四级作文考了哪些书信【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文考了哪些书信【二】
章老师：
你好!
章老师，我是你的学生林姝琪!
虽然我不是1年级就在这里读，而是4年级转来的，但您在我的心里又值得让我尊敬又值得让我害怕和恐惧!
在我四年级转来的时候，当我看见您，我就想见到了怪兽一样——您在那里气势汹汹的打骂男同学，好似发怒的狮子一般，险些把我的魂都给吓没了，从那以后，我就非常害怕你，害怕你打我，或者是害怕你骂我.....总之就是对您有一种恐惧。每当我见到其他的同学总爱跟你开玩笑，您就好像回到了童年，那样阳光灿烂。可是有时候你跟我说话，一般都是批评我，所以现在我总想着跟你保持一定的距离性。
尤其是数学课上，我就仿佛进入了“噩梦”一般，你就想“魔鬼教授”，那黑板就像是您整人的工具。叫通分的时候，你还没有把怎样通分的道理告诉我们，而是说：“你们自己好好复习，等一下我要情人上来通分，你们好自为之，自求多福吧!.......开始报名了，我就像缩头乌龟一样，静静的趴在那里，生怕老师会叫道我的名字，可是老天太不给面子了，最终还是报道我的名字了，我胆怯的走上讲台，在那里不动声色的拿着粉笔头，不知该如何是好.....
但是，记得又一次数学考试的时候，我有些题目不会，也有些题目由于没有时间，好多地方都是空白，如同一张白纸，干干净净!到最后发试卷的时候，我的分数惨不忍睹，都不敢拿出来看，自己都觉得羞愧。中午，我早早的来到教室，把数学作业改好后，你就叫我拿着自己的板凳，蹲在讲台边，订正试卷。你那时候在我眼中，我无法用文字准确形容您当时候的表情，说慈祥吧，你又显得那样凶恶，总之，凭几个词句是不能概括出老师您的表情。
您在那里细心的指导我订正作业，我也听得十分的专心，最终，功夫不负有心人，我订正完了。然后您语重心长的对我说：“这些题目你只要认真去想，没有什么不会做的，你看，当才你认真去想，不都做出来了，不至于考那么差的分数吧，你就是不肯动脑子去想，其实这些题目也并没有那么难，是不是?我微微的点了点头，泪水不禁潸然泪下，出乎我的意料，你见我哭了，用手帮我擦掉眼泪，温和的对我说;“好了不哭了，你以后得帮试卷写完听到没有，哪怕不会写.......
章老师，您是那样的慈祥有那么的值得我后怕!
最后祝老师事事如意，事业一帆风顺!
你的学生：林**
20**年5月8日
四级作文考了哪些书信【三】
崔老师：
对于我们来说，最重要的任务是学习。那么，在我们的学习中，是谁在默默无闻为我们地付出着？是与我们朝夕相处的老师！在我的记忆中，每位老师都是那么和蔼。他们总是那么循循善诱地对待我们的学习，一丝不苟地对待自己的工作。老师的一生，都奉献给了讲台……老师，如同自己的亲生母亲，当我们装着沉甸甸的丰收果实再来向老师吸取知识时，对老师又增添了一份崇拜。我们的童年乃至青年都是在老师的哺育下度过的。老师给新一代的人才指点迷津，使我们学会如何学习，如何珍惜生命。我要感谢你！我亲爱的崔老师！
您的课堂总是最有趣的，您在课堂中总会给我们讲一个个引人入胜的故事，让我们的心灵神游在您美妙的\'语言间；您的课堂是浮想联翩的您总能牢牢抓住我们的注意力，让课堂充满生机，您每次上课都会讲一个个幽默的故事，让我们在充满欢乐的海洋里上每一节课。您的语言是最生动的总能让我们哈哈大笑。您就是这样一个有趣的老师！
您是一位极会鼓励学生的老师！那次学校举行乐器比赛，我只是抱着试一试的心态来参加这次比赛的。虽然我并没有吹得很好，但您却当着全班同学的面郑重的鼓励了我：“吹得很不错我要感谢你给我带来这么美妙的琴声和这么美妙的感受！”这点点的鼓励在我心中激起了巨大的波澜，我想我一定要吹出更美妙的琴声这样才能报答老师的这些鼓励呀！
您的教学方式也令我十分佩服，有一次我犯了错您让我抄课文，我在抄的同时也在反思自己的错误，也对我所犯下错误有了一个更深刻的检讨。到放学了您看过我写抄的课文。在上面批拉个大大的奖字，就让我回家了。您这种“惩罚”不但能让我们反思到自己的错误和不足，还能让我不收到体罚。
没有阳光，就没有万物的生长；没有雨露，就没有百花的芳香；没有父母，就没有我们的生命；但如果没有老师的教诲，就没有我们的进步和成长，所以，我要感谢您。
祝！
身体健康万事如意！
四级作文考了哪些书信【四】
亲爱的爸爸：
您好！
爸爸，您是一位老烟民，您抽烟已经几年的历史了。请您不要再抽烟了，抽烟会对您的身体有害，对妈妈、我和哥哥都有伤害。
爸爸，您也照过镜子吧，你的牙齿都变黑了。你的手指也变黄了，请您不要再抽烟了。我还在电脑上看见一张照片，他的肺被香烟都熏黑了，真可怕。这段时间，我老听你在咳嗽，还不时地吐痰。这都是烟害的呀！爸爸你知道吗，每次听到您的咳嗽声，我就特别难过。我多么希望您健康啊。记得有一次，妈妈就让我去叫您吃饭，我推门一看，您在房间里一边工作一边吞云吐雾，房间里烟雾腾腾，我忍不住地咳嗽了起来。
爸爸，抽烟有这么多的危害，请您不要再抽烟了。
女儿：XX
