四级如何备战作文【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级如何备战作文【二】
一、美丽的高速，六安到潜山，一路欣赏大别山区美丽的景色。从六安下高速到叶集上高速，中间走了一段大建设的路，颠颠簸簸一个小时，震撼。期间，车上有五人全程打牌，里面有一个我，还有几个都是老牌手。因六潜高速通车时间较短，无在建服务区，在一紧急停车带上，一车人集体在路边上厕所，甚是壮观；还有两兄弟遥望青山抽支烟，甚是忧郁！~
二、热情的阜阳。六个支行，一个支行对接一个分行足球队，科技支行徐行长亲自安排车到高速路口接车，然后安排入住白金汉宫酒店，期间我们去了球场熟悉一下场地，然后坐50分钟的车去阜阳黄龙山庄吃招待晚宴，第一次看到上半个猪头的，猪头肉很烂，我就着馒头吃了好几块；第一次吃到那么甜的西瓜，山庄自己重的.生态瓜，绝对的经典；晚宴没喝酒，主要备战比赛。期间，每日徐行长安排同事全程陪同，甚是感动！~
三、激烈的比赛。我们与总行机关、合肥、阜阳一组，三场比赛下来，我们与合肥淘汰；总行机关与阜阳晋级。实力摆在那，我们淘汰属于正常。总行的夏总人很和蔼，是个很有修养的领导；阜阳分行真能拼，2号、3号、6号、10号都很强；合肥分行很霸气，其中最后一场对我们队场面相当火爆，总行工会范主席两次终止比赛，找双方球员谈话；那么裁判很二，大家都说我们吃了黑哨，甚是郁闷！~
四、孤单的身影。尽管输了，我们还是和合肥队握手、还是和总行机关、阜阳打招呼。“回家了”三个字包含着太多的不舍与无奈，我站在场边，看着即将进场的另外两个队，久久不愿离去。一个小男孩给我递来一瓶水，“叔叔，喝水”。夏总拍拍我的肩膀，“以后还有机会的”。眼睛全红了，我发短信给群，“我害怕失败，而且我想带着一场胜利回去”，可结果摆在那，很多时候事实不相信眼泪。“你不受伤回来就是最好的礼物”。
五、开心的午宴。中午，科技支行请吃饭，上了白酒、啤酒、饮料，一开始大家都没怎么喝，后来听说阜阳和总行机关晋级了，大家特高兴，很多原因，一下子喝开了，其中小左取代我成为全场表现最佳，这两天他比赛的压力最大，估计喝了一斤；乐辉表现出众，4两的杯子喝了两杯，教练和领队也都喝了。我因为前期得到指示，只是开头凶了一点，大概一共三两酒。带血的牛肉一口吃下去的感觉，爽！·
六、轻松的回程。没有的比赛，没有了结果，剩下的就是——回家。一路上，我让驾驶员特地放了刘若英的《很爱很爱你》，那个时候，我看到好几个队友都在发短信，也包括我。回去路上打牌的还是五个人，没有我。小左和乐辉一路睡觉，从阜阳到合肥到安庆，路途近了不少，晚上七点半准时到安庆。期间，每过一个服务区都会有人吵着上厕所，一个争吵集体下车，甚是壮观。
美丽的足球！
