world, we need to behave ourselves.
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